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-Vinu-

@-Vinu-

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome...!!! nicely written..!! 👏

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Beautiful, but a very sad OS! The beginning was so happy. I loved the twins! Argh the poor darlings! I feel so bad for them. Rishabh.. now how would he survive without the love of his life? Her father? How would he live the memory of his daughter passing away in his arms?

Why Donna why? 😭 I thought she finally got her happy ending. Her last words... I want to cry now. *Off to sulk in a corner*

Fantastic OS btw!

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Jasu i hav tears n my eyes... Nd m spechless, for dis.. Ur r simply n owesome writer...words wld b less if i say 4 d way u wrote it.. PRI S RT DIS S ONE OF D BEST OS I HV READ..IT WAS SO BLISSFUL N BEGININ SO CHEERFUL ND D NEXT MOMENT.. Nd dat last line to kids.. U really made me cry;-(.. DIS IS 4U.. Muahhh 🤗 exams khatam hua kya dear? Mine s over..

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Nice and happy beginning but what a sad ending.

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: DevilClan
Nice and happy beginning but what a sad ending.

That is life for ya

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: --Udhay--
Superb OS! 👍🏼

thank you

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Shree.123
Amazing Work 👏
It was so Touching

thank you

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: VinuRox
awesome...!!! nicely written..!! 👏

thank you

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853460

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

wow..that is one superb piece..easily one of your best OS

a dream of happy future together after seeing the war atrocities..a dream that was cruelly punctuated by grim reality..

loved all the relationships..Rishabh-Madhu, the twins..father daughter..father in law with his hoity toity son in law..admixed with the ugly truth of experiences in war..experiences that leave scars..visible and otherwise..

She survived the Afghan war only to succumb to the never ending battle at home.

PS: I dunno why but I just loved..loved the fact that Madhubala was the soldier here

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Desire6
Jasu i hav tears n my eyes... Nd m spechless, for dis.. Ur r simply n owesome writer...words wld b less if i say 4 d way u wrote it.. PRI S RT DIS S ONE OF D BEST OS I HV READ..IT WAS SO BLISSFUL N BEGININ SO CHEERFUL ND D NEXT MOMENT.. Nd dat last line to kids.. U really made me cry;-(.. DIS IS 4U.. Muahhh 🤗 exams khatam hua kya dear? Mine s over..

Ji haan, all done. I hope yours went well.

Thank you very much Naina di (that is your name right?) I am glad you liked it that much, I am humbled.