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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taraka2005

nyc update, glad RK is back 😊


thanks! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome Awesome..~!!! Lovely..Waitin for next n Thnks for the PM!


thanks a lot! 😳

will update soon! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Awesome update...pls pm me next tym n update soon... Will b waiting 😊


thanks!😳

yeah sure..will do so😊


Originally posted by: mevanp

Yayyy...! RK mil Gaya finally but is hurt ..!
very nice update ... 😊 n the precap is very interesting ...continue soon plz 😊


thanks a lot!!!😳



Originally posted by: masan1



Lvd it. Rk doubts hr bt lves her,she is angry wd hm bt lves hm. Vaise 2 4 thapad aur lagvane the bechari 2 din se dhund rai h. Very nice.
Thnx 4 d PM. Updte soon.


thanks!😳
@bold : 👏 👏
@red : hmm i also thot so...par madhu mein energy nahi hai aaj 😆 😉



Originally posted by: samwllms

rk found!!...relief...updt soon


yup! found! 😳


Originally posted by: susan7

Awesome Update 👏
Loved It 😊

thanx 4 d pm...


thanks dear! 😳


Originally posted by: dilnasheen

Awesome update!!Madhu found RK or he found her..!!😆 Why is RK's shoulder bleeding..??hmm...Suspense hai..??😳 Waiting to know more..!!


Update soon!!👍🏼


thanks dil! 😳
@bold : hahaha! 😆

btw rk is bleeding coz of sultan remember?



thanks a lot! 😳


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gurudrishti

thanks for update dear. cant see my sweetheart in pain. very well written. contin ue soon.👏


thanks a lot! 😳



Originally posted by: Clara20

awesome update dear 😊


thanks clara 😳




thanks tamanna 😳 😊



Originally posted by: maria090

Awsome update😳 happy mere RK mail gaya ❤️😎


thanks a lot! 😳



Originally posted by: cool_sri

OH GOD...FINALLY RK IS BACK...he is in sitara studio...but radhaji dint see him???


yes rk found...radhaji didnt see coz she is not aware of the vanity van 😊



Originally posted by: Rihan05

Nice update, interesting!!


thanks rihan! 😳



Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

rk deserve dat slap... thankgod he is safe...


true! he deserved the slap! 😳



Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

simply loved it!!! waiting for nxt update!😊


thanks! glad u loved it! 😊 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: revti21

Finally rk is found...precap is scary..


yup rk found!😳
m sorry to scare you 😆😊




Originally posted by: -SmokySapphira-

Glad RK is found. Amazing update.

Continue soon.


thanks a lot! 😳



Originally posted by: smitakundra

Rk is back..i missed him soo..uff rishbala scene awesome..dono miya biwi ek jaisi hi hai..akad..





Originally posted by: 1Sumana1

awesome update!

pehle bhai ko phir RK ko...dono ko Madhu se thappar mila...😆


thanks! 😳
yeah madhu ke thappad maarne ke days chal rahe hai 😆



Originally posted by: sneha.98

Glad R.k is back and awesome update it was with awesome precap.do pm me whenever u update


thanks a lot dear! 😳
will pm u for sure 😊



Originally posted by: sangeet6690

awesome update!!!!!
Tg RK z back...sigh of relief!!!
he's hurt bcoz f da sultan a.k.a "arjun dikshit" ki goli ryt

RK hurt n Madhu z vd him in studio ALONE😳...offfo my gutter mind..i knw dey vl resolve dere diffrences 1st n dere s no scope of coochei cooing ..n RK z hurt too..but phir bhi dil maange more😉


thanks a lot sangeet! 😳
yes u r right he is hurt cuz of AD's goli
haha gutter minds cant be controlled 😆 😉


Originally posted by: titli4love

nice update..hope they'll reunite soon.Don't write stories like CVs.😆


thanks !
dont worry dear...u C how i kicked out bhai 😆




Originally posted by: vaani21

Nice updates👍🏼

Thanks a lot for the PM.


thanks vaani! 😳




Originally posted by: Richa04

I m sorry 4 the late comment but the update was awesome! Finally Madhu found RK!!


hey no need to say sorry yaar!
thanks a lot for reading 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

In the vanity van

Rk (while making her sit) : ab khaana bhi nahi khaaya hoga tumne...akkad itni hai kisiki sunii hi nahi hogi..

Madhu : kyu? Tumne khaayaa?

Rk : CHALNE TAK KA HOSH NAHI HAI AUR MAZAAK SUJH RAHA HAI!!

Madhu (angrily) : mazaak? ...do dinn se yahaan sab pareshaan hain tumhein dhoondhte huye aur tum...kahaan thi tumhaari parvaah tab...sochaa nahi tumne ki kyaa haal ho raha hoga sabka?


Madhu puts her hands on rk's to remove them off her shoulder...Rk lets out "ouch" by mistake...just then she notices the blood on the shirt (on the arms)...

Madhu looks at rk in shock and confusion and asks, "rk yeh kya..." she holds his arm... "aur tum yahaan kyu...ghar kyu nahi gaye?"


Rk just avoids her and walks towards a cupboard in the vanity..


Madhu: tum kyu chahte thhe ki main chali jaaoon?

Chapter 15 - AT SITAARA STUDIO


In the vanity van

Rk : tumne poochaa tha naa mujhe , kya main tumhein chod sakta hoon? Yehi koshish kar raha tha...yeh lo (handing her clothes) kapde badal lo...tum bohot bheegi huyi ho...

Madhu : Rk yeh mere sawaal ka jawab nahi hai...


But, rk just goes out of the vanity van so that madhu can change...the van was parked in shade of a tree just a little away from the studio gate...he returns after a while...


Madhu : tum kyu chahte thhe ki main chali jaaoon?

Rk : main jawaab de chukka hoon...kya sun-naa chahti ho? mera vishwaas lautaa sakti ho? wo terrace se kuudnaa, tumhaari maa kaa naaraaz hona, tumhaara mujhe shaadi ke liye haan kehna,aur vo sab kuch chodne ki shart...sab kuch jooth tha...maine jis madhu ko chaha tha wo toh aisi nahi thi...

Madhu : Rk, main tumhaara dil kabhi nahi todna chahti thi...humaare pyaar ke liye kar rahi thi main...kaise tumhe ehsaas dilaati? Kaise maaf kar paati tumhe? Rk main sach-much sab chodkar tumhaare saath chalne ke liye tayiyaar thi...

Rk : jooth...sirf tab jab tumhein uss raat mera sach pata chala...hai naa? Aur kyu karu main vishwaas...socho agar tumne nahi sunaa hotaa toh yeh shaadi nahi huyi hoti...hai naa madhu?

Madhu : Rk tum kab mere pyaar par bharosaa karoge...shayad shaadi naa bhi hoti toh mera pyaar kabhi kum nahi hota...yeh sach hai...lekin uss din ne mujhe ehsaas dilaaya ki main galat thi Rk...lekin yeh pyaar kabhi jootha nahi tha Rk...

Rk : madhu baat tumhaare pyaar par vishwaas karne ki nahi hai...tumne yeh sab kuch shaayad meri wajah se hi kiya...lekin sach yeh hai ki maine shaayad tumse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi...isliye toh tum dekh nahi payi...hai naa madhu?


Madhu was shattered to hear this...she didn't know what to answer...


Madhu : nahi Rk...main jaanti hoon tum mujhse bohot pyaar karte ho...aur hameshaa kiya hai...

Rk : jooth...tum nahi kar payi naa meri kisi baat par bharosa...wo sab kuch jooth hi toh tha...

Madhu : rk...

Rk : main jaanta tha sab kuch jooth hai...har dinn bas sochta ki shaayad tumhe mujhpar yakeen ho...lekin tumne...badla kyun nahi liya? Chod kyun nahi diya? Madhu kya mujhpar dayaa aa gayi tumhein? Bolo naa madhu mujhe yeh ehsaas kyu nahi hua jab maine tumhein dhoka diya?

Madhu : chalo rk..

Rk : madhu jawab do...mera pyaar tumhein kamzor karta hai...hai naa?


Madhu drags rk out of the vanity van...they walk towards the security guard...she asks him to open the gates...they enter...


Rk : nahi madhu...

Madhu : chalo Rk...


Inside Sitaara Studio

they enter the studio... rk starts walking towards a particular room and madhu follows...

the room is like a study room with living area...there's a wooden table with a chair behind and a book shelf next to it...and the other side of the room had a couch in front of which was a low height table which had some photos and newspaper cuttings lying on it...

rk walked towards the couch and stopped there...madhu followed and stood besides him...


Rk: madhu...kyu kar rahi ho yeh? Kyu karti ho mujhse pyaar? (with anger+concern)

Madhu : rk uss dinn raat ko studio mein meri jaan bachaane kyun aaye thhe?

Rk : kyunki main tumhaare saath jo bhi karu...tumhe kho nahi sakta tha...

Madhu : uss dinn jab deepali ki shart ke baare mein mujhe pataa chaala toh tum darr kyu gaye? Kyu tumne maa se maafi maangi? Kyu mujhse maafi maangi?

Aur phir balraj...

Sab sach tha naa Rk...? (with concern)

(with pain+concern+anger) BATAO RK! SAB SACH THA NAA?

Rk : haan madhu (holding her hand)...sab sach tha...nahi kho sakta tha tumhein kabhi...

Madhu : phir kyu durr kiya mujhe Rk?

Rk : darr tha...tumhe bataa detaa mere pyaar ke baare mein aur agar tum bhi chali jaati toh main ek aur baar khudko sambhaal nahi paata...nahi tod paya main uss deewaar ko jo maine apne darr ko chupaane ke liye khud khadi ki thi...

Madhu : dekho yahaan Rk...tumhaare papa bohot khush honge aaj...


she pulls him along to sit on the couch


Rk : madhu...kyu kar rahi ho yeh? Kyu karti ho mujhse pyaar?

Madhu : tumse kisne kaha ki main pyaar karti hoon rk? main toh bas yeh keh rahi hoon ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho..hai naa?

Rk : madhu JAWAAB!

Madhu : kyunki tumhaari har baat mein sirf madhu madhu madhu hai..hai naa? Kyunki agar main aisa karti toh tum bhi shaayad yahi karte...karte nahi kar chuke...woh saare khatt...agar main chod deti ...yeh hi soch kar mujhe diye thhe naa...


Rk hugs madhu...madhu hugs him back (both their eyes moist with tear)


Rk : jab sab jaanti thi toh uss din mere kehne par chali kyu gayi mandap se? (breaking the hug and holding madhu's shoulder)

Madhu : nahi jaanti thi Rk...tumhaare pyaar ne mujhe samjhaaya...unn khatton ko padhne par ehsaas hua...tumne apni yaadein mere naam likh di...toh main yahaan kaise nahi aati...

Rk : unn khatton mein aisa kya tha jo...

Madhu (cuts him n says): vo jo main kabhi samajh nahi paayi...wo jo mujhe pehle karna chahiye tha...kaise mujhe itni aasaani se maaf kar diya rk? Main kyu nahi kar paayi?

Rk : tumhaare dhoke ki wajah bhi tumhaara pyaar hi tha...hai naa madhu?


And they come close to each other...slowly Rk's lips near madhu's lips...and they share a soft short kiss ❤️


Precap:

madhu : ghar kyu nahi gaye Rk?


Ps: hope u love it! 😳 i almost ended up dizzy while writing this a week back 😆


Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

ENGLISH VERSION

Revenge round 2 "Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

In the vanity van

Rk (while making her sit) : now you wouldn't have eaten even...so stubborn you are , wouldn't have listened to anyone...

Madhu : why? you ate?

Rk : DONT EVEN HAVE ENERGY TO WALK CONSCIOUSLY AND YOU WANT TO JOKE!!

Madhu (angrily) : joke? ...since two days here everyone is worried searching for you...where was your worry at that time...u didn't think how everyone would have been...?

Madhu puts her hands on rk's to remove them off her shoulder...Rk lets out "ouch" by mistake...just then she notices the blood on the shirt (on the arms)...

Madhu looks at rk in shock and confusion and asks, "rk what's this..." she holds his arm... "and why are you here...why didn't you go home?"


Rk just avoids her and walks towards a cupboard in the vanity..


Madhu: why did you want me to go away?

Chapter 15 - AT SITAARA STUDIO


In the vanity van

Rk : u had asked me if i could leave you? just trying to do that...take this (handing her clothe) change ur clothes...you are totally drenched...

Madhu : Rk this is not the answer to my question...

But, rk just goes out of the vanity van so that madhu can change...the van was parked in shade of a tree just a little away from the studio gate...he returns after a while...


Madhu : why did you want me to go away?

Rk : i have given my answer...what do you want to listen? can u bring back my trust? jumping off the terrace, your mother being angry at you, your saying yes to my proposal,and that condition u put forth about leaving everything and going...everything was a lie...the madhu i loved was not like this...

Madhu : Rk, i never wanted to break your heart...i was doing this for our love...how could i make you realise? how could i have foriven you? Rk i was honestly ready to leave everything and go with you...

Rk : lie...only when you heard my truth that night...right? and why should i trust...think if you wouldn't have heard me that night then this marriage wouldn't have happened...right madhu?

Madhu : Rk when will you trust my love...if the marriage wouldn't have happened still my love would not have lessened ever...this is the truth...but that day made me realise that i was wrong Rk...but this love was never a lie Rk...

Rk : madhu its not about trusting your love...maybe you did it because of me...but, truth is that maybe i never loved you...that's why you couldn't see it...right madhu?

Madhu was shattered to hear this...she didn't know what to answer...


Madhu : no Rk...i know you love me a lot...u always have...

Rk : lie...you couldn't trust anything that i said...everything was a lie itself...

Madhu : rk...

Rk : i knew everything is a lie...everyday i used to think maybe u'l believe me...but you...why didn't you take revenge? why didn't you leave me? madhu did u pity me? say madhu why didn't i realise anything when i ditched you?

Madhu : lets go rk..

Rk : madhu answer me...my love weakens you...right?


Madhu drags rk out of the vanity van...they walk towards the security guard...she asks him to open the gates...they enter...


Rk : no madhu...

Madhu : lets go Rk...


Inside Sitaara Studio

they enter the studio... rk starts walking towards a particular room and madhu follows...

the room is like a study room with living area...there's a wooden table with a chair behind and a book shelf next to it...and the other side of the room had a couch in front of which was a low height table which had some photos and newspaper cuttings lying on it...

Rk walked towards the couch and stopped there...madhu followed and stood besides him...


Rk: madhu...why are you doing this? why do you love me? (with anger+concern)

Madhu : rk that night at the studio why did you come to save my life?

Rk : because whatever i would have done with you...i couldn't lose you...

Madhu : that day when i came to know about deepali's bet , why were you scared?why did u apologize to your mom? why did you apologize to me?

and then balraj...

everything was true right Rk...? (with concern)

(with pain+concern+anger) TELL ME RK! EVERYTHING WAS TRUE RIGHT?

Rk : yes madhu (holding her hand)...everything was true...i couldn't ever lose you...

Madhu : then why did you send me aloof Rk?

Rk : it was fear...if i would have told you about my love and if you also would have left me then i wouldn't have been able to gather myself...i couldn't break that wall which i had built myself to hide my fears...

Madhu :look here Rk...your dad will be very happy today...


she pulls him along to sit on the couch


Rk : madhu...why are you doing this? why do you love me?

Madhu : who told you that i love you Rk? i am just saying that you love me...right?

Rk : madhu ANSWER!

Madhu : because everything you say has only madhu madhu madhu in it...right?because if i would have done it then you would do the same as me...infact u already did...all those letters...if i would have left you...u wrote them thinking that only right...

Rk hugs madhu...madhu hugs him back (both their eyes moist with tear)


Rk : when you knew everything then why did u leave the altar that day when i told you to?(breaking the hug and holding madhu's shoulder)

Madhu :i didn't know Rk...your love made me understand...those letters made me realise...you gave me your memories...how could i have not come...

Rk : what such thing did those letters have that you...

Madhu (cuts him n says): that which i never understood...that which i should have done before...how could you forgive me so easily Rk? why couldn't i do the same?

Rk : but, the reason of your revenge also was for our own love only...right madhu?


And they come close to each other...slowly Rk's lips near madhu's lips...and they share a soft short kiss ❤️


Precap:

madhu : why didn't you go home Rk?


Ps: hope u love it! 😳 i almost ended up dizzy while writing this a week back 😆


Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yipeeiii me first...🥳 🥳 🥳


awesome update..loved it 🤗
finally he admits sab sach tha..he loved her all along n betrayed her nly bcoz of his fears!!!
superb dialogues n my fav one .kaise mujhe itni aasaani se maaf kar diya rk? Main kyu nahi kar paayi? 👏

n dey kiss n make up☺️

Edited by sangeet6690 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update RK is back 😃

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