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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
wow, nice.

loved it.

beautifully written

good job

thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Thanx guys for your lovely remarks...
The second part is been posted check the link above at the end of the story under index
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Good Start love it
Do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
This post can only be sent to members by pm
If u want a pm add me...
Left with the scene of Rk and Madhu showing not to love each other but actually love each other.
Now,
At R.k. Mansion
Deepali: I am still with u dear.If u need me u surely can call me (acting seductive)
Rk :Go away...I dont love u...
Deepali :At the end you have finally agreed that Madhu was not for u at all right then u have another option and u know who is it
Rk: Ahaaan>>> I like it
Another option for you go to ur husband Sikky , Bhabhi ji
You are out of my life and also the love of my...(stops)
Deepali: Hun??Love of my...
R.k.:Another one word and i will call the security
Get oouuttt>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>..
Deepali exits and R.k gives a sad luk remembering Madhu and Remembers the moments spent between them...
He finally sleeps dreaming of Madhu



Out at the Chawl...
Madhu alone thinking about R.K.

Madhu :Why did he betray me i did not deserve this I Love him too much
She also tries to forget him bt dreams about him

She keeps crying and telling others that she hates R.K for what he has done bt cannot forget him
Going to the room remembers the scene when R.K. tells her that he does not love her and thinks it for a bad dream...

Next day in the morning her mother

Madhu: Maa what are u doin with my saree and Mangal sutra
Maa:Going to throw it
Madhu: U cannot throw my thingd
i would keep it till i take my revenge from R.k.
(Wants to keep it as a mark of love)

On the sets
Scene with a heroine
Actress: Pati... u r very cute
Rk stops remembers his scenes with her biwi calling her Cute
Director: Rk sir ur dialog Biwi...biwi... where r u biwi...

Rk tries each time he stops
the actress consoles him and tells her to be comfortable

R.K. shouts at the actress...
R.k-- change the dialogs i cannot say this

Madhu wants to join film industry and comes to Rk's sets
They see each other from far have an eye contact
And they again Part ways
Both act to be stuck on their decision
and try to act as if they are no longer amicable
Bt as both turn Madhu starts Crying and R.K depressed

The actress sees this and says------------ Both love each other and are mad for each other then why are they separated??

Rk reaches home and see his and Madhu's picture on the wall he cries
Her maa sees this from behind the door

And then enters...
As she enters R.k. stops crying and breaks the picture by a glass to show his agitation for Madhu::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::;



This becomes a situation Nafrat paaas aane na de Mohobaat door gaane na de
Madhbala ke ishq aur Junnon ko kya naam doon...
To be Continued
Please give sufficient likes and comments so that i can continue happily...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
a v nice update.rk and madhu both r going through a v difficult phase of their lives.thanx for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update..thanx 4 the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Awesome update.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All those who want the story by pm please buddy me...
Continuing the story...

R.ks Maa sees her from outside the room and enters
Rk.--- Munna Paatel come here and remove the picture.
Maa comes inside the room
Maa--- Rishu i know that u still love Madhu am i right na >?? Tell me?
R.k.---maa I dont love her.
Rk was about to tell her the truth but sees Deepali outside the room
Maa...Speak Rishu u still love her naa
R.k.----She is the person i hate the most in the world...
Deepali smirks and goes
Maa--- Rishu i know u love her bt u take ur time and realise it...
R.k. goes to the bed thinks all the good moments spent with Madhu and goes off to sleep

At the chawl...
Madhu is trying to recover for the things done by R.k.
She still does not understand why r.k had done this to her??

She decides that she will make herself capable of becoming R.k's BIWI and show him by also becoming an actor...

In the morning R.k and Madhu both go to the sets And madhu goes to R.ks studio to give the audition
just becoz she wants to see him

At the studio R.k sees Madhu and wants to go and talk to her
R.k----Want are u doin her>>??(acts as if he does not care)
Madhu----- Who are u? Why should i tell u??
R.k.---Ahhan U forgot ur ex-pati so fast>>>

Producer----- Who all have come to give the audition??
Madhu--- Sir i here...

Producer---U are u joking just luk at urself U think u will be selected
R.k.------ Director Sahab,Dekhte hain hw gud is she lets see...

Producer:Ok wat is ur Name...
you dere
Madhu:::...mad...
R.k. ----- Madhubala Rishab...Ahhaaannn... Sorry.
Madhubala Malik
Producer:U know her sir??
R.k.---- Kuch log hote hain jinhe bina jaane bhi jaanna padta hai
R.k goes to his vanity
Producer confused
Ur dress is in the dressing room go and change in the vanity
Spot boy : But sir all the vanities have gone only R.k. sir's vanity is dere.
Producer: Ok then u go and change in R.k sirs vanity as he is not dere
Madhu: Can i not do it in these clothes sir i dont wanna change
Producer: U have to

Madhu goes to R.k's Vanity
R.k is not dere she remembers all the time spent in R.k's vanity

She goe to the changing room and as she is changing R.k come and sits in his Vanity
Madhu does not see him and tries to close the hook of the gown she wore all by herself but cannot

R.k sees her goes to her and Closes her hook.
Madhu tries to leave...
She felt incomfortable

R.k leaves the vanity for her..
Madhu wears a veil over it




As she enters the producer is shocked to see her beauty
He goes and tries to remove the veil
R.k. feels angry and Madhu's tear drops fall down😭
Producer:Who will become the actor and he wants to become the actor
Then someone says that it can be r.k.

And everyone agrees...
But R.k. and Madhu dont agree
And after a lot of time R.k. and Madhu agree...

As they try to act...
They have tears in their eyes and do it very perfect as they remember their old scenes...


They do it very well after remembering all the scenes



R.k and Madhu finally go out well and the producer likes her performance

Madhu is completely broken after this and R.k is also distressed

When they reach home, They remember the time spent the day

Madhu and R.k are still happy for spending time with each other
Their MOHOBBAT is what that is bringing them closer ...




To be continued lets see what happens next

Please reply guys...



Edited by mengisanah - 12 years ago

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