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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrittB

I don't ever remember writing such a depressing OS with such a depressing ending. I remember once I wrote one that didn't end happily and people weren't happy with it. Some individuals criticized me for it...but this OS is partly prediction. And since MEIEJ is going to take a different turn, I have to make this OS fit that. So sorry in advance if I ruin anyone's mood with this...

Read at your own risk! This might really ruin your mood if you're happy right now.

P.S. There's two parts two this (divided by the lines) in the second part: This next part is partial prediction, but it won't happen the day after. It'll probably after halfway through the Balraj track. Also, I don't know what Avinash's name will be in MEIEJ, so I used his original name.

I apologize in advance if anyone is saddened by this. And if it sucks, I just quickly finished it right now and it's 3am, time for me to sleep! :P

Keep in mind it's PARTLY prediction, so I don't believe all parts to this will happen. I just need it to flow in a way and came up with it as I wrote it.

The main idea to this is the whole "doctor number four" thingy, I have a feeling he'll say that to her maybe if he's super hurt.

Anyone not happy with this, go read my happy OS! https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71459340


Doctor Number Four

"Yes Madhu," RK continued with his confession to Madhu, "I love you dammit."

Madhu stood there speechless. The words she wanted to hear, finally rang through her ears. But the words she wanted to say wouldn't leave her lips.

"No, I don't love you because you saved my life..." RK walked past Madhu, "I love you because you came into my life and made me go crazy!"

Madhu let a smile creep onto her face. She turned to face RK.

RK turned to face her at the same moment and grabbed her by the shoulders.

"Tell me you love me too Madhu. Don't let me down," RK stared into her eyes with intense, pleading eyes.

Madhu smiled and pushed herself into his arms.

"RK...I love you. I love you so much. I love you like crazy too."

RK sighed in relief and hugged her.

They remained in their embrace for a moment, when suddenly RK began to push her out of her arms. She looked up at him and he looked at her with his deep look again.

"See this fire?" RK gestured behind him, "I'm going to make you my seven-phere biwi."

A smile exploded onto Madhu's face after she stood shocked for a slight second.

"Not so fast. You're going to have to promise me something before this."

Madhu looked at him confused but willing. She didn't say a word, and then he spoke...

"Leave everything for me," he said as if it were the easiest thing in the world.

"Everything...?" Madhu asked, unsure of what he meant by that.

"Everything."

"Ma..."

"Yes or no."

"RK...you want me to pick betwe..."

"YES OR NO?" his voice echoed and startled Madhu slightly.

"I can't leave my family RK!" she said with a pained look on her face.

RK suddenly thought back to Dipali's words: She doesn't love you RK, all she loves is your fame. You've never been lucky in love and you never will be. First your papa, then your ma, then me, well, you know who's next...

RK's face showed a furious look.

"Doctor number four..." RK let out a slight sarcastic laugh from behind his mask that hid his pain, "I should've known."

Madhu thought back to the day RK had told her everything: Doctor number one: Papa, doctor number two: ma, doctor number three: Dipali. Doctor number four...

Madhu looked up at him in shock. Me?! She thought.

"RK..."

RK ignored her call for him. Instead he grabbed her arm, just as he used to months ago. Not gently...roughly.

He pulled her away as she grimaced in pain. He opened his car door and opened it. He pushed Madhu towards the car and she sat in.

RK got into the car himself and started the car.

He began to drive like a maniac as Madhu sat silently in tears in the passenger seat.

For the first time in a while, her tears had no effect on RK.

After a while of driving, suddenly he slammed on the breaks and Madhu felt her body push forwards but was stopped by her seat belt. She looked at angry RK...old RK.

She looked out the window and saw they had reached home.

She tried to get out of the car but couldn't. RK unlocked the door and she still had trouble. She was struggling because she was in tears and pain and couldn't tell what had just happened.

She hadn't expected their confessions to lead to anything like this.

RK bent over and opened the door for her while taking a glance at her. Once again, her tears remained ineffective for RK.

RK stepped out of the car, as did Madhu. He met Madhu on the other side and grabbed her arm again.

"RK let me go, I can go!"

RK didn't listen to her.

He dragged her to their room and let her go. He pulled out her luggage and began to pack it with her clothes, just as he had done the day he brought her into his room.

Madhu stood silently watching him as she felt her heart breaking. She knew what he was doing. He thinks I'm "doctor number four"...why...how'd I hurt him...

"RK...I..." he ignored her once again.

After he finished packing her luggage, he grabbed her arm for the third time in that day and pulled her towards...her old room.

He released her in her old room and finally spoke.

"Nothing happened between us. Everything is back how it was, understand BIWI?"

Madhu stood silently as tears of pain flowed down her cheeks.

"Forget that you ever moved into my room. Forget that I ever saved your life; forget that you ever saved my life. Forget everything...forget that I ever...I ever fell in love with you." Pain took place in RK's voice.

"RK..."

"No. You listen to me. You want fame right? Well I'll give you fame," and with that, he stormed out of her room.

Fame?! She thought confused as she fell to her knees and burst into tears. She remembered Trishna's words: You'll never be happy...you'll never be happy with RK...


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~A few days later~

Madhu sat in her old room thinking about RK and all their good times when suddenly she received a phone call.

"Hello?"

"Hi, Madhubala?"

"Speaking..."

"Hi, it's Avinash speaking, RK had informed me that you're ready to play the lead in my next movie."

'Doctor Number Four - An OS'
Very good fanfic, Pritt.👏 Kudos.⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
loved the first part ups and downs are a part and parcel of life. lets see how the cv's handle
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another OS... I thought someone has exams 🤣

I'm off to read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc. ..hut I never understand one thing since I read the article. ..why will Madhu want to support her family if she wants fame n anything from RK as dipali said. ..RK should use brain rather than being dumb like his mom...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum predictuon...hop de 2nd part occurs...nt de first...y r dos ppl tryin to make madhubala ek ishq ek junoon a tragic story...wid noo happy endings nd story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice...but i don't want this to happen😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Nice OS...d first part ll happen in any way😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
I had tears in my eyes...the pain..uff😭
you are too good Pritt...I guess we need to be ready for anything now
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
I enjoy all the OSs written by you. Enjoyed this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Superb 👏
I loved the way you dealt with it 👍🏼

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