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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

you write OS Chakku 😲 😲

will come back after reading

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Samridhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Chakku, I loved this.

It was so straight to the point & you found the perfect way to get rid of Sultan, and pave the way for the heroine track.

I would love it if it happened this way, esp. RK's realisation of his love for MB & his confession. But sigh.

Please write more on RishBala :)

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Looteri_Dulhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Chakku Write ur next os on Supali❤️

Edited by vivoash - 12 years ago

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Heartless_Freak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

superb os chakku.. 👏i will love it if dis happens in d show..😳

RK breaking down scene was soo gud n den lights,camera,action..

btw gud dat u sent bhaii n bhatija back to dubai..no useless characs required..🤣

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Looteri_Dulhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

😳

Edited by vivoash - 12 years ago

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BadtameezBrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

ow superb os chakku... wow... ohw i really want to see ds storyline in d show... beautifully u have written with thr convo.. i found convo os more impactful...

rk's emotional breakdown... madhu's revenge plan... n den rk forcefully entered mb in bolly.. jst perfect set up.. hope CVs use idea smthing like ds.. instead of current crap...

awesome os yaara..!! 👏

Edited by prishiya - 12 years ago

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susan7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

brilliant OS..👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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deepali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow chakku you wrote a OS

will read and comments😳

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ShinSegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Chiti.dsena
it's awesome...!!
loved it..! hope the same happens... 😆
i really don't like the current track that's going on...and especially madhu..🤢

Even I am not liking anyone currently because of fakeness. I want this track without any facade.