Revenge:SS part 2 updated pg 10(22/2)

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Definitely do continue soon...would love to see what happens further with RK.

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winniepooh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

good to see yr writing here after such a long time...felt deeply for madhu..would love to see a stricken rk ...please do continue...

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Saumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

superb ...god so many of you are so talented that at times I feel what r u doing here ...you ahould be writing full time professionally ...you do know how to use words to hit at right places...kudos girl

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Saumya

@Saumya19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

would love to see the end...

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-chrys-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

superb...👏

plz continue

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sillyme1000

@sillyme1000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow!

Amazing!..

Sad though...but I loved it!

Please continue!

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

😭😭😭

SUPERB, BUT WANT A CONTINUATION

WANT TO SEE RK'S AGONY NOW

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ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome bindu...u r right. I cringe when I read maybe he did it for her...in my eyes, let it be revenge ebcause nothing can justify it. Yes, maybe ending of relatiosnhip was required but there were gentler ways of doing it...he just chose to hurt her the way he did...

waiitng eagerly for next part

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Anamika Sehgal

@sviren

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

oh my god!! it shook me completely !! please continue !!

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Adeeba

@..Adeeba..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

u started it with one of my fav song, i like it a lot.

that was so beautifully written. each words were echoing madhu's pain.

every line, every word was like someone is stabbing my heart.

ur words truely made me feel the pain of madhu.

each line reflecting madhu's bleeding heart, her agony, her failure in love and in trust.

i promise i will never forget this OS.

if u want to continue it, u should sure, but pls don't be affected by others words demanding happy ending, just write what u planned as each story cannot have happy ending.

there are many affecting lines but the best lines were--

As you are my love I am your obsession

Then take this as the sequel to the same... to your game of Ishq and junoon.

Goodbye RK... see you in Hell

others were also fab but i can't write each and every line.

it is surely one of the best OS, actually the best OS i have ever read on Rishbala.

really liked it a lot.