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Laters.Baby

@Laters.Baby

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

unres.

woww love ths update as well...
R.K is developin his feelings as well..
bt his brutal past -_-

Edited by RockchickFaiza - 12 years ago

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Interesting concept indeed! :) I was first surprised when you wrote that RK raped Madhu. Still the plot kept me reading wanting for more. Boy, was I glad I gave this story a chance? It's fantastic! I'm so happy that RK's act was merely an illusion so that Madhu would be alive.

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! Bravo!

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

waiting for chap 5! 👏👍🏼

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indira

@saijahnavi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

really nice updates...plz continue soon...and add me to ur pm list plz...😊

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Just read the prologue and one line pulled me in: " He said he would not let anybody harm her. But then why did he commit such a sin himself."

I'm a sucker for suspense. I'll be sure to catch up with the other parts tomorrow, right now it's 3am!

Anyways, I'd like to add that you are an amazing writer! I like the way you write.

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Sweety

@sweetdear

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Liked the update n chap 5😛... So RK is avenging his mother's death...am sure life won't be easy when master finds out about these ppl now...anxious already to read the next update😆

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indira

@saijahnavi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

really rk's dark past was really touching 😭😭
it's really cheating u stopped in midway...😭

awsome update...😊
plz continue soon
thank u so much fro accepting my request...
pm me again.😊

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

oh god m getting soo desperate now!👏👏

thanks for the pm😊

best story i've read so far!

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Awww RK vulnerable and the thought that Madhu reminds him of her mother is a good sign. This would sure help him change his ways and Madhu can help him with that.

She told me to be a good boy? She has lost her mind!

This line cracked me up! 😆

Haha it's cute how she threatens him. I love these two so much!

RK has a bitter past. It's sad to hear what happened to his mother. That's terribly disgusting and sad.

I'm sure Madhu can help him with her soft side. Poor RK needs her! I really want RK/Madhu to become closer.

Loved the 5th chapter! Waiting eagerly for the next! 😊