Originally posted by: queenie11
Your writing is so good - it's left me so disturbed. There was a point in the story when I couldn't read anymore
You have a very powerful way with words I'm very amazed
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Originally posted by: queenie11
Your writing is so good - it's left me so disturbed. There was a point in the story when I couldn't read anymore
You have a very powerful way with words I'm very amazed
Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
MAKE HIM SUFFER! lol This specimen 🤢 needs a taste of his own medicine sometime!
Hmm I am not sure about the future of the story so, I do not want to comment too much on that. However, I will keep an element of realism in this one. You may start the dissection now if you wish😆
Originally posted by: --Udhay--
Awesome update 😊
Originally posted by: tanuja.siri
oh god! you really are a good writer. seriously i thought that he died until i went through the entire update.
Thank you. I would much rather read lovely comments like this :)this is the most amazing update of yours that i have so far read.loved it. totally totally loved it.
Sorry for the late comments !
Had been busy lately and so I am commenting on all the three chapters together !
Chapter 3 !
Superb update !
Nevertheless to say the update was HILARIOUS !
Especially the title
It just cracked me up, "Moti Begum"
RK is one painter I have never heard about !
He is a mental person !
Though that is not something new …...
But hope he was not serious about all that he said ……….
I am still not sure if I am ready to see Madhu in the painter style
Chapter 4 !
Nice update !
Liked it !
Waiting to read how the story turns out !
Chapter 5 !
Nice update !
I really thought that she had killed him !
The way you mixed the two scenes was really fabulous !
But well I hope you are not going to end the story like this, are you ?
The update was kind of emotional !
You are a amazing writer !
Your way with words leaves me totally speechless !
Wanted to ask you something, if you don't mind ……………
Are you really going to keep RK the villain till the end ?
I mean is he going to change or are there going to be other twists ?
Anyways I know it is not like you might disclose but just couldn't help asking ………….
Continue soon ……………
Thanks for the PM !