OS-AFTER MADHU LEAVES RK- The End pg-8*23th may*

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Posted: 12 years ago

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The rain stopped now and RK beat the drunk man very badly.When the man saw that it was RK the superstar he ran away. Rk turned back and saw madhu's hand on her forehead which was bleeding, She was feeling a bit dizzy. RK ran back to her.
RK: Madhu? Madhu are you ok? That idiot! How dare he did that to you.
Madhu said ignoring rk: Yes..i am ok.
RK: Madhu i know i am only i am responsible for everything. I should be one who should be punished not you. I should the one who should get out of everyone's lives.
Madhu interrupted: Nooo. It's no use of saying all this now. I am already gone,Far away from your life.
RK: Nooo..your still here. And you can never go away from my life.

Then RK realized that the girl who came infront of his car was madhu!
RK: Ohh soo you were the one who came infront of my car? AND i am damn sure that you knew that it was me! but still you didn't say anything? You were going away? Why madhu? What if the man didn't come here? Then i would never know that it was you! WHY? WHY did u do that? ( he screamed)
Madhu: Because i want to go away from your life!
RK: Goo away! So tell me can you live without me? CAN YOU?
Madhu: Nooo...i can't! But you can RK.
RK laughed: How do you know?
Madhu: Because you don't love me. You only love yourself!
RK: Who said that?
Madhu: So you love me?

Everything became silent! AND then Rk said the magical words!
RK: YES I DO! YES! Miss Madhubala Rishahb Kundra! I am in love with you...truly deeply madly! My love for you is a journey it starts at forever and ends at never!

RK came near for a kiss. Madhu's eyes imediately closed! Then she felt her lips which were now crushed by RK's lips! There lips met into the most passionate kiss. They kept on making out untill they were almost unable to breathe. Madhu became totally red. And the moment was very awkward for both them. So RK changed the topic.

RK: Madhu i know that i have hurt you alot! And i don't know whether i deserve you or not. But i can't live without you. This feeling kills me madhu.
Madhu: What feeling?
RK: The feeling of losing you! when you were gone, i thought my life was gone too. i know sorry is not enough. I want to give you all the happiness that you deserve. I want to take away all that pain that i gave you. I want to spend my life with you. Maybe i don't have a proper life, but if you are there then you can make it perfect! Ohhh fish my head! Right now i don't know what to say. I LOVE YOU. That's my secret. No hearts, no pretty drawings.No poems or cryptic messages! I just love you. i don't know what will be your decison! BUT i want you to know that i love you and always will.

Madhu was totally overwhelmed! She didn't know what to do! Then she played a little trick on RK.
Madhu: RK i said you were late! I already love someone else!

Though RK said the last line, but he was very sure that madhu would come back with him. His heart broke into pieces and he became very frustrated!
RK: You love someone else? WHAT? NO!
Madhu: Yes!
RK: Oh so it must be that sultan! Yes it is him right! But you can't goo away from me! You belong to me! If you are not mine,you can't be anyone's! I will kill that sultan!

Then RK saw madhu's face and then he realized that he was doing the same mistake. RK took a long breathe.
RK: Ok! i am sorry madhu! It's your life and your decision. After what i did to u. I deserve this. I want you to be happy madhu, if sultan makes you happy then it's ok. Your free madhu and madhu god has given me the punishment. Today i realized i love you only to know that you love someone else! I deserve this i deserve this!

Both madhu and RK were crying.
Madhu: Wait. You only don't have the right to play with me! I also have the right! Madhu laughed!
RK: WHAT? you were joking? oh my god! what i fool i am! Well obviously i knew that u were joking! You can't love anyone else! ( Smirk)
Madhu: Ehhh! You didn't know that i was joking! Liar!

RK then got into his knees.
RK: will you marry me? And officially became my Biwi?

BG

Kaisa ishq ye kaisa
Junoon hai maahi
Beqaraari mai
Tu hi qaraar
Door reh ki tu
Mujh mai hai rabba
Jaane ye kaisa pyar

Hum hai deewane
Tere deewane
Hum hai deewane
Tere deewane
Hum hai deewane
Tere deewane
Hum hai deewane
Tere deewane

Madhu: Yes! ( smiles)

RK got up and then they shared a eyelock!

Tujh se hai hasi
Tujse udaasi
Kasmash hai rabba
Roothi hu phir bhi raasi
Tu hi hai maula
Tu hi hai kaazi
Tu hi hai maula
Tu hi hai kaazi
Kya karu mai bayaan
Tere ishq pe jaan kurbaan

Hum hai deewane
Tere deewane
Hum hai deewane
Tere deewane
Hum hai deewane
Tere deewane
Hum hai deewane
Tere deewane

RK went near for a kiss! But this time madhu stopped him.

Madhu: I am still madhubala shamsher malik! And you must not forget that!

RK: Uhhh! so miss Madhubala soon to madhubala rishahb kundra! Can i hug you?

Then they both hugged each other! And were lost in each others arms!

Later on the car!
RK: Madhu! We actually need to talk abou that!
Madhu: About what?
RK: About the kiss! ( smirk)

Madhu blushed!
RK: Hayyyeee!

Then he teased her through the whole journey! And discussed the plans about their wedding!

P.S: Please leave reviews!😳 Okay now there is a bad news and a good news! The bad news is that this is the last part of this OS and the good news this that epilogue is still to be updated!😊 But it will take time as my exams are just after some days! I hope i could make up to all of your expectations! Thank you all for supporting me! please leave reviews!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice update. All the best for your exam.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Nice update. All the best for your exam.

Thank you!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Very good OS! 😊 All the best for your exams. 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Amanat-
Very good OS! 😊 All the best for your exams. 👍🏼

Thank you!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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~THE END~

Flashback:

Everyone was very happy to see Madhu back. Padmani who was very worried scolded her alot. Padmani wanted to take madhu with her, but then madhu explained padmani that RK truly loves her and how he confessed his love. it was hard to convince her but atlast with everyone's effort she got convinced.

Madhu: Ma, Now you have agreed, So now i want to tell you something..
Before she could say anything RK interrupted.
RK: Wait madhu, I want to say this. Everyone present here now listen to me carefully. I want to make madhu my wife officially! I want to make her my 7 phere wali Biwi.

Everyone screamed with excitement! RK had finally confessed everything. From that day their wedding preparations begin. The whole house was busy...everyone seemed too much excited. And as for RK and Madhu they both were in their dreamland! Everything seemed like a dream! And then Finally came the bid day! RK and Madhu's wedding! The whole kundra house was decorated with flowers and light..But still when RK was at the mandap he felt something was missing but that missing was no more missing when Madhu came down from the stairs..She just gave vibes to RK. AND then the most beautiful wedding took place! Everything was perfect! But the night was more beautiful...then anything.

Madhu was sitting infront of her dressing table, when RK came and pulled her towards him.

RK: Biwi, Now it's my time to torture you!
Madhu: Torture me? Now what did i do that u want to torture me?
RK: Ahaan! What did you do? Then who was that girl that was giving me those breadth taking looks sometime before? ( Smirk)"
Madhu blushed. RK came near her and whispered to her ears.
RK: Madhubala Rishabh Kundra, Today no one can save you from me. Because today i'll make you mine! " Pure Tan manse aaj tum meri hogi''

Rk went near her ears and put off her ear rings.Then all the jewellery she was wearing were now lying in the dressing table. And Rk was standing at the back of madhu who was sitting infront of the dressing table closing her eyes. All this time she didn't even blink once. RK just loved the effect he had on her.

RK: Biwi! Come on this is not a eye closing competition! And i can't see your beautiful eyes! So it is irritating me alot.

He turned Madhu towards him! And then slowly madhu opened her eyes.They shared a intense eyelock and then within a few minutes Madhu was in RK's arm! That night was beautiful! There fingers ran into every parts of their bodies! They discovered love and became one!

It was morning and Madhu's eyes opened before RK's eyes! All those beautiful memories of the previous night came infront of her. She smiled at RK and went to take shower. When she came back she didn't notice that RK was already awakened! RK was about to say something to madhu, but when he saw her dressing and doing her makeup infront of the mirror he couldn't stop admiring her. He thought to himself.
RK: Everyday i will not get this chance soo let's take some advantage!
He kept on pretending to sleep, meanwhile madhu was almost ready! She wore a red and maroon saree, RK was continuously looking at her bareback with just one dori. Madhu was about to put the sindur on her forehead but then suddenly she stopped, and didn't put the sindur. This act really perplexed RK. Then he thought of it for some time while madhu was giving her last touch. Then he understood that what madhu wanted him to do. He smiled to himself and found madhu staring at him.
Madhu: Rk? You woke up?
RK: Yes Biwi just woke up now!

Madhu was gigling, she thought that RK would come and apply the sindur on her head. But Rk's reaction made her pissed,
RK: Biwi, looks like you forgot all your duties.
Madhu: What do you mean?
RK: Aree? Where's my tea?
Madhu was now a bit embarrassed: Oh! Yes i was going to make it now.
She stared at RK thinking he will notice. But still it didn't work. RK took the newspaper and started reading it.
RK: Now why are you standing here? You were supposed to get my tea right?
Madhu: Are you sure should i go? I mean everythings ok right?

RK laughed under the paper.
RK: Biwi what are you talking about? You are asking me that am i sure that i want tea? Everythings ok with me but i don't think everythings ok with you. Somethings missing.

Madhu's eyes widened as he said the last line.
Madhu: Yesss...somethings missing! Noo i mean what is missing?
RK: My phone! Bittuji was supposed to call.
Madhu murmured: of course bittuji was supposed to call. People are right, after marriage the husband's really change! Now biituji is important than me. Today is our first day and look he is already showing his true colors.
RK: Madhuz? Did u say something?
Madhu was now fuming: Noo! Why would i say something? You goo and talk to bittuji. She gave a irritating smile.

She turned back! Just then some strong force pulled her. She hardly could understand what was going on! RK tooks her in his arms and put her infront of the mirror. She looked confused. RK then took the sindur and put it on her forehead. Madhu's eyes immediately closed! Tears ran down from her eyes. Rk made her faced him kissed her hand.

Rk: Madhu I love you!
Madhu: I love youuu too!

They hugged and were lost into each other! When suddenly madhu broke the hug!

Madhu: Rk you noticed that i didn't put the sindur? But still you didn't say anything!
RK: I not only noticed it! Infact i understood what was your masterplan! soo just took some advantage of my brilliant brain!

Madhu totally became red! RK kept on laughing!
Rk: Your seriously such a drama queen!
Madhu: ooo hello! I am not ant drama queen! Ok?
Rk: Yes i admit that you were looking very cute when you were doing that act!
Madhu: of course i was! but how did you know that i was pretending to forget it?
RK: Sometimes the heart sees what is invisible to the eyes!

Madhu turns back but again RK pulls her back.
RK: Madhu you'll never leave me right?
Madhu: Nooo! We'll always be together!
RK: Promise me that every morning will be like this. Everytime you'll intentionally forget to put your sindur!
Madhu: And you'll intentionally act that you didn't notice it?

RK didn't say anything but came near her and kissed her gently!

Madhu: RK?! Now what is this for?
RK: Biwi a kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous!
Madhu: Badmaash!

They both smiled at each other!

Flashback ends.

Madhu was sitting infront of her dressing table! When RK came in and held her hand.
RK: Biwi! You look beautiful..
Madhu: You say this line everyday! ohh! now should i go and bring your tea?
RK: Yes! ( smirk)
Madhu: Are you sure? i think your forgetting something.
Rk: of course i am!

He took the sindur and put it on her forehead! and as usual madhu's eyes got closed.
RK: Again you closed your eyes! I bet now you will start crying!

And he was right. Madhu's eyes were already filled with tears.
Madhu: I close my eyes because i want to feel it! You just don't put the sindur on my head, but into my heart also.
Rk: Biwi you just made my day!
Madhu: Nothing changed RK! it seems that i just got married to you!
RK: Yes! Biwi!

They were about to hug! Just then there was a loud knock at the door!
Kashish: Daddy! Mommy! Open the door! we're already getting late!

RK: madhu one thing changed for certainly- bittuji got replaced!

Madhu hit rk!
Madhu: Rkkk! how mean? How can u say that about my baby!
RK: Biwi she's my baby tooo! Now open the door quickly or else our baby would soon make everyone goo mad!

It had been 6 years of their marriage, and now they had a family of their own! They a had daughter - Kashish Risahb Kundra, who was 5 years old and a son- Rehan Risahb Kundra, who was just 14 months old.

Kashish:

Madhu opened the door, and saw kashish crying. Rk also came behind her.
Madhu: Why is my princess crying?
Kashish: Mommy taoday we will not go to the picnic!
Madhu:Why baby?
Kashish: cause dadi said that if we don't goo there early they won't let us go inside the farmhouse. And that's why i got up quickly and got ready, but now it is already 10!
RK: ohhh...so that's why my princess is crying?
kashish: Yes! I really wanted to go there daddy! I also promised that i won't do anything bad! i will be a good girl.
RK: Promise?
Kashish: Pinky Promise!
RK: What if only me,mommy and rehan go there?

Kashish started to cry again!
Madhu: RK!! Shutup! Kashish sweetheart daddy is just joking baby! We will all go to the picnic and do alot of mastii!
Kashish: Really! Mommy?
Madhu: Yes! my princess.
Kashish: Daddy you are soo bad! U made kashish cry.

RK got down on his knees and kissed his daughter.
RK: I am soo sorry princess! I will never do that. Please forgive me.
Kashish: What if i don't? ( She said smiling like a baby and madhu laughed seeing her daughter teasing her daddy.)
RK: Hmmm what if you don't! Then what if i get to a new doll?
Kashish: New Doll? For mee? YayayayaY! I love you daddy.

She said this and ran towards the door!

RK: She is just like me! She didn't even say thank you! hahaha she was negociating with me.

Then suddenly kashish came and kissed RK.
Kashish: Thank you daddy!
Madhu smiled at RK.

Kashish: Now you both come downstairs everyone's waiting! ( she left)

They both then came downstairs. Everyone was ready to go the picnic! Then Madhu took little Rehan in her lap and they all went for the picnic! When they reached there, they had alot of fun, they played games, ate, drank and visited beautiful places! RK and Madhu also shared alot of romantic moments and some good time with their beautiful family! They all sang:

BG:
Aye dil laaya hai bahaar apnon ka pyar kya kehna
Milein hum chhalak utha khushi ka khumaar kya kehna
Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna
Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna

Aye dil laaya hai bahaar apnon ka pyar kya kehna
Milein hum chhalak utha khushi ka khumaar kya kehna

Hum tum yoon hi milte rahein mehfil yoon hi sajti rahe
Bas pyaar ki yehi ek dhun har subah shaam bajti rahe
Gale mein mehekte rahein pyaar bhari baahon ke haar kya kehna

Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna

Aye dil laaya hai bahaar apnon ka pyar kya kehna
Milein hum chhalak utha khushi ka khumaar kya kehna
Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna
Khile khile chehron se aaj ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna.

Soo here it is! This is the end of my os! I never actually thought that i would write 4 parts of a os, but all of your love and appreciation made me do that. Thank you all for all of your support and appreciation! Love you guys. And please comment and leave your reviews, coz i am very excited to read your comments.

To the silent readers: I don't have any problem with the silent readers, but as this is the last part, i want u guys to atleast write one word.

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