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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 87
Such an emotionally touching one...I don't know I just lived the way Rishabh kept a watch on Madhu !! He is internalizing his pain, framing himself guilty for Madhu's condition and Madhu's distressed situation all clearly shows the after effects of such a disaster.
The for-so-long awaited dad and son's important talk is also a kind of breather..it shows that Kundra family will be together like a normal family and will fight together against any kind of situation
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Posted: 12 years ago
So finaly rishab could come to terms that he's not guilty. Sr kundra's touch of reality is working. And my my they got engaged too. Just loving the flow of the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chap 88
Such a cute update..finally things are settling in kundra's life hehe!! I seriously love this protective Rishabh who is so devoted towards to his love, his Madhu. He won't let anything harm her anymore!! He can turn into a devil just to save his angel😆!!
They are each other's guiding light !! They are so complete with each other!!
Luvera..you are a. Fantastic story teller...you have portrayed all the post disastrous disaster ( Sikky and all) so fabulously such as their guilt, need, protectiveness, possessiveness, confusion of emotions so wonderfully!!
just look at the way they have come from their first meet in that parking lot and their progress in relationship in their mountain expedition...now they finally getting engaged now🥳simply amazes me at its beautiful narration which surely going to leave an unending impression on my mind and heart😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mimibm

That was a super duper hyper awesome update...I loved the fact that all the misunderstanding and insecurities are vanished and only pure love exists between these two...waiting for some full-time romance now 😳

hahahhaha... I will be closing some loose ends and then my focus will be centered on Rishab and Madhu...
Your wish will be fulfilled...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Chapter 87

Such an emotionally touching one...I don't know I just lived the way Rishabh kept a watch on Madhu !! He is internalizing his pain, framing himself guilty for Madhu's condition and Madhu's distressed situation all clearly shows the after effects of such a disaster.
The for-so-long awaited dad and son's important talk is also a kind of breather..it shows that Kundra family will be together like a normal family and will fight together against any kind of situation

Thankyou!!!
You loved the way Rishab kept a watch on Madhu as she slept... but imagine getting up in the middle of the night to find someone (it could be anyone - your mom or dad or bf or siblings) staring down at you... I dont know about you... but that would seriously creep me out... it sounds good to read or even watch on TV...but if it happens in real life...???????

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

So finaly rishab could come to terms that he's not guilty. Sr kundra's touch of reality is working. And my my they got engaged too. Just loving the flow of the story.

I am glad... there is not a dry seat in the joint... ahahhaha...
You can blame the flow of the story on my knack of day dreaming from the time I was in elementary or primary school... Easiest way to getting out of boring classes...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Chap 88

Such a cute update..finally things are settling in kundra's life hehe!! I seriously love this protective Rishabh who is so devoted towards to his love, his Madhu. He won't let anything harm her anymore!! He can turn into a devil just to save his angel😆!!
They are each other's guiding light !! They are so complete with each other!!
Luvera..you are a. Fantastic story teller...you have portrayed all the post disastrous disaster ( Sikky and all) so fabulously such as their guilt, need, protectiveness, possessiveness, confusion of emotions so wonderfully!!
just look at the way they have come from their first meet in that parking lot and their progress in relationship in their mountain expedition...now they finally getting engaged now🥳simply amazes me at its beautiful narration which surely going to leave an unending impression on my mind and heart😛

Oh don't stop... I love the fabulousness that is me!!! Oh I am sooo damnn modest... hhahahaha...
But on a serious note... You are so right and I agree with you!!
hahahahaha...
My intention at the beginning of the story was that when I reach the end, I want to read the whole story at a stretch.. I want it to feel like I am reading a novel...
Have you read my other pieces of work yet?? my OS's and SS??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvera

Oh don't stop... I love the fabulousness that is me!!! Oh I am sooo damnn modest... hhahahaha...
But on a serious note... You are so right and I agree with you!!
hahahahaha...
My intention at the beginning of the story was that when I reach the end, I want to read the whole story at a stretch.. I want it to feel like I am reading a novel...
Have you read my other pieces of work yet?? my OS's and SS??


You are welcome😉!! Well haven't read ur other works..yet to read them Luvera😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
yay
so they got engaged
yipeee
loved their cute ahem ahem scene
hehehehehe
akash and adam r so funny
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvera


I am glad... there is not a dry seat in the joint... ahahhaha...
You can blame the flow of the story on my knack of day dreaming from the time I was in elementary or primary school... Easiest way to getting out of boring classes...

then i wont blame but i love your knack of day dreaming. Dream on girl 😆


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i'm re-reading the update. I dnt know why but it feels good every time i read it. The way they are holding on and assuring each other is really very sweet. Loving it.
Edited by tanuja.siri - 12 years ago

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