FF~Sweet Dreams#2/ R&B and other stories link- 153 - Page 15

Originally posted by: RockchickFaiza

woww woww woww di!!!!! 👏
i guess my wrds r less today fr ur update...speechless ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏

today's best part was d whole seaside's part & i can say today madhu stole it fully...
rishabh was also not less 😆

di i m livin near Ocean(Miami) so i knw hws d feelin wen anyone frgt thmslvs infront of its waves...
so i can feel hws Madhu felt...

"They walked side by side, hand in hand on the beach, stealing furtive glances of each other, wondering, hoping, wishing"
this line...Oh gosh!!!!!wat a beautifully u written...

yeee thy stop to cll ech other bee & grey...😆

& last part whr madhu was sayin about wrlds end..i felt lyk rishabh also felt "his world also gonna end, which is around madhu"
his possessiveness, his pain, his scared to loose her, HIS LOVE FR HER...evry sides superbly described here ⭐️
& last bt d best part wen thy wr about to KISS ☺️ & rishabh was willin to give...
bt damn man...madhu broke it in middle 😭😆
i hope nxt tym its gonna b happen perfectly 😉

u gave 1 of d best treat today di 😃

🤗

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Awsm update Simi.The last scene...uff they almost kissed.

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Awesome update. Plz update daily. I wake up every morning and first of all, check my inbox for ur pm. It has become a part of daily life.

Originally posted by: didlr

ooo...it was tooo good. They were going to kiss, but its good they didn't. I'm sure u have something better planned.

But really enjoyed reading the entire update.

thanks fr pm di:)

Ps- great poem/lines

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

Wow! One of the best updates ever! Fantastic update. Hope RK clears Madhus doubts some time near future.

Originally posted by: Desire6

Simi a great start to my day aftr readn ur update luv u 🤗 nd dis was one of d best best update til date.. Fantastic.. Frm start b it abt leo... Truly said i luv dat movie a lot... Nd dat beach part 🤗 oh dey were abt to kis bt damit madhu broke it ..nd last line 'I'LL HAV U ND DEN KIL U IF IT S D LAST THNG I DO' NOW I HAV HOPE🤣 eagerly waitn 4next update ..bye

Originally posted by: mevanp

Just Say it Madhu for once what u feel...!
bt I can understand Madhu as she does'nt wanna keep any hopes again ...
'but dying happy is always better than dying lonely..' I loved this line... 😊

Superb update Simi... 😊

Originally posted by: chandan811

simi...its sooo awesome...love it by heart...

most of the times, i read ur update 2/3 times...

i think this part i have to read numerous time...

isse kehta hai junon...

isse kehta hai ishq...

Originally posted by: Clara20

its just amezing dear...best update...i loved the way rishab said dont dare to run from him...

Originally posted by: Syed695

Superb...~! Awesome, This update was mixture of everything...n Rishab finally asked her to blurt out the truth remove the frustration...but she is a tough nut.😆..loved it..❤️specially the last thoguht...'

I'll have you, then I will kill you, if that's the last thing I do.👍🏼

Thnks for the PM Simi...~!