The Presence - A Mini (Precap Prediction) OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read until the end for the mini surprise! I hope my prediction comes true, because that'd mean that RK's back. :)

The Presence

Madhu walked out into the dark night as her mother's words filled her mind. You're not Aryan's mother! Madhu very well knew she had no relationship with the little child she had grown close to, but he helped her forget all the pain she held within herself. He took her mind off of RK and his betrayal. She didn't want to see Aryan leave anytime soon, so she had brought him closer to her with the excuse that men were after his father. Madhu sighed in despair as she came to a stop on the steps in the chawl. She slowly turned her head to the right where her eyes met RK's. You're nothing more than a cardboard cutout who's placed on top of a pole, she remembered back to her words the day she had gone missing. She stared at the billboard with his face and was taken down memory lane. She remembered all their moments, from beginning to end as they flashed before her eyes within a second. "The worst feeling in the world is when you're stuck thinking of all the heartbreaking memories..." she thought to herself. How will I live Didu?! The words from the night he had left her rang through her ears. First that devil, RK, entered our lives and now you've brought another one into our lives yourself. Her mother's words filled her mind once again. She thought back to saving Sultan's life, thrice. She knew everything she was doing was for his son. "His son...not mine." She turned on the steps and began to walk away from the immense image of her heartbreaker. As she stepped up one step, she felt something. Wind blew across her as she felt him. "RK?" she thought to herself as she unconsciously turned back around on the steps. Her eyes shot towards his face on the billboard and then towards the chawl. She felt an odd presence of some sort as she began walking down the stairs. The feeling of someone calling her name dragged her down the stairs. She warily walked towards the center of the chawl and was surprised to see no one, nothing. She sighed as she looked at the emptiness between the gates to the chawl. "Had I just been hoping to see him?" she wondered to herself while she realized she was beginning to miss the man she argued with as though it were her job. She looked towards the ground but then back up into the dark night as the presence she felt didn't disappear. "Is it the bad guys?" Every hair on her body stood on end as she wondered if they had found Sultan. She stepped towards the gates of the chawl cautiously. I stood tall and fought your devil of a father, now you're just going to let that go to waste? Her mother's words returned to her mind and she stopped herself from investigating the presence further. She quickly turned to suddenly bump into someone's chest. She froze as her eyes widened. She slowly looked up to see Sultan. She let out a sigh of relief and stood tall as she realized she had nothing to worry about.
"What are you doing out here so late at night?" Sultan wondered out loud.
"Nothing...I..." she stopped and trailed off as she wondered if she should tell him about the presence she felt. She decided against it as she knew how tensed he would get. She also wanted to avoid having him bring out his gun in the chawl, so she quickly diverted his attention by changing the topic, "You should change...I'll get you some clothes." Sultan looked down at his bloody shirt and then back up at her. He knew he couldn't stay in that shirt forever since it would frighten the people in the chawl, so he nodded his head. They both then began walking back together. Madhu still felt the presence and couldn't help but look over her shoulder. She sighed as she saw nothing but darkness. She told herself to forget about it as she walked up the chawl steps with Sultan. RK peaked through the chawl gates at Sultan and Madhu as they walked side by side.
"Sultan..." His blood began to boil as he hid himself from clear view once again. He reached into his pocket angrily and pulled out his phone.
"Bittuji, I want Madhu back at work tomorrow."
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ColdEnchantress thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesummm OS Pritu!
Loved it..! <3
I so badly wish it to happen in the show tomorrow! I want to see RK come back tomorrow! Missing him very badly! :(
Edited by shanaya123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanaya123

Awesummm OS Pritu!
Loved it..! <3
I so badly wish it to happen in the show tomorrow! I want to see RK come back tomorrow! Missing him very badly! :(


Thanks so much! :)
Me too! I'd love to see him tomorrow!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely os.
🤣🤣
in your Os also RK should bbbfy bittuji for Madhu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: katrina75

Brilliant!! nice prediction!!!


Thanks so much! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nanibommana

Lovely os.

🤣🤣
in your Os also RK should bbbfy bittuji for Madhu.

Thank you! :D
And 😆!!! Should've added that in.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u shoud write for the show! really good x😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: xxROSHxx

u shoud write for the show! really good x😉


Aww that's so sweet! Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I also think it's that sixth sense madhu and rk have and feel each other close.

So most likely it is RK down there, and like you said he will see that Sultan is at the chawl with Madhu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i want rk back now
awsum one

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