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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another loose thought of mine...

THE ROSE WITH THORNS

It was during one of of his shots in the studio when his dear asisstant Bittuji came in dashing...he had a phone in his hand and was looking completely pale...

B-"Chief...Chief."

Rk-"Kya bat hai Bittuji can't you see I am busy..."

B-"Chief woh woh hospital se phone aya hai...'

Rk-"Hospital se ...ma ,deepali... sab teek tho hain na"

by the time Rk had come alone near the vanity van with Bitujji ...

B-"Chief who babhiji ne...'

Rk-"Madhu ne ...Madhu ko ho kya gaya hai Bitujji.? Kya hua meri Madhu ko Bittuji...boliye na"

B-"bhabiji has taken one whole bottle of sleeping pills"

Rk was beyond shocked,shaking with fear...looked at his assistant to continue

B-" She is in a very serious condition chief..."

However to his dismay even before he could complete he was being dragged by Rk to the car...

The next 20mins and 56 sec was the most fearful ride ever for Bittuji as Rk drove with such a speed that could hav got him a trophy ,had he tried in Formula1 Grandpix...

For Rk every second was stretching into hours... as he reached the hospital he literally ran through the media and press questioning him a million questions...He ran through the corridors to the reception asking the nurse...

rk-"Madhu...Madhubala kundra"

N-"OH that sucide attempt case .room no 201 the ICu..."

For Rk the word suicide was enough to stir all his demons from inside...as he approched the ICU .He saw ma and Sasuma sitting and crying their eyes out..He took long steps to reach them but before he did two pairs of arms pushed him back one belonged to Malik and other to Sultan...In one swift movement sultan was pointing his gun directly on Rk's forehead...

sasuma-"why have you come here Rk to kill my daughter completely isn't it?"

Rk-"No ...I just want to know how she is?

Ma-"I never expected this from you Rishu...No matter how much you behaved like an animal towards her"

Their conversation was interrupted by the doctor who came out...

Trish-"How is she doctor...Meri Glycerine kaisi hai?"

Doctor-"I am sorry but she has slipped into coma..."

Rk-"no... this can't happen.she can't do this to me..." he stepped back holding his head as his world came crashing down.he fell on the floor sobbing but not a single soul extended their hand to offer him comfort...

so shocking that no one understood that a ROSE CANNOT EXIST WITHOUT THORNS

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saijahnavi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow really emotional thought...

great work dear 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really good but just one complaint...RK dialogue " ma---dipali...sab theek tho hai"...Please please change it to "ma...Madhu...sab theek hai..."
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's nice 😛.loved it
Vsoujanya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow very nice! :) poor madhu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow
Awesome OS 👏
Loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Emotional OS... thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tears in my eyes very emotional
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice!👏 great emotional touch but as far as I know Madhu would never attempt suicide...she is strong.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i was going to comment that time but being a groupbie i wasnt able to..pls at least write another part of it..i really like the os..specially the last line..

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