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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: iiDona

thank you very much. I am happy you liked it. unfortunately, an epilogue will defeat the purpose of the ending. I would have to explain & explanation= closure. I wanting the regret from both sides, nothing less & nothing more😊
See you with The Fault in Our Stars

ok dona 'll surely c der.

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Ye kya ho gya? Madhu died. U gave me a shock dear. Pride costed Rk his love.

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: DevilClan
Ye kya ho gya? Madhu died. U gave me a shock dear. Pride costed Rk his love.

you got that right. this was meant to be a tragedy from the get go. all the elements were there. The role reversal, the ambition & the fatal flaw. something or the other catches up to you. that is exactly what happened to Rishbala

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#544

WHAT THE? Oh boy! I did not expect this at all! Madhu died. This has to sink in for me for a little bit. The ending is depressing but, it was beautifully written, I mean I could imagine what it felt like for Madhu when she found out about RK's bad intentions, but wish she took more time to work her feelings out. Nevertheless a great SS! I just always wished for the couple to end up together. It happens so that you always shock people Miss. Willy Wonka! Geez! 😆

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
WHAT THE? Oh boy! I did not expect this at all! Madhu died. This has to sink in for me for a little bit. The ending is depressing but, it was beautifully written, I mean I could imagine what it felt like for Madhu when she found out about RK's bad intentions, but wish she took more time to work her feelings out. Nevertheless a great SS! I just always wished for the couple to end up together. It happens so that you always shock people Miss. Willy Wonka! Geez! 😆

I hold grudges, for long periods of time. Don't think I have forgotten ya'all pestering me about happy endings.😆 This is the ultimate revenge & a sweet one *pats herself on the back*

she took six months girl but, hormone filled, pregnant six months so, I suppose you are correct. then again, you don't know unless you have been faced with the situation (think back to intro psychology Milgram?) K I am done with antic dotes.

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#546

omg wat an update.im usually not a sad end lover but u changed my take with such a breathtaking and heart touching end.madhu story rt from start till end exclusively covered da strength as well as da vulnerability of a person at da same time.rk had meera but madhu is no more, gone with da hope of having a happy family.u ended this ss also 😭😭.

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: vmpy
omg wat an update.im usually not a sad end lover but u changed my take with such a breathtaking and heart touching end.madhu story rt from start till end exclusively covered da strength as well as da vulnerability of a person at da same time.rk had meera but madhu is no more, gone with da hope of having a happy family.u ended this ss also 😭😭.

thank you. I may just use your comment as the official description for the SS.

This was an SS so meant to be under ten chapters. this was the ending I wanted. the rest is a question mark I would like to stay put. I am happy you like the tragic end😊

You Only Live Twice or so it seems, One life for yourself and one for your dreams.

Madhu did not get a shot at either. 😭 Life is unfair.

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shravanikrishna

@vaani21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#548

Ohh! you shouldn't have killed Madhu's character Dona😭

Well-written👍🏼

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: vaani21
Ohh! you shouldn't have killed Madhu's character Dona😭
Well-written👍🏼

I saw not way around it vaani. Thanks for sticking around :)

stay tuned with TFIOS

Edited by iiDona - 12 years ago

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Adeeba

@..Adeeba..

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#550

a sad, no actually a real ending.

u made all of us realize that "happy ending" although this word gives happiness but it seldom occur in real world.

i somehow thought for once that rishab might be doing all this for her money, but i swept away that thought. i thought i am thinking a lot.

but u made us face reality, reality which shows that this world can never see a girl living in peace and happiness.

rishab u have killed her!

i always felt very sad for madhu, her parents literally sold her, she never had a "real love" in her life and for once when she wanted to get it, she was again betrayed, how can she tolerate so much.

i will never forgive Rishab, i swear never, even he repents million times never, u really killed her, it was not a suicide it was a murder planned by u, u made her to choose this decision.

there is no need to cry now, don't say u lost her, u never got her, how can u lose.

u should be happy na, ur so called male ego won, it all started with a plan and ended with her death and ur victory, congratulations to u.

jasleen u made me cry a lot today.

p.s.-sorry anyone who don't agree with my thoughts, but i am not going to change it. if anyone wants me to change them, try to convince me that i am wrong. i am always ready for a discussion.

Edited by adeeba21 - 12 years ago

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