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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy

its true dat i feel disgusted but i cant control myself and read it and found it to b v interesting.the man is feeling disgusted hope he opens up.thanx for pm and continue soon.

the warning more or less serves as a temptation for people to actually read what was meant to transpire at some point or another. I am glad you chose to read it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update
This is one ff I am eagerly waiting to read. And you update so fast. Thank you for that. I ignored your warning and read the last one also. And I must say I was not that disgusted may be because I hate this bewafa Rk, cheater Madhu serves him in a right manner. Feeling sad for Madhu. I hope you are the only one dared to write an intimate moment between rk and dipali. The rest hate them together. Me too. But here fortunately your Rk is already a hated one. So it didn't affect me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry Double Post 😕 😆 😆
Edited by --Udhay-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww thank you for being honest. please do explain. I would love to hear what you have to say.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Udhay--

Sorry Double Post 😕 😆 😆

yeah you had gotten me totally confused for a second. so which one is it?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arya.nair

Fantastic update
This is one ff I am eagerly waiting to read. And you update so fast. Thank you for that. I ignored your warning and read the last one also. And I must say I was not that disgusted may be because I hate this bewafa Rk, cheater Madhu serves him in a right manner. Feeling sad for Madhu. I hope you are the only one dared to write an intimate moment between rk and dipali. The rest hate them together. Me too. But here fortunately your Rk is already a hated one. So it didn't affect me

I like to think that I carry around a chalk box and an eraser because I conveniently draw and erase boundaries😛 you should have seen my opinions a few months ago. I evolve fast, for better or for worse is another topic😆 I am happy you liked it the way you and honestly I was not disgusted either. it is the pre conceived notions of deepali that make her more hated. Thank you for your kind words.
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Posted: 12 years ago
can I somewhat say that u r taking out your disgust on RK

"Shut up, your breath smells like cow dung".

Her flesh brushes against mine as she wafts away my diverse scents.

"When was the last time you used deodorant? I can't stand the stink from your pits. People carry their wives around. Here I am, knocked up and dragging your fat ass from the kitchen to the bedroom because you are too drunk to care how bloated I am"


but whatsoever I liked this part as well as the update but at the end it gave me a tinge of maybe fury ...

"I am only telling you this because more likely than not, you won't remember tomorrow. I miss you".

She runs her fingers through my hair. I kiss the calluses on her tips and she pulls away. She tucks me in, wiping away the salt water that build up in her eyes and mine.

plz continue soon

Edited by aksuji - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aksuji

can I somewhat say that u r taking out your disgust on RK

I dont know, I am not doing anything consciously but I cannot deny since I do not have evidence to disprove the claims.


but whatsoever I liked this part as well as the update but at the end it gave me a tinge of maybe fury ...

I know I perhaps sound cliche but one can never know the extent of love/hatred unless in the shoes of the person emoting. Thus, Madhubala (in my eyes) is allowed these seconds of vulnerability.

plz continue soon

Thanks nimmi :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!read the last 2 updates together...

Dunno what to say...initially I hated RK for what he did but now seeing how miserable he is feel bit sorry...

But doesn't mean he is forgiven coz Madhu goes through a lot more...n I really liked how she deals with him...she is so vulnerable yet strong at the same time...love her for that...😳

Thanx for the PM!!waiting for the next update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Diahh

Wow!!!read the last 2 updates together...

Dunno what to say...initially I hated RK for what he did but now seeing how miserable he is feel bit sorry...
I like it. this is exactly where I would like my readers to be.
But doesn't mean he is forgiven coz Madhu goes through a lot more...n I really liked how she deals with him...she is so vulnerable yet strong at the same time...love her for that...😳
I really like the way you described Madhu, I love the words you used.
Thanx for the PM!!waiting for the next update...😊

thank you as well :)

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