FF: Exotic pg90 (The End)

Ammuyana

@Essence..

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Very bad! Just kidding its lovely, I was imagining every dialogues and scenes in my head. Damn girl! You can write. Are you aspiring writer?? You should, Whats your real name? In case in future you published 😉

BTW who is that handsome man in your dp??

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: _MagnificentM_
Very bad! Just kidding its lovely, I was imagining every dialogues and scenes in my head. Damn girl! You can write. Are you aspiring writer?? You should, Whats your real name? In case in future you published 😉
BTW who is that handsome man in your dp??

My name is Jasleen.
Writing aspirations, never had any. That might change😊

The handsome devil, Ezra Miller.

BTW you flatter me too much😳😳

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

It was scary bt also too short. It made me feel creepy (a bit).

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Udhay only

@Udhay

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Fantastic! Loved it..
I relished every bit of this update!
Waiting for next! :)

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: DevilClan
It was scary bt also too short. It made me feel creepy (a bit).

For realzees? For realzees? Please tell you are being serious.

If so, I have done my job.

Thank you. ❤️

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

NICE ONE AT LAST THE SECRET REVEALED...BT IT WAS SHORT ALSO U WRITE IT SO WELL...REALLY U R VERY GUD WRITER DEAR...WAITING FOR LONG ONE UPDATE IT SOON JASLEEN D...THNXX FOR PM ALSOO...

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Wah wah back to back updates.awesome but a choto update.thanx for pm and continue soon.

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Haye Rabba! Easy with short length of the updates.😆 I am trying my best. No, but seriously, this is all the story I wanted to tell for the chapter. Another sentence and it would have been a drag. I will try and update again soon to make.

😊

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

It was short bt superb writn jasleen...secret reveald atlast, but i didnt get, did her father killed new born or unborn baby? Do update next part soon a bigger one ..

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Adeeba

@..Adeeba..

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

finally some truth is revealed. i just loved it. u r a awesome writer.

so, madhu's dad was a bad person, who wants her daughter to be like him & involve in illegal activities & also a brutal husband who put chains around his wife & killed their unborn child. but somehow madhu ran from him & is now with RK. so her father is responsible for her mental stress & now she is hiding from him.

tell me i understood it correctly or not & if i missed any thing.

still a lot of suspense, full truth still to come. how will RK react after knowing about her truth or she will tell him whole thing or not.so plzzz update soon & thanx 4 PM.

waiting 4 update...

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