Sulbala SS: Best part of me Chp1-pg 4 3/04 updated

Shru

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi Sulbalaians, This is Shru😳 here presenting SS: Best Part Of Me, and I have brought you a surprise.

I know not many of us are here in this forum by us I mean 'Sulbala' fans.. Well I like Rkbala but currently loving Sulbala chemistry..Hayeee its so hot😳😳😳

" Please note this is for SULBALA fans..If u DO NOT LIKE THIS JODI THEN IGNORE THE POST...NO BASHING PLEASE"... HEALTHY Criticism welcomed😆

Disclaimer :

'This is my first story on Madhubala forum.. Please Note that any resemblance to any other story on IF especially MB forum is unintentional. But do inform me personally as I dont read MBians works..!😳

Thank you :

I heartily thank Paro aka Absoluv for her support and namkaran of my SS.😉🤗 and all the Sulbala and AR AT members for their positive comments and just for being their fan

Please Ignore:
Kindly ignore my spell errors and grammatical mistakes..I'm still new to this writing world.

Now please read...😉

Short Story:

Best Part of Me

Index

Background Intro below

Chapter 1

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago

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Shru

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This story in Background Intr starts few weeks since yestarday's on the run for safety...

BackGround Intro

'Miss Madhubala, for you're kind information I'm a Don.. 'The Don' he roared in anger.

Madhu clenched her kurti tightly with her eyes slowly forming some tears.

'Miss Fragile! Stay away from me and my son I don't need you're advise whatsoever! You Understand' Sultan once again roared.

Kaka fastened his walk and interrupted 'Sultan..' in a mere second Sultan raised his hand signalling Kaka to shut his face.

Madhu controlled her anger just for Aryan's sake.

But soon she busted out with words 'Sultan 'The so called Don' I'm not you're Personal Assistant, that you could ask me to understand'

'I'm here to take care of Aryan until you start treating him like a child. I won't let you spoil his childhood. Moreover I am…' soon she was interrupted.

'Who are you to tell me if he's a Child or an Adult' questioned Sultan.

'No-one absolutely no-one' Madhu took a silent deep breath as she continued 'But since I'm taking care of Aryan, it is my duty to inform you how to treat you're kid. Do you understand?' She completed with a slight smirk and a raised eyebrow.

But before Sultan could say another word she stormed off to her room murmuring under her breath.

Sultan gave a short death look as he thumped on the sofa to Kaka before he continued to stare at Madhu's retreating back.

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Please leave you're valuable likes and comments below and let me know should I continue it or not?

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AvNeil123

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow Shru lovely start, looking forward to reading more!!

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-MERRY-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice SS, really like your writing style. plzz update soon

Edited by Merry_Shwit - 12 years ago

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Absoluv

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Posted: 12 years ago

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SUPER starting Shru dear...🤗...I told u earlier & I am telling u again...I LOVED IT...Please do continue writing more...it will be interesting to see SULBALA nok-jhoks and the blossoming LOVE 😉...Love the TITLE...here is song that I want to dedicate to SULBALA & your SS...😛

[YOUTUBE]http://youtube.com/watch?v=fC0YoPeDebE[/YOUTUBE]

I want you to know the best part of me

I want you to feel my heart and life's harmony

Even I know sometimes it's hard to see

That I'm nothing without you

And I can't breathe without you.
I want you to know that life's on our side

And when I'm alone you're still on my mind

Knowing myself I can no longer hide.

Cause I'm nothing without you

And I can't breathe without you
I want you to know the best part of me

I want you to feel my heart and life's harmony

Even I know it's hard to see