OS:RK's bday on his dad's death anni.-Updt Part2&3 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2 :

(sorry.. its lil filmy... 😊)

RK n Bittuji reach to Madhu's chawl…. its around 11 oclk in night… no one is there… thr was pin drop silent… night looking more dark than RK's life… he yells… "Madhu… Madhu…."

No one comes out… rk is furious now… more than anger… he wants to meet his biwi… he jst wants her around him…. Whenever madhu is around him.. he also feels some life is also there in him… he is alive… he is not just a machine.. a person who has feelings.. who jst don't breathe to live life… bt to live life fullest…

After sometime.. some shadow coming towards RK… she is madhu… she carries cake and coming towards RK.. with sweet smile… whispers in RK's ear.. "Happy Birthday Rishabh…."…. Rishabh is overwhelmed by Madhu's this act… he jst cant find words wht to say…

The world is stopped for both of them… there was deep silence between them.. around them all is in dark.. bt unsaid warmth is flowing between them… thr eyes speaks a volume… they need not any words to say thr feelings…

RK says with his eyes to madhu… which madhu also understands… RK says … "I was alone Madhu.. don't knw from where u come into my life.. n changed it totally…. I was living without dreams.. thr was nobody with me… I was so alone… my heart was so silent… I closed my heart… thr was nothing in my heart.. which was beating to alive me.. bt now its beating for someone… that someone is you Madhu…"

"My desires were died… I even didn't realize fragrance in air…. Bt now u became my heartbeats.. now u entered in my soul… whn I don't find u around me.. I become restless… I want to live in u.. want to live in ur arms… u heard my heart.. u heard my unsaid words… wht else I can ask?... I am incomplete without you… I feel complete with u.. in fact.. we complete each other…"

"I can feel u everywhr now… let my heart merge in you.. Why is there so much distance?.. Let me live in your arms….let me hide in u… "

"It's me and you against this world… u r the only love that I breath.. nothing ever gonna come in between us.. even though I'm from Mars and you are from Venus…"

"When I got u.. I got the whole world…. When I got u.. everything is new…. Since I got u.. I am distant even from myself… When I got u.. I learnt to live.. When I got u.. I got everything…. When I got u… the rain started to be fragrant… since I got u… thr r colors all over… when I got u.. I lost…….. yes madhu.. I lost my heart.. whn I have got u… I have got myself…"

There is some sparks in both the eyes.. Madhu is also saying like… "I think of u all the time.. u live in me all the time.. wht more than this I can love u.. u r in my thoughts all d time.. I m with u Rishabh.. in every sorrow… in every happiness.. in every seasons… I AM WITH U… now don't test me so much… I AM WITH U RISHABH… now u r my whole world.. I feel safe in ur arms… the world is very bad.. lets make our own small world.. whn only me n u r thr… our small world.. with lots of happiness…"

Suddenly light up all over… n all ppl start singing… "Happy birthday to u.. happy birthday dear Rishabh… Happy birthday to u…"…. yes this is the plan of madhu… all family members including Radhaji, Padmini, Shamsher, all chawl ppl gather thr to celebrate Rishabh's birthday.. yes RISHABH's birthday.. not superstar RK's birthday…

to be continue...

PS : sorry if disappointed u... 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Prish 😃
Lovely take 😳
I loved rishab n madhu dialogues 👏
N han sorry my like button is not working.
Keep writing more stuff
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
excellent.loved it.u described rks feelings mesmerizingly.continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Wow! !! Didi so nice n cute n.lovely just loved it n I love Rk n mb dialouge so nice n its ur first Os omg i couldnt belive so nice n.brilantly written.wahooo! !!
N so nicely ur expressing d emotions in Os sooo fab + excellent i loved it saachi dill se muahh muahh muahh! !!!!!
Keep it up didi! !!!
N keep writing plsss! !
Love u bless u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
ok nice bt plz pm me the nxt part :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
I just cant believe its u😳
.tu itni emotional hai
awesome update prish👏...RK's feeling z described superbly

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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
very nice updates Prish👏..i really loved the way madhu celebrating his birthday..their sweet convo..so romantic..it touched my heart...waiting for next part😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Its nice bt can't u show Rishbala romancing alone in their bedroom or studio or evn at beachside or lakeside with tent BUT ALONE.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Awww...very cute...loved it...plz pm me whenever you update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
👏aww you touched my heart. I have this small sweet smile on my face.😊😳
You made me speechless.
Just a request please do not give up writting. Ye kya prish itna acha fun post banati ho os likhti ho. I know tum bohat busy ho so will not able to write daily par kabhi kabar hafte do hafte mien likha karo for all your reader.👍🏼

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