SS: Lost Love in Lost Memories Part 4 (19 April) - Page 3

Originally posted by: luvera

The chapter has raised some q's in my mind... which I am sure will be answered as the story moves along...

Originally posted by: RuthlessQueen

Oh wow! I can't believe my OS provoked you to write a SS! No I don't mind as long as you don't completely extract things from my one shot. You can use the concept! Maybe that would spare me of giving the happy ending my readers requested. I wrote it as an OS and I wanted the readers to think of their own happy ending.

Oh I think you messaged me of your idea, right? Haha! I think you should continue it yourself. Actually this concept has so much potential, so I'm sure you can do a great job with it.

I'm a commerce student so I have no idea what your ITC means. The only ITC I know is International Trade Centre. :)

Anyhow, nice start! Looking forward to see what you have in store!

Thanks a lot 😊

Actually ITC is hypothetical and is drawn from the book timeline. 😊

Originally posted by: aakriti18

Thanks a lot 😊
sent u buddy request.
Well i would try to update soon
but to be honest it is really hard to do so bcoz 3 days a week as soon as a come back from school i leave for my coaching class and return after 9
and the rest 3 days i hv tutions. So i m left only with sunday.
Hope you understand. But i ll try my level best to update soon... 😊

Originally posted by: aakriti18

NOTE: I have changed the name of the person rk was talking to from aditya to ishan. Hope you don't mind. 😊

Hi everyone
Thanks for your likes and comments.
Before i start this part i wanted to inform you that i have changed the name of the person talking to rk outside the cabin from aditya to ishan.
Here goes part 2

PART 2: Desperate mother

While everyone was sleeping madhu was breathing heavily. Her dream was again and again flashing in her mind.

She was repeating the same line "My child!!! I have a kid!!! I want my child!!!" Hearing her the nurse woke up, reached her bed and sat next to her. She rubbed her back and offered her water but she refused. The nurse was trying to calm her but when there was no effect on madhu she held madhu by her arms and shook her "Relax madhu!!! Relax!!"

This made madhu face the nurse. She said "I want my kid. Please let me meet my child. Please take me..." Madhu took the nurse's palms in hers and pleaded. "Relax madhu!! Please sleep"
"I cant sleep!! I want to be with my kid please..."
Madhu pleaded while crying.

"Ok i'll take you to your kid tomorrow.But please sleep now"
"Sure?? In the morning???"
"Ya sure, now sleep" the nurse made madhu lie down and covered her with a sheet. Ofcourse madhu couldn't sleep but she kept thinking about her child.
Next day morning as soon as the nurse informed rk about the incident he called madhu to his cabin. He was worried about her reaction but somewhere inside he was happy that she remembered something!!! Her past performance was not satisfying but this incident brought a new hope of her reviving her memory.

He decided to first listen to what she had to say and simultaneously provoke her to think more and more becoz this was a golden opportunity for him and he could not miss that. He had been waiting for this for the last two months and when the opportunity is finally knocking on the door he could not let it go. As rk was thinking about provoking her he heard a knock on the door.

"May i come in doctor?"

"Yes madhu. Come, have a seat". He saw that madhu's face was pale, her eyes were red due to crying. His anxiety increased. He had to be really careful.

"So madhu how are you now??". He waited and stared at her face.

She did not answer."Did you take your medicine???"
He knew she had not had anything since morning, not even medicines as the nurse told him, but still he asked to initiate the conversation. She still didn't answer.She was not even facing him. He reminded himself of provoking her because he knew she would not answer now.

He decided to come straight to the point.
" Want to meet your child???" Instantly madhu's face jerked to face him. He knew that this would happen. He knew she saw some parts of her past in her dream but he had no intention of making it easy for her. Before she could say anything he said "Isn't this what you said last night???".

"Yes doctor!! Have you got my child. Where is he??? I want to meet him." madhu said with her eyes fulled of happines and with this she started looking all around searching for her kid.

Seing her so excited rk forgot what he had to say. Seeing her state he became worried if she would overreact but soon controlled himself and spoke "You dont have a child Miss Malik!!!"

Only he knew how difficult it was to say these words but he was waiting for their effect on madhu. As soon as she heard these words her smile disappeared. Her expressions changed from that of diappointment to sadness to anger and then offended and agitated together. Before rk could properly analyse her expression he heard her finally speaking out.

" I do have a child Dr. Rishab Kundra !!!! Last night i dreamt of me with a child. First it was the scene in the hospital when i held my child for the first time, then it was running after him to feed him and then teaching him the alphabet !! I heard his voice!!"

Now it was time for rk to implement his plan. "You must have seen someone else's child Miss. Malik. I said you don't have a child!!"
"I do have a child!! I heard him calling me mama and i m not hallucinating Dr. It is all the truth"
"Ok! Let us for sometime consider you have a child. Then you must be able to answer my questions. Ready??"
"Ofcourse"
"Ok then here goes the test - 1. What is the name of your child???" No answer.

"2.What is his favourite dish???

3. What does he hate most??

4. Favourite colour???" Rk shouted, his voice almost demanding.
But no answers. Rk had thought this test would work but the silence was piercing his ears. He thought it would provoke her to think but things were not going the way he thought.

"Well if you are not answering Miss. Malik i would not ask further and hence prooved you don't have a child!! Because if it was your kid who you saw in your dream you would have definitely answered these ques!!"

"You may leave" She wanted to protest but didn't have answers to his questions. Not willing but she left. And once again rk settled down in his chair disappointed. He looked at the photoframe on the table and sighed. He had to wait but how long, no one knew...

After that madhu did not ate anything not even medicines. She was not talking to anyone, especially rk. She was angry but disappointed. She decided to take matters into her own hands and left that night to search for her child as she was lucky enough to find the watchman sleeping.

She walked on the streets looking for her child everywhere she could like a desperate mother.

Luka Chuppi Bahut Huyi Saamne Aa Ja Naa
Kahan Kahan Dhoondha Tujhe
Thak Gayi Hai Ab Teri Maa
Aaja Saanjh Hui Mujhe teri Fikar
Dhundhla Gayi Dekh meri Nazar
Aa Ja Na...

Teri Raah Takey Aankhiyaan
Jaane Kaisa Kaisa Hoye Jiyaa
Dhire Dhire Aangan Utre Andhera,
Mera Deep Kahan
Dhalke Suraj Kare Ishara Chanda Tu
Hai Kahan
Mere Chanda Tu Hai Kahan
Luka Chuppi Bahut Huyi Saamne Aa
Ja Naa
Kahan Kahan Dhoondha Tujhe Thak
Gayi Hai Ab Teri Maa
Aaja Saanjh Hui Mujhe Teri Fikar
Dhundhla Gayi Dekh meri Nazar
Aa Ja Na...
(Luka chuppi- Rang de basanti)

Precap: Madhu in a dark place. Hears a voice. "Are you scared of the dark??"

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