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MuneebaSheikh

@MuneebaSheikh

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

loved it pritt
Awsum awsum awsum

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

It was sooo sweet and romantic ...

love Rishabala ...

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radt

@radt

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Beautifully written!!!!! loved it to pieces 🤗

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Marie_789

@Marie_789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Wow it was really nice and romantic update. Hope it goes this way in serial too.

Thanx for PM
PM me when you update.

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Tanmaya1

@Tanmaya1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Thank You for writing such a Sweet and Awesome OS Pritt

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Sonu

@applenpeaches

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Pritt Girl, I am disappointed.. I loved the ending, but the beginning looked disconnected and didnt go well- perhaps bcos you were trying to incorporate different things.. Your other OSs were not like this. Sorry if I hurt you.. 😔 But thats my genuine comment.. Sorry once more..

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Superb OS

Thank You So Much For The PM

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Saniya Khan

@-Saniya-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

beautiful os! Romantic and cute! Loved RK's confession!Keep up the great work 😉

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: applenpeaches
Pritt Girl, I am disappointed.. I loved the ending, but the beginning looked disconnected and didnt go well- perhaps bcos you were trying to incorporate different things.. Your other OSs were not like this. Sorry if I hurt you.. 😔 But thats my genuine comment.. Sorry once more..

Thanks for the honest opinion!! You didn't hurt me.

I was actually trying to tell people how the KC scene played out and everything because I didn't want to just jump to RK's sudden disappearance. 😛

I'm glad you liked the end though!!

I posted a new OS named Balraj, you might like that!

Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago