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Posted: 12 years ago
Hii! I'll try my best to update tonight! I'm yet to write up the next part. I've been fulfilling VM requests ahah.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrittB

Hii! I'll try my best to update tonight! I'm yet to write up the next part. I've been fulfilling VM requests ahah.


Hi
I think I won't be able to read it tonight -.-
Almost 1AM here 😊
Will read it tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!! Waiting for next! Love ur stories!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part 1..madhu backfiring at rk..loved the loophole...good idea..
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loved chap 2 the massage...beautifully written
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sweet chap 3...covering the major part of story
HUM TUM EK CABIN ME BAND HO AUR CHABI KHO JAYE was the song playing on my mind..update soon...loved rk's scolding bituji in the end...thats real RK is
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Posted: 12 years ago
pritt u said ur gonna update the part 4 on 27th itself n now its 30 but still u have not updated it 😭 please update soon waiting for ur update & pm 😊
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Firstly, happy Canada day to all my fellow Canadian friends! Secondly, sorry for the late update. I've been having trouble writing since my summer course ended. I swear it mentally exhausted me. Anyways...enjoy!


Chapter Four - The Regrets

"Are you kidding me?"

I stood up and walked towards the lone window of the cabin. It had begun to rain, so my plans to walk out of the cabin had gone to waste.

"Come on Biwi, don't ruin the mood."

"Mood? What mood. The only mood I can feel right now is anger."

I turned to stare at him, now standing and walking towards me. I froze still as a statue as he continued to walk in my direction.

"My jungle billi is making another appearance I see."

He smirked and raised an eyebrow. The effect he had on me was still a mystery to me. I could feel my heart beginning to race as he came face to face with me. With both hands on the wall behind me and on either side of my head, he shot me his breathtaking smile. The snap of his fingers brought me out of whatever trance I was in.

"And what world is my biwi lost in? RK-land?"

"Oh shut up RK. I want to go home."

"You don't want to spend the night with me alone? Any girl would die to spend the night with me."

"Well, I'm not any girl."

I pushed him gently but he refused to budge. Instead, he brought his face closer towards mine. Our noses nearly touched as I fell silent. His eyes landed on my lips and then travelled back up to my eyes. I could feel his breath brushing against my lips as he spoke.

"You're right. You're not an ordinary girl...you're special."

I remained silent as he suddenly began to praise me and himself at the same time.

"You're not special because you're married to superstar RK. You're special because you're you. You know that right?"

"RK..."

I sighed, unable to say much more. He raised his finger and placed it on my lips.

"Shh. Today I'm going to speak and you're going to listen."

Butterflies fluttered around in my stomach as he pulled away and turned his back towards me. I heard him chuckle beneath his breath and then he turned back to stare at me with a smirk on his face.

"Since when have I had that effect on you Biwi?"

"Huh?"

"You fell silent the instant I came close to you. And I could see your lips trembling."

I straightened myself out and crossed my arms while shaking my head.

"You don't effect me in any way. Put your ego away and figure out how we'll get out of here."

"I don't have any effect on you?"

"None."

"None?"

"I said none! How many times do..."

Before I could finish, he placed his hands on my waist and pulled me close. I gasped as my chest crashed into his. I stared up into his eyes as he smirked down at me.

"What's gotten into you Biwi?"

"I don't know..."

"Need help figuring it out?"

I slowly, unconsciously, nodded my head up and down. I noticed a different kind of smile cross his face for the first time. He began to close in on me. I watched as his lips got closer and closer towards mine. Our breaths mixed in the little space between us. Then I suddenly pulled away. I turned my back towards him.

"Wh...what are you doing..."

There was silence for a moment until I felt his hand running across my bare waist. He placed his hand on stomach, beneath my sari pallu. I closed my eyes as his lips brushed my ear and he whispered into it.

"I'm helping you."

I pulled out of his grip and began to run past him when suddenly I felt myself being pulled back. I froze as I felt his grip on my pallu. I cursed myself for wearing the thin-strapped sari as I placed my hand on my chest. I felt my heart racing beneath my palm as I felt him coming closer from behind.

"RK..."

He placed his arms around my waist slowly.

"Stop..."

Though I didn't want him to stop, I asked him to...unable to accept that this was really happening. Had I fallen in love with the man I had once despised? Did he love me too?

"Why..."

I had no idea how to answer his question, so I remained silent. He placed one hand on my thin shoulder strap and gently pulled it down. My chest rose with every heavy breath that escaped my mouth. An instant chill ran down my spine as I felt his lips on my shoulder. I quickly turned and wrapped my arms around him.

"Don't. I can't do this RK."

"Why not."

"I can't...I can't love you..."

"Why Madhu?"

"Because you're RK...you'll never love me. This can't be happening."

"I already do."

That's how our love story began. Our unique, interesting, and pain-filled love story. There are times when I wish I could go back to that night and truly stop RK. Stop anything from happening between us that night. There are times when I wish Bittuji had come earlier. Come before the sun rose and I found myself lying bare next to the man I had once despised. But it's impossible to turn back time and go back to the past. So life continued, and we fell more in love...

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oooh! me first ;D

Priiitt! Whyyy did you have to stop? ahahahahah!
I wanted it to go on! Loved it :) Loved the last bit more :)

Uhhh! So Bittu Ji does turn up somehow! that made me LOL!
Love the fact your keeping the characters true to the originals! :)

I've been waiting for the update :) And as always you never fail to give us something beyond our expectations :) Well done.. :)

I hope the next part comes soon :)

You rock <3

xxx

Edited by -Stephanie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah..so sensuous and hot..never wanted it to stop hehe!! Read it in one go and just loved it to the bits..u are one awesome writer Pritt😊. Love to read further...do update soon yeah😛

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