OS: Karva Chauth ka Vrat (last part pg 9)

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This is my first OS I wrote in MADHUBALA forum. I hope u all will like it.

Seeing the mehendi on Madhu's hand RK figured it out that she kept the KC fast for him. He became angry at her for keeping the fast. Thus, he shouted at her and Madhu with teary eyes left from the sets.

RK was so angry and frustrated that he could not concentrate in his shoot and suddenly he yelled, "PACK UP!!!!" Saying this he left but he did not go to home as he knew that Madhu was waiting for him and it was almost night time.

Madhu's face became pale because of eating the sargi, as Dipali mixed something in it.

Madhu was waiting for RK but he was nowhere to be seen.

It was 10:30pm and everyone broke their fast, finished their dinner and went to sleep. No one bothered to check whether Madhu is alright except for Bittuji.

Bittuji took food to Madhu's room but she said 'NO'

Madhu suddenly felt dizzy. She held her head as it was paining a lot. She stood up and she tried to go out but she stumbled while walking and then suddenly she fell down on the carpet.

It was 11:00pm and finally came back home.
He entered his room and then he saw Madhu lying on the floor unconscious. He ran towards her, scooped her in his arms carefully, lifted her and he gently placed her on the bed.

He quickly called the doctor. He was in pain seeing her pale face. Anyone could tell that she did not eat anything. He was tensed for her.

He softly said, "Biwi'" and cupped her face.

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How is it?? Should I continue?? Leave ur comments and I shall update the next part soon.

Ignore the mistakes.



LAST PART PAGE 9

Edited by SPNnIPKKNDlover - 12 years ago

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JareenDD thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS. Pls continue & what happened 2 ur FF ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous and yeah do continue.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW.. Continue it yaar.
It was lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
Continue Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome dear do conitinue it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS
let see how RK reacts and breaks her fast
please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@SPNnIPKKNDlover: Very well written OS.👍🏼😊
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Please continue for these two boring days of saturday and sunday as this sequence will not end on friday and will remain unfinished. so keep writing, liked your post.

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