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Posted: 12 years ago
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I don't ever remember writing such a depressing OS with such a depressing ending. I remember once I wrote one that didn't end happily and people weren't happy with it. Some individuals criticized me for it...but this OS is partly prediction. And since MEIEJ is going to take a different turn, I have to make this OS fit that. So sorry in advance if I ruin anyone's mood with this...

Read at your own risk! This might really ruin your mood if you're happy right now.

P.S. There's two parts two this (divided by the lines) in the second part: This next part is partial prediction, but it won't happen the day after. It'll probably after halfway through the Balraj track. Also, I don't know what Avinash's name will be in MEIEJ, so I used his original name.

I apologize in advance if anyone is saddened by this. And if it sucks, I just quickly finished it right now and it's 3am, time for me to sleep! :P

Keep in mind it's PARTLY prediction, so I don't believe all parts to this will happen. I just need it to flow in a way and came up with it as I wrote it.

The main idea to this is the whole "doctor number four" thingy, I have a feeling he'll say that to her maybe if he's super hurt.

Anyone not happy with this, go read my happy OS! https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71459340


Doctor Number Four

"Yes Madhu," RK continued with his confession to Madhu, "I love you dammit."

Madhu stood there speechless. The words she wanted to hear, finally rang through her ears. But the words she wanted to say wouldn't leave her lips.

"No, I don't love you because you saved my life..." RK walked past Madhu, "I love you because you came into my life and made me go crazy!"

Madhu let a smile creep onto her face. She turned to face RK.

RK turned to face her at the same moment and grabbed her by the shoulders.

"Tell me you love me too Madhu. Don't let me down," RK stared into her eyes with intense, pleading eyes.

Madhu smiled and pushed herself into his arms.

"RK...I love you. I love you so much. I love you like crazy too."

RK sighed in relief and hugged her.

They remained in their embrace for a moment, when suddenly RK began to push her out of her arms. She looked up at him and he looked at her with his deep look again.

"See this fire?" RK gestured behind him, "I'm going to make you my seven-phere biwi."

A smile exploded onto Madhu's face after she stood shocked for a slight second.

"Not so fast. You're going to have to promise me something before this."

Madhu looked at him confused but willing. She didn't say a word, and then he spoke...

"Leave everything for me," he said as if it were the easiest thing in the world.

"Everything...?" Madhu asked, unsure of what he meant by that.

"Everything."

"Ma..."

"Yes or no."

"RK...you want me to pick betwe..."

"YES OR NO?" his voice echoed and startled Madhu slightly.

"I can't leave my family RK!" she said with a pained look on her face.

RK suddenly thought back to Dipali's words: She doesn't love you RK, all she loves is your fame. You've never been lucky in love and you never will be. First your papa, then your ma, then me, well, you know who's next...

RK's face showed a furious look.

"Doctor number four..." RK let out a slight sarcastic laugh from behind his mask that hid his pain, "I should've known."

Madhu thought back to the day RK had told her everything: Doctor number one: Papa, doctor number two: ma, doctor number three: Dipali. Doctor number four...

Madhu looked up at him in shock. Me?! She thought.

"RK..."

RK ignored her call for him. Instead he grabbed her arm, just as he used to months ago. Not gently...roughly.

He pulled her away as she grimaced in pain. He opened his car door and opened it. He pushed Madhu towards the car and she sat in.

RK got into the car himself and started the car.

He began to drive like a maniac as Madhu sat silently in tears in the passenger seat.

For the first time in a while, her tears had no effect on RK.

After a while of driving, suddenly he slammed on the breaks and Madhu felt her body push forwards but was stopped by her seat belt. She looked at angry RK...old RK.

She looked out the window and saw they had reached home.

She tried to get out of the car but couldn't. RK unlocked the door and she still had trouble. She was struggling because she was in tears and pain and couldn't tell what had just happened.

She hadn't expected their confessions to lead to anything like this.

RK bent over and opened the door for her while taking a glance at her. Once again, her tears remained ineffective for RK.

RK stepped out of the car, as did Madhu. He met Madhu on the other side and grabbed her arm again.

"RK let me go, I can go!"

RK didn't listen to her.

He dragged her to their room and let her go. He pulled out her luggage and began to pack it with her clothes, just as he had done the day he brought her into his room.

Madhu stood silently watching him as she felt her heart breaking. She knew what he was doing. He thinks I'm "doctor number four"...why...how'd I hurt him...

"RK...I..." he ignored her once again.

After he finished packing her luggage, he grabbed her arm for the third time in that day and pulled her towards...her old room.

He released her in her old room and finally spoke.

"Nothing happened between us. Everything is back how it was, understand BIWI?"

Madhu stood silently as tears of pain flowed down her cheeks.

"Forget that you ever moved into my room. Forget that I ever saved your life; forget that you ever saved my life. Forget everything...forget that I ever...I ever fell in love with you." Pain took place in RK's voice.

"RK..."

"No. You listen to me. You want fame right? Well I'll give you fame," and with that, he stormed out of her room.

Fame?! She thought confused as she fell to her knees and burst into tears. She remembered Trishna's words: You'll never be happy...you'll never be happy with RK...


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~A few days later~

Madhu sat in her old room thinking about RK and all their good times when suddenly she received a phone call.

"Hello?"

"Hi, Madhubala?"

"Speaking..."

"Hi, it's Avinash speaking, RK had informed me that you're ready to play the lead in my next movie."

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PrittB, Nice one

but i hope cvs are not going to show it in that way

If still RK misunderstands Madhu then CV's wasted their time and our time by showing all those tracks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love u !!! Know why???? Because of the 2nd part :D I actually didn't get much depressed because of the 2nd part coz it made me wonder what will happen after that :) yayyyiieee :P
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked the way u introduced Avinash. He can be a producer too😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first part is almost gonna happen. It is painful to read and imagine, but we have to keep our heart strong. I don't loved it, because i hate the fact it will happen and 2nd part was so short
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE OS DEAR...
sometime hv to face sad prts also though u wrote it well PRITT...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey pritt just loved it yr jo b ho but i always love your os.whatever u wrote i loved it...waiting.
Edited by meenu09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh damn i liked d way u intruduce Avinash hehe! !!! N Awesome os yaar really Awesome just fab! !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey fantastic... plz update soon next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u r d "OS CHAMP" ⭐️ 👏 THANKS for these wonderful OSs (& d PM's) loved them all including this one too 😉.

As per ur prediction i too would love to see Avinash as someone from film fraternity & somehow getting involved & being instrumental in madhu's journey to d stardom. But i want to see him as a positive character (we already have enough of complex characters on board now 😉. I'm all for these twists & turns, b'coz somewhere i believe that d love stories shown on tv generally starts to fade after confession & make way for heavy duty saas bahu drama, but here in this show we can expect something different.

Moreover, i would like to take this entry positively, b'coz here in this story i so believe in madhu's love, positivity & fighting spirit that she will b able to conquer every challenge thrown her way (After all serial ki heroine hai, koi jyada der tik nahi sakta iske saamne 😆 😆)

well jokes apart, going by d title of d show & d characters, it was never intended to b ur regular love story. Aakhir RK jaisa psycho superstar involved hai yahan toh uski love story bhi toh uske standard ki psycho types honi chahiye 😆 😆 😆 😆. So i'm looking forward to some heavy duty melodrama 😛 😊😊 & fabulous OS's 😊 😊




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