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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: queenie11

Your writing is so good - it's left me so disturbed. There was a point in the story when I couldn't read anymore

You have a very powerful way with words I'm very amazed

Thank you very much🤗 Your words are encouraging.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona

Thank you Soujanya. Yes, I don't know what to do with this man😡


MAKE HIM SUFFER! lol This specimen 🤢 needs a taste of his own medicine sometime!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

MAKE HIM SUFFER! lol This specimen 🤢 needs a taste of his own medicine sometime!

Hmm I am not sure about the future of the story so, I do not want to comment too much on that. However, I will keep an element of realism in this one. You may start the dissection now if you wish😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona

Hmm I am not sure about the future of the story so, I do not want to comment too much on that. However, I will keep an element of realism in this one. You may start the dissection now if you wish😆


hahahha well I would like to the dissection in the hands of Madhubala Shamsher Malik! 😉 REVENGE MODE! 😲 But realism would be nice, KEEPIN IT REAL! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god! you really are a good writer. seriously i thought that he died until i went through the entire update.

this is the most amazing update of yours that i have so far read.

loved it. totally totally loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

oh god! you really are a good writer. seriously i thought that he died until i went through the entire update.

Thank you. I would much rather read lovely comments like this :)
this is the most amazing update of yours that i have so far read.
loved it. totally totally loved it.

🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry for the late comments !

Had been busy lately and so I am commenting on all the three chapters together !

Chapter 3 !

Superb update !

Nevertheless to say the update was HILARIOUS !

Especially the title

It just cracked me up, "Moti Begum"

RK is one painter I have never heard about !

He is a mental person !

Though that is not something new …...

But hope he was not serious about all that he said ……….

I am still not sure if I am ready to see Madhu in the painter style

Chapter 4 !

Nice update !

Liked it !

Waiting to read how the story turns out !

Chapter 5 !

Nice update !

I really thought that she had killed him !

The way you mixed the two scenes was really fabulous !

But well I hope you are not going to end the story like this, are you ?

The update was kind of emotional !

You are a amazing writer !

Your way with words leaves me totally speechless !

Wanted to ask you something, if you don't mind ……………

Are you really going to keep RK the villain till the end ?

I mean is he going to change or are there going to be other twists ?

Anyways I know it is not like you might disclose but just couldn't help asking ………….

Continue soon ……………

Thanks for the PM !

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Posted: 12 years ago
Caught up with the first chap..

RK is quite the eccentric artist..And Madhu, a bride forced into his eccentric world..
A unique idea..I am sure its going to be an intersting read..

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