RishBala OS Updated Pg 17:Madhu shot, RK realizes - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I WANT BOTH
AND SOME SERIOUS GROVELLING BY RK
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Posted: 12 years ago
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vow vow vow three for three parts. it is so good. hope u were the part of cv team of MBEIEJ. loving it and please update it soon and if possible please pm all the parts to me . want to read itA GAIN AND AGAIN.
THANKS A LOT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part I: Page 1; Part II: Page 6; Page III: Page 8...read these before Part IV.
Part IV:
Next morning Madhu has been shifted to her room. RK had the best room for his biwi. The room had been filled with thornless red roses (remember the symbolism) for his biwi. Madhu was exhausted but also stunned. RK had whispered such sweet and romantic stuff that she was not sure if she wanted to believe it. Madhu sighed...her bikda bacha was so confusing.
Her room door opened and Aryan limped in. Madhu smiled at the innocent face. Aryan attempted to sit on the chair but could not. RK walked in and Aryan froze. RK looked at the kid and said "Bhoot dekha hai kya, itna dara hua kyun ho". Aryan said " Tum mere tang.." RK" Tumara tang kya..acha bala toh hai. Chalo little star bait jao aur mere darling Biwi se baat karo". Aryan looked at Madhu smiled. Madhu smiled back. RK looked at both and smiled. Aryan told Madhu "Tum theek ho, ab mere saath tum ludo khel sakthe ho aur panja bhi". Madhu said "Haan, jab mein strong ho javoongi, toh dekhna mein tume hara doongi". Aryan smiled. RK said "Madhu aur tum ne panja kab khela". Innocently Aryan replied "Jab mein bhimar tha toh Sultan ne Madhu ko kidnap kiya...tab". Madhu could observe RK's face tighten. She tried everything to keep RK away from Sultan but she failed. RK told Aryan " Little Star, ice cream kavoge". Aryan said "Sultan...". RK " Sultan ka ice cream brand nahi hai...Dairy Queen (brand) chalega". Aryan looked confused and Madhu hid a smile and said "RK, bache ke saath majak nahi". RK looked at her and said " Biwi..uuuh sorry, Madhubala bacha nai hai star hai wo". RK called out for Bittuji and asked him to take Aryan for an ice cream.
RK and Madhu were alone. RK looked at Madhu and she looked tired but beautiful. How an why did I distance her from me. She had loved me like no other and I ruined it. But I knew that she still loved me...more than her life. Now I had to convince her of my intentions...She looked up at me and said "maa kahan hai". I said "aa jayegi, mandir gayi hai". Madhu wanted to lie down and immediately I helped her. Her hair fell on her face and I immediately moved it. She looked at me stunned. I could not resist and kissed her on her forehead. Madhu surprised. She looked at me and began to talk. I shushed her with a deep kiss on her lips and she pushed me away...red in the face.
Madhu was stumped at RK. Why was he doing this to me...God, he was sooo confusing. I was not sure of him or his feelings. What if he is playing me again? What if he breaks my heart? BUT then why was I waiting for him to be with me? Why did his words make me fight death? Why did my heart rule over my head? Why did I respond to his kiss? Why did I want to be a mother to his kids? Why did I want to sleep with him? Why did his touch make me shiver? Uff, RK...I LOVE TO HATE YOU BUT I CANNOT.
Sultan saw all this from out. He felt a hand on his shoulder. He looked around and turned to see Radha Kundra. She had tears and asked " Kaise Ho Sultan". Sultan replied "Theek hoon Ma" and then he stopped. She was no longer Maa...she was RK's mother.
DID YOU ALL ENJOY???
COMMENTS NEEDED FOR ENCOURAGMENT...I MISS RISHBALA SO MUCH.
Edited by UK_VS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
that was an awesome update :-):-):-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awesome updates.Continue Soon

Thanx for PM
PM me when update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
great! just pm me when u update the next part! =)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot . lovely and wonderful. all four parts/ will be interesting to read how RK will assure MB that her intentions are pure this time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Yayy!! Madhu woke up!! Thanks to her Superstar Husband Rishabh's sweet words. *i want to see it happening in the serial also*

RK and Aryan convo was cute. Loved it.

Update soon.. With loads of Rishbala moments. Missing them :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Holy shitt!
Ma??
Okkay this is weird! but amazingg!
Loved it Madhu-RK are just Wow!!
continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Amazing update 👏
Eagerly waiting to know about Sultan's identity 😊

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