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Sophronia

@Sophronia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Caught up with this now I need to catch up with your MG ffs =)
This story is so interesting and I'm really looking forward to hearing geets part!!
Hope your having a fab Ramadan :) (can't believe it's almost over :O)
Update whenever you get time :) x

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LetsLive

@LetsLive

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

Tanya this story is as beautiful as your style of writing...I cant even think of this kind of a story being produced by the CVs of Madhubala...You have a fab imagination and portrayal...Lotsa wishes to u for Ramadan... Rest I'm just waiting to see how to take out the mystery about all the story characters...its very interesting...DO continue soon...

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angelanki

@angelanki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Awesome update.. wait for the truth 😊

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

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mmradhu

@mmradhu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 13

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Teaser
RK was shocked when he heard the entire truth from Madhu, sharp jagged chains wrapped around his heart squeezing so tightly he found it incredibly hard to breathe, he stood to his feet and strode out the door whilst Madhu was a crying mess in bed, she pressed her eyes closed and hid her face between her knees sobbing loudly, she relived the night once again, she felt guilt choking her with full force, she hated herself for not being able to save his sister, she felt guilty for not being able to save her brother.
RK jumped into the car and drove, he didn't stop, he wasn't thinking at all, he didn't know the truth, all he had heard was half of it, now hearing the rest killed him, no one was at fault, no one at all. Who can he put the blame of his sister's death now? He was so lost in his thoughts he didn't know where he was going, he heard Madhu's pleads over the nights, he remembered how he blamed her, how he treated her, he looked ahead and noted he was heading for a tree, trying to avoid it he changed the gear and tried to reverse but unfortunately it was too late.
The screeching tyres, then a loud crash followed then silence covered the area except the crickets of the night.

Sorry for the delay.

A long one coming up tomorrow 😃

Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Interesting teaser. Waiting for the update.

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

the teaser has me very curious. RK knows some of the truth - enough to know it was not Madhu's fault. But a car accident?? How will Madhu save her love now??