The 'Almost' Kiss - A Short Prediction OS - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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poison @ dipali...



Originally posted by: PrittB

Hi everyone! This OS was actually requested by unknowngirl. She requested an OS with the precap and Monday's prediction. Sorry it's so short! I actually am kind of busy right now...I work tomorrow and my exam's Sunday which means i have little time to study. Anyways I hope you all like it. :)

P.S. For all the "My Own Rishbala Story - Tum Dena Saath Mera" ff readers. That'll be ending within 3 to 7 parts. You all will enjoy it I'm sure! I just thought I'd share the news. I came up with the perfect ending while at work! :D (Well, I think it's perfect, i don't know if others will like it though haha.)


The 'Almost' Kiss

Hand in hand they locked eyes.

RK stared deep into the beautiful brown eyes of his wife as she stared back.

His eyes moved towards her mouth...her smile...he thought as he got up and slowly released her hand.

Madhu watched his every movement keenly.

RK turned to face his wife as he stood and then bent. He placed his arms beneath her and raised her from the bench.

Madhu's eyes remained on him, as she was speechless at this sudden change in RK.

When RK came to a stop, he slowly placed her down in front of her. They locked eyes as RK placed his hands around Madhu's face.

He began to move closer.

As he got closer and closer, Madhu closed her eyes. A sense of warmth and comfort overwhelmed her as her face rested in the warm, soft hands of her newfound love.

Her sweet scent ran through RK as he closed in on her slowly.

Madhu felt his cool breath near her lips. She inhaled as his minty cool breath got closer and closer. She felt his breezy breath pass through her lips and within her. An instant pleasant shiver ran down her spine as butterflies gathered in her stomach.

RK stopped just before her lips. He slowly ran his finger across her lips and towards the chocolate on the side of her lip. He gently wiped it away as he remained close enough for them to taste each other's breath.

RK stared at her for a moment from such close proximity.

It was in that moment, the moment Madhu didn't back away for the first time, that RK's suspicions were confirmed. She loves me, he thought as he kept close and stared at her passionately. For the first time in years, he felt glad to be loved. He felt warm inside.

RK's scent began to draw Madhu in; she slowly began to reduce the distance between their lips when suddenly his cool breath disappeared. His warm hands no longer held her face.

Madhu opened her eyes slowly. She saw RK still close in proximity but not as close as seconds ago.

She didn't mind that he pulled away; she felt he wasn't ready and she didn't know if she herself was ready either. She smiled at him.

"You...you had chocolate on your lip." RK said slowly as he watched her passionately.

Madhu looked down and then up at RK and laughed.

She got close and ran her finger across his lips as well. She gently wiped away the chocolate on the side of RK's lip as RK's eyes followed her hand.

She raised her finger and showed him the chocolate, "So did you," she said as she smiled.

RK laughed and placed his hand within Madhu's, "Are you hungry? The foods waiting for us," he said as he gestured towards the table.

Madhu smiled and nodded her head as RK lead her to the table, hand in hand.

They both sat as RK lit a candle.

Madhu began to raise the spoon when RK stopped her.

"Nuh biwi. Today I'm going to feed you again," RK moved his chair in front of Madhu's.

He slowly took the spoon from her hand and fed her. Madhu took the spoon from his hands and then fed him.

They continued to go back and forth until they were full. RK and Madhu both rose.

RK lifted his biwi in his arms, "Time to go home," he said as he carried her away while they locked eyes.

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Dipali stood at the top of the stairs, she watched as Madhu and RK entered the RK mansion, hand in hand.

Shock crossed her face, that Madhu...she think she can take MY RK away from me?! She can keep dreaming, Dipali thought as she smiled wickedly.

She quickly hid behind a pillar and watched RK and Madhu go to their room laughing and smiling and holding hands. Dipali heard RK singing "Dadi amma" as they laughed, and a confused look crossed her face.

What happened between those two? She wondered.

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The next morning, Madhu got ready to go back to the chawl to see her mother.

"RK, ma's invited you for lunch at the chawl."

"Okay, I'll be there, I'll come after shoot. You can go now."

"See you soon!" Madhu said as she turned to leave.

Just as Madhu left their room, Dipali walked in.

RK looked up and anger struck his face.

"Get out," he said calmly at first.

"I've actually just come here to tell you something."

"I don't want to hear it."

"That Mad..."

"I SAID, I DON'T WANT TO HEAR IT," RK yelled.

"Today I'm going to speak RK. Even you can't stop me!"

RK rose and began to walk past her.

"She doesn't love you RK," Dipali said simply.

RK froze in his tracks as Dipali went to face him. RK didn't make eye contact with her once; he avoided her eyes as she spoke.

"She never loved you. She never will. All she loves is your money, your fame, not y..."

"DIPALI!" RK's loud voice echoed around the house but that didn't stop Dipali.

"Just think about it RK, you've never been lucky in love," pain crossed RK's face as Dipali continued, "First you lost your papa, then your ma, then me...What makes you think you won't lose Madhu? She'll leave you the first chance she gets. If you don't believe me, then ask her yourself. Ask her if she's ready to leave her family for you. Ask her if she's ready to leave everything fo..."

"GET OUT!" RK yelled once again.

Dipali, who felt she had got her point across, smiled an evil smile and walked out of RK's room.

RK sat on the edge of the bed and just began thinking. He suddenly rose and made a phone call to Natraj Studio.

"Today, we'll be having a story session at my Karjat Farmhouse. Cancel shoot."

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
oh no that poisonous deepali

but then madhu will go to farmhouse
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Loved this.

The chocolate scene was cute. I hope dat Dips doesn't ruin RK's mood.

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