A Pkyek & Mb Mix FF :- Part 1 Updated On PG.12. - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
I was not sure what to expect but WOW! I really like the concept.

I always liked Sid from PKYEK so i love that you have included him here. I can't wait to see where this goes. Pls cont!!!

Can you PM me???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 4ever4love

I was not sure what to expect but WOW! I really like the concept.


I always liked Sid from PKYEK so i love that you have included him here. I can't wait to see where this goes. Pls cont!!!

Can you PM me???


Thankyou so much!! 😊 I'm really glad you liked the concept. 😃
Well Sid is my most fav charachter from pkyek.So He have to be here. 😉 😳
Ok dear,I will pm you. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: janvie


Thankyou so much!! 😊 I'm really glad you liked the concept. 😃
Well Sid is my most fav charachter from pkyek.So He have to be here. 😉 😳
Ok dear,I will pm you. 😊


Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
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Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!


Your Welcome. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1



A girl was laying in a vulrerable condition in the hospital bed.She was loosing her consciousness When the boy in the front holds her hand and said,"Nothing will happen to you Tanya.Just don't close your eyes.I will not let anything happen to you my love." Rishabh said these in betwn his tears as his Tanya was taking the last breathes of her life.He cupped her face and asked her,"Who did this to you Tanya?How did all this happened?Tell me Tanya How?"As Rishabh asked this question,Tanya tried to mumble something."Rish...Sidharth ko Ma..ii..."She could only utter this much as Her breathing became heavy and She took her last breath in front of Rishabh.

"No Tanya,You Can't leave me.No."RK said before woking up from his dream.He was sweating heavily and badly as he ran a hand up from his forehead.He instantly took a glass of water which was kept on his bedside and sipped it fully to relax himself a bit.He looked at the wall-clock which was showing Three-Twenty.He sighed as He got up from his bed and went to stand in the balconcy joined with his room.He took in the cold-breeze which was brushing against his hot skin as He layed on his arm-chair in the middle.He was feeling much lighter than before coz of the amount of fresh and cold air He was getting in the balcony.
I can never forget the night when my Tanya took her last breath in front of me.This nightmare was nothing in comparision with the pain I went throught that night.I was helpless,ould not do anything to sve her.But The fact that everythitng happend because of Sidharth was enough to broke me completely.I was shocked beyond words.How could He do that?I never understood Why Sid did that.Maybe coz He was never bothered to give me an explanation.It was actually true.He never gave any proper reasons behind his that action.The police investigated but didn't find any solid proof against him.So They released him and closed the case.I'm happy they closed it,not bcoz He is my brother but bcoz I want to punish him myself.He have to pay for his sins,for the pain He have given me."
I was thinking all these but Still the Rishabh inside me always made me to think again.The little brother inside me still cannot accept that his big brother can do all this to him.The brother who have always protected me from everyone,saved me innumerable times from Dad,Always took my blame on himself and covered up all mymistakes.The brother who once used to call me as his life,Who was My life,My inspiration and My biggest strength took away all my happinessm from me.It was really hard to accept it but Sid said that He did it.accepted it but never give any reasons.I remembered He used to say that She don't loves me and Sid even used to dislike her.But That doesn't gave him any right to kill her.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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"I hate you Sidharth.Just Waiting for Your Comeback to India now with your so called little sister.Then I will destroy you completely Sid.The way you took away my love from me,even my brother(Refered to Sid),I will take away this girl from you.And Destroy her happiness along with you."
RK said to himself in anger and hatred as He stood and goes inside his room.It was four.thirty already and He decided to sleep again.So He went to his bed,closed his eyes and dozed off after sometime.


In USA,New York.


At Raichand Mansion


Madhu was packing her suitcases as her lips was curved in a big smile.She was very happy and
excited to go to India.It is for the first time that Madhu was going there.She convinced Sidharth for the deal in Mumbai and even about starting a new business venture there by buying a big company in India shifting most of his work there.
As She was packing her stuffs,Madhu heard the noise of someone clearing his throat to grab her attention.
She turned around to find Sid leaning against the door of her room smiling and smirking at her.The instant Madhu saw him.She ran towards him and hugged him in excitement.It took Sid a moment to understand the action of Madhu and then He smiled and hugged her back in response.They both parted after a while and Then She spoke,
"Bro,I'm really excited to go to India.It would be so much fun.I just can't wait anymore."
"Relax little princess,Itni Excitement is not good for your health,I don't want my sis ill till we reach there."Sid spoke innocently pulling her leg.
"Bro."She said with a cute angry pout.
"Ok,I'm Sorry Princess.I was here to see if you are done with your packing."
"Ya Bro,I'm done.See."She smiles and point towards her three big bags(travelling bags with wheels.)
Sid looked at her bed and find three big-bags fully packed.He turned and stared at Madhu in shock.
Sid :- "What the Hell is That little Sister?!Are you planning to kill me with so much luggage?!"
Madhu :- "But Bhai Its Just Three.Pls?" She said innocently.
Sid :- "Princess,Pls Understand.Three Suitcase and Two mine.I really don't think We two can handle so much.So Pls
Shift your dresses in two and only take the important stuffs.Ok?!"
Madhu :- "Fine Bro,But Only in one condition."
Sid :- "What?!"
Madhu :- "I will be going for shopping the sameday We'll reach Mumbai.Deal?"
Sid :- "Don't you think We'll be so tired for shopping,I mean..."
Madhu :- "Sochlo Bro,Otherwise I will take three suitcases."
Sid :- "Ok Fine princess,Deal accepted."
Madhu :- "Good,Thats like my Sweet bro." She said and hugged him again happily and Sid just smiled at her childish behaviour.Madhu parted from the hug and looked up at Sid who was smiling.
Madhu :- "Bro,Are you Alright.I mean..." She said in serious tone and couldn't complete it.
Sid :- "Ya Madhu,I'm fine.Don't Worry.It's just that I don't know If I'm ready to face that city again after so many years." He said as a painful expression crossed his face.
Madhu kept a hand on his shoulders in understanding and said,
Madhu :- "Bro,I understand that It's difficult for you to go to that city again,Where you split-up with your brother and your family too.But Don't Worry Bhai Everything will be fine.You have to face them one day right,So Why try to hide?And This Time Your Little Princess would also be going with you.We will face and fight with every problem together bravely and strongly." She said in a soothing tone.
Sid was now looking at her with tears welling up in his eyes.His little girl always knew how to lessen his pain.He hugged her this time and then said,
Sid :- "You always know How to make me feel better,I love you princess."
Madhu :- "I love you too bro but more than you do."
Sid :- "No Madhu you cannot love me more bcoz for me you are the only person whom I can call as my own,The only reason of my life."
Madhu noticed that Sidharth was getting emotional So She tried to lighten up the mood.
Madhu :- "Hmm Bro,Me and Your innumerable girlfriends are the only reason of your life." And She winks at him.
Sid :- "Madhu Stop it Now."
Madhu :- "What did I say?" She said innocently.
Sid :- "You can never change."He said with a smile and then grab a pillow from bed and throws at her with a chuckle.
Madhu :- "Bro." She said astonished But Soon She attacked him back with pillows and the cotton wool inside them and soon they both and the whole room was covered with white wool.
Madhu panting :- "God Bro,I'm tired.You are really crazy!"
Sid :- "Ya I'm(He chucles) Ok Now little sister,Enough of Talk and Masti,Pls Pack Your Bags Fast,We have to leave in few hours."
Madhu :-"Ok Bro,I will just do it."
Sid :-"Fine little sister,I am going to my room,Will check my bags once again.Seeyou."
Madhu :- "Seeyou Bro."
And With That Sid leaves the room.

Madhu's P.O.V
I always wonder How Bro manage to smile all the time and seems so happy,Though He is still broken from inside.I know He still misses his family and especially his brother Rishabh alot.But He never told me Why they are not living together.He just ignore this question,When I asked him once and Then I never dared to ask again.I knew It hurts him So I don't want to dig out old wounds.I just want to see my brother happy.
Sometimes I even feel pity on his brother Rishabh,How unlucky He is that He cannot value a brother like Sid Bro.I have talked to Misha manytimes on phone and I know their is some problem between Sid bro and Rishabh.Maybe some misunderstanding.Whatever It is,I just know that my brother can never do something wrong.He is the best.


Madhu and Sidharth both packed their bags soon and headed to the Airport in the evening.

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They reached Delhi Airport next night at 12.00 and Then boarded the flight for Mumbai after 2 hours.Madhu was already very tired from the long and tiring journey.So She instantly dozes off to sleep at her seat.But Sid on her beside was unable to sleep.He was lost in thoughts.

Sidharth's P.O.V.
Tommorow Morning We will be in Mumbai.The city that took away my everything from me.My Mom-Dad,My Gundi sister and my little brother.I know He hates me.But I cannot change it even If I want to.I have to bear this hatred.I deserve it.(Sighs)
Last Time,I have lost my everything,my every happiness in this city,But This time I won't lose Madhu.I won't let any harm to reach my little princess.

After sometime Sid also dozes off to sleep.

Next Morning The Flight landed on Mumbai Airport at 7.00am and all the passangers including Madhu and Sidharth came out.The instant they both came out all the boys were drooling at Madhu just looking at her beautiful face and her perfect appetite figure and on the other hand all the girls were drooling over Sid on his perfect body,sharp-cut feautures and handsome face.Madhu was feeling quite weird with all these boys staring at her like she was some alien.But She knew that this is India and boys are bounds to be like this seeing a beautiful girl like her.So She ignored their constant gazes and continued walking.But She noticed that Sid was lost in some other world.He wasn't even flirting around with girls.
Madhu :- "Bro Why are you silent?!"
Sid came out of his trance as He replied,
Sid :- "Umm,Nothing Princess,I was just tired."
Madhu knew He was lying but She didn't wanted to dig out things.
Madhu :- "Come on bro,So many sexy girls are giving you line here,You Should have selected a Bhabi for me till now."
Sid rolls his eyes as He looked around and chuckles,
Sid :- "Hmm,Little Princess,If you look around properly,There are so many hot boys here as well.How about We chosing a husband for you?" He winks.
Madhu(in shock and anger) :- "What??!Bro Stop it Now!!"
Sid (smiling causually) :- "What? If you can want a Bhabi then Why can't I ask for a Jiju?" He said controlling his laughter.
Madhu :- "Who said I want any of these bimbos as my Bhabi?! Naa,Never."
Sid :- "And Who Said I'll let any of these jokers to be my Jiju?!No Way."
He said putting his hand on his waist and with that They both burst out laughing as they hi-fived each other.
After Sometime,The cars arranged by Sid's Manager came to receive them as they headed towards their new mansion brought by Sid.


Evening,
At Raichand Mansion,

Madhu liked her new home alot.It was even more bigger and beautiful than the one in U.S.A. Sid's taste was very royal and He always choses the best.He have arranged everything in her room according to Madhu's liking.And She was more than happy.
It was around 5.00 and Madhu was getting bore at home.She have rested more than enough as She was
sleeping and resting from the whole day.So She decided to go out for shopping.
She went to Sid's room,
Madhu :-"Bro,I'm going for shopping in mall."
Sid (Shocked):- "What?!But Madhu..."
Madhu :- "No Buts Bhai,Remember our deal...?" She said with a smirk.
Sid sighed as He knew It's of no use to argue with Madhu.
Sid :- "Fine,But Be Back before ten."
Madhu :- "Ok Bro."She said hugging him.Sid also told her to take the driver along for directions as the city was new to her and He knew there was no way Madhu was going to let the driver drive.He have already arranged for both of their driving lisences before coming to India.
He told the driver to take out the car from parking and As Madhu was about to sit inside,
Sid :- "Little Princess,Pls don't end up in police station or yet another arguement.I'm too tired to fight for you today."
Madhu :- "Umm,Ya Bro,I will take care." She said smiling nodding her head as She sat in the car and droves off from there.
Madhu was driving the car smilingly in high speed and full vol music.She was a speed maniac and always ends up hitting cars or other vehicles.Though She don't cause any harm to the people but their cars and vehicles surely get damage.

In City Mall,
RK was doing shopping for himself.He was almost done with it and went to the parking area with his shopping bags and kept them on the back seat of his car.He went ahead and sit on the front seat and started driving
When suddenly He felt his car being pushed forward from behind with a heavy force and it was about to hit the wall in front but stopped just a few inches before as RK hit the brakes on time.He realized that someone had hit his car from behind.Though He was safe but Someone dared to harm his favourite Black Mercedes was more than enough to boil RK's blood."What the hell?!!" He said to himself as He stepped out of the car in anger.

It was Madhu who hit him from behind accidentaly as She didn't noticed him taking out his car and also bcoz of her highspeed She was unable to control it the last moment.And The result was this accident.Madhu was feeling scared and guilty as it was her fault and She decided to face the person and apologize.She told the driver to stay inside only until she comes back and also told him that Sid should not know about this accident at all.
Madhu grabbed her handbag and mobile as She stepped out of the car gathering some courage.


Note :- Okay Guys,That was Part one.I know It got really long and boring.But This was the introductory part and So It got over-descriptive at times.But actually all that was intentional Bcoz that will lead to Rishabala meeting.Actually Their meeting was alsto planned for this part,But the update is too long already.So It would be in next part.And Ya from next time,I won't be overdescriptive like this one,It was actually needed.So I'm really sorry for a boring update.

P.S. :- Pls Do Tell me Was It Good enough and Should I continue? Otherwise I will quit this FF if you ppl don't find it good.So Do Give me your reviews.Pls Comment.
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Edited by janvie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: punam2712

NICE START

CONTINUE SOON


Thankyou. 😊 The update is underconstruction on Page.11. 😉 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊whnever u update dont frget to pm me dear...
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😊whnever u update dont frget to pm me dear...


The update is underconstruction ON. PG.11.😳 And Yup I will pm you. 😊

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