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Posted: 12 years ago
Having problems with adding speech marks and apostrophes and all.. Everytime I'm copying and pasting from doc, they disappear *Damn IF* 😡 🤢

Read note at the end if you want explanation on past 😊

Part 15

I didnt want to hurt you he whispered caressing cheeks with the back of his fingers. I didnt want to but.. What ranveer did I can't forget it. She was my baby sister Madhu he murmured out. sach kyun nahi bata deti mujhe? he asked softly.

Darr ta hoon isi liye Madhu responded opening her eyes and looked at him, her eyes filled up with her own tears.

Kisse?

Tumse she replied back softly. You wouldnt be able to bear it RK. jo maine dekha uske baare main tum sunn bhi nahi sakte

Tell me. Give me some peace please he pleaded. tell me you did try

I couldnt she whispered back.

He closed his eyes turning his head away. Why?

Bhai... he..had to make her dance

Had to? What do you mean had to? his voice grew loud and rough.

She nodded. he... this.. this sick psycho took pleasure from watching her dance, watching her exploited, he... b..bhai never spent the night with her RK. I know this much only. He made her dance for the men but he never ever let anyone touch her. Bhai wouldnt have done it ha..had.. had I not been threatened, I know how much pain Alia went through being exploited like that but she knew we couldnt do anything

It was either me or her and bhai was helpless she cried softly.

How did they die? RK asked after a moment taking on the new information.

That man wanted to use her one night but bhai tried to save her, the man failed with Alia so he came for me, bhai did his best to save us, the guar..guards were all injured or something, but bhai failed... he was beaten up before me she sobbed covering her mouth with her palm. H.. he .. tried b. but he died right away.. bhai died in front of me and I couldnt do anything

Alia?

The man dragged her away, then came for me but... but Vikram managed to save me after that I dont remember anything

A... week later they sent 2 burned bodies to us, Vikram broke it to me that night it was Alia and Bhai. Vikram didnt tell me anything else, he just told me bhai and alia were dead

So why did he exploit you? RK whispered as the truth from her settled in slowly.

he.. he never told me, he never answered but he didnt leave me a choice if I refused he used to get the women to dress me forcefully she replied with tears streaming down her cheeks. I.. Im sorry RK. I.. I couldnt do anything

RK shook his head and was in shock as he heard the entire truth from Madhu, sharp jagged chains wrapped around his heart squeezing so tightly he found it incredibly hard to breathe, he stood to his feet and strode out the door whilst Madhu was a crying mess in bed, she pressed her eyes closed and hid her face between her knees sobbing loudly, she relived the night once again, she felt guilt choking her with full force, she hated herself for not being able to save his sister, she felt guilty for not being able to save her brother.

RK jumped into the car and drove, he didnt stop, he wasnt thinking at all, he didnt know the truth, all he had heard was half of it, now hearing the rest killed him, no one was at fault, no one at all. Who can he put the blame of his sisters death now? He was so lost in his thoughts he didnt know where he was going, he heard Madhus pleads over the nights, he remembered how he blamed her, how he treated her, he looked ahead and noted he was heading for a tree, trying to avoid it he changed the gear and tried to reverse but unfortunately it was too late.

***

You bas***d!

Vikram crouched as he was kicked in the stomach.

Where is she? he gripped his hair pulling him up. Where the f**k is she? he roared with anger.

I dont know Vikram shouted back, blood slipping down the corner of his mouth. Shes been taken away! he bit out.

Dont f**king glare the man punched Vikram across his face making him stumble to the ground.

The man straightened and turned his head looking at his men at the corner of his eyes.

Find Her And When You Do Bring Her Alive To Me! Im Going To Make The Bitch Pay The Price

***

The screeching tyres, then a loud crash followed then silence covered the area except the crickets of the night. RK with great difficulty kicked the door open and stumbled out, he hurt his head and scraped his arms but nothing major, the front of car had crashed into the tree leaving the front all battered. He kicked the ground in frustration and let out a yell that echoed in the lonesome area. His Firdaus was innocent all this time, she was innocent and the pain hed inflicted on her for no reason.

His blood boiled in rage, he wanted to know who was after his sister, who was the cause of all this? When he finds out he was going to kill the motherf**ker and torture him in such a way he was going beg for death to embrace him.

He pulled his phone out and called his driver to pick him up.

***

Vikram watched as the men retreated as he was still lying in his pool of blood, his face hurt badly, he could feel his jaw and nose had some serious damage, he couldnt move his fingers in his right hand as he stood on his fingers making sure he broke them under his boot.

With his left hand he slowly pulled out his phone and dialled the number for Ranveer.

Vikram he heard Ranveer speak.

Mm.. Madhu.. You need to find her. He knows.. He knows Madhu isn't here. Singhania Knows and hes after her

Ranveer closed his eyes, his sister was now in danger, he didnt know what to do, her life was in danger both ways, RK then Singhania. Rahul Singhania.

***

He entered the room to find Madhus head buried in her knees and soft sobs escaping, his guilt heightened, he dragged himself and settled before her.

His hand reached her folded hands across her knees, Madhu picked her head up instantly seeing RK, her chin tremble trembled as the tears continued to stream down her cheeks, unable to hold herself back she wrapped her arms around his nape and hugged him.

***

I want to come with you Alia announced as she saw Ranveer getting ready.

And what? Get yourself killed. Hes after your blood Alia and I dont want you in anymore trouble He responded sharply.

She slumped onto the edge of the bed. Its all my fault she covered her face crying. Everyones life is in danger because of me

Ranveer walked over to her and kneeled pulling her hands away. Nothing is your fault. Nothing at all he replied. Dont ever blame yourself for that psychotic bas***d

If I only said yes then he wouldnt have done anything

Stop it Ranveer responded sharply. Dont mention all that again. No one holds you responsible. No One At All

But.. mere waje se Madhu.. bhai is probably hurting her she cried.

Ranveer closed his eyes turning his head keeping his eyes on the floor. I just hope not he whispered, his eyes burned knowing RK may have gotten some wrong information or even half the story, like Madhu was precious to him, Alia was precious to RK and he would go to any extent.

I have to go now. Dont even step out this room, you hear anything at all, slip into that small trap I showed under the carpet so they wouldnt find you, I need to go and find RK and Madhu before anything happens he told her then stood to his feet.

Alia grasped his hand. Im scared

Ranveer cupped her cheek. Dont be. I promise you Ill be back, I won't let anything hurt you. Just trust me

Alia nodded and let his hand go as he moved, she watched as he retreated, closing the door behind him soon silence covered the entire room. She swallowed thickly and made a quick prayer hoping everything goes well for them.

What else did destiny have in store for them?

Precap - ???

Right being honest here I know some may not be pleased with the past as some of you might have had huge expectations or something and if someone is disappointed then I'm truly sorry for it, this is my first actual dark story so please do excuse me. I myself am kinda upset about this past =(

Its short I know and I had promised a long one, plus I had said I'm going to update Nikah, The Undeniable And Forever but honestly I cannot update today . Only had an 1 hour's sleep last night because I couldn't sleep for some reason 😔 *Damn my brain and eyes 😡* so totally tired today, dragged myself throughout the day 🤢, my eyes are literally closing here 🥱

If I can then I'll update tomorrow, sorry for crushing your hopes of getting an update for the other FFs.

Pms Tomorrow

Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update... thankgod rk knw truth, doesnt matter dat its half atleast now he dont hurt madhu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank god rk finaly knows that madhu is innocent.and there's more for the story to unfold.many missing links are to be linked.dnt be upset that you couldnt make it much scarier coz its still a half truth and when the whole truth is revealed you can make it even more dark the way you expected it to be.loved the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update. cont soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nc updt.. Sum secrets are out waitn 4story to fully unfold.. Am glud to it
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant update and superb twist
i am in love with the concept 😳
please keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update... You have an amazing ability to write. Please can you post a link to all your other works.xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just started reading ur ff...
It's going to more interesting now...😉
The back story of rahul singhaniya and his connection to alia,ranveer and madhu...
Pls add me to your PM list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesomee Tanya ..
Keep itt up ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update..!!! Liked it..finally past is out and rishab is gulty..Waiting fir next..!

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