A shadow of light and an explosion of heart ❤️

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The innocence.The light. The flicker of the most beautiful illusion that a soul can be eternally entrapped in. This trance , this illusion was flowering and blooming , the love's essence and juice was seeping within her every feature.Her eyes looked like the shining reflection of a dewdrop kissed by light , because of the love that binds her to him.She was the most beautiful , ethereal innocent girl on earth , raveling , glorifying within her realization and celebration of her new found love , cause that smile that even her heart could not have genuinely created , was formed within her face because of her feelings for him and the effect of those feelings having the power to unhinge her from everybody including herself ,making her live in this living dream , within that very bridge in which their journey of hate , aggression , passion and now the acknowledgement of the symbolic love she feels for him has been flowed within.This time if he leaves , through fear or defense , he will take her with him , and Madhu won't remain someone who we would know any longer .When her porcelain hands caress his brash rigid cheeks , you know that their every rant , their every cruel abuse for each other that haunts and lives within each other through the shadow of hatred makes them react , crumble , battle.However , it never lets them let each other fall.The root of hate sometimes grows so volatile and passionate-like the time when the seemingly "beast" raged and sculpted the "lamb's" entire form , in detail through embodiments of clay with a firece lash out that scares you and unsettles you..cause the passion even within his hatred is such that you shiver when his bloodstreams combined within the clay hair streaks of Madhu's clay head and yet he continued to create while blood is smearing...more than disgusting or gory , it was appalling how the amount of junoon was there was already within RK , to destroy the light within the lamb and entrap the lamb's light into his dark den cause this very light dared to create massacre within his dark , forbidden castle ...
Remember that root of intense root of emotion..that hatred which made RK solely promise- "THE 4 DAYS OF MISERY SHE GAVE ME WILL COST HER MISERY FOR ANOTHER 40 YEARS." If the emotion was always this intense and passionate , that even hatred starts blushing in proceeding its overtures..then , eventually what do you get? The exploration within two souls towards each other that begins to change the hatred into this glossy love that consumes Madhu , and her gallant light within her face only for RK that shows the whole world how proud and happy she is about the emotions she feels for him. Her love is silent because it always has too much to say , and today it didn't need words or any of her proclamations.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: me_shreeya

Beautifully Written <3


😃 *kisses* :D :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Escape.My.Love.

The innocence.The light. The flicker of the most beautiful illusion that a soul can be eternally entrapped in. This trance , this illusion was flowering and blooming , the love's essence and juice was seeping within her every feature.Her eyes looked like the shining reflection of a dewdrop kissed by light , because of the love that binds her to him.She was the most beautiful , ethereal innocent girl on earth , raveling , glorifying within her realization and celebration of her new found love , cause that smile that even her heart could not genuinely created , was formed within her face because of her feelings for him and the effect of those feelings having the power to unhinge her from everybody , and live in this living dream , of that very bridge in which their journey of hate , aggression , passion and now the acknowledgement of the symbolic love she feels for him.This time if he leaves , through fear or defense , he will take her with him .hen her porcelain hands caress his brash rigid cheeks , And you know that their every rant , their every cruel abuse for each other that haunts and lives within each other through the shadow of hatred..the hatred that makes them react , crumble , battle however never lets them let each other fall.The root of hate sometimes grows so volatile and passionate-like the time when the seemingly "beast" raged and sculpted the "lamb's" entire form , in detail through embodiments of clay with a fireceness that scares you and unsettles you..cause the passion even within his hatred is such that you shiver when his bloodstreams combine within the clay hair streaks of Madhu's clay head and yet he continues to create while blood is smearing...more than disgusting or gory , its appalling the amount of junoon that there was already within RK , to destroy the light within the lamb and entrap the lamb's light into his dark den cause this very light dare to create massacre within his dark , forbidden castle ...

Remember that root of intense root of emotion..that hatred which made RK solely promise- "THE 4 DAYS OF MISERY SHE GAVE ME WILL COST HER MISERY FOR ANOTHER 40 YEARS." If the emotion is this intense and passionate , that even hatred starts blushing in proceeding..and what do you get? The exploration within each other begins to change the hatred into this glossy love that consumes Madhu , and her gallant light within her face only for RK shows the whole world how proud and happy she is about the emotions she feels for him. Her love is silent because it always has too much to say , and today it didn't need words or any of her proclamations.

I'm going to need to re-read this a couple more time before commenting, Koyel.😃 Intricately engrossing.😳
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Superb, Koyel.⭐️👏 I was damn near in awe of that particular phrase I've underlined. But the *entire piece* is practically littered with gems of visually evocative imagery.😳⭐️
I loved how you brought to mind so many key scenes and points from past eps in such exquisitely poetic words, and especially the reference to the beast and the lamb.😃
Your description of the intensity of RK's and Madhu's feelings and the change in those feelings is gorgeously phrased. Kudos.⭐️👏
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leela - shit! that means you weren't able to understand what i was saying naa? ugh. i don' think i'll ever be able to reach out to people through my writings. why am i so complicated?! grrr.
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Originally posted by: Escape.My.Love.

leela - shit! that means you weren't able to understand what i was saying naa? ugh. i don' think i'll ever be able to reach out to people through my writings. why am i so complicated?! grrr.

😆 Koyel, I said - and meant it - that it's intricately engrossing.⭐️👏 I've read it in entirety once, but I wasn't able to concentrate. The net is having problems. But will read it offline, properly appreciate it and then comment.😊 Please keep writing such posts re. Re-reading is also a pleasure.😃
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Originally posted by: leelaa9

😆 Koyel, I said - and meant it - that it's intricately engrossing.⭐️👏 I've read it in entirety once, but I wasn't able to concentrate. The net is having problems. But will read it offline, properly appreciate it and then comment.😊 Please keep writing such posts re. Re-reading is also a pleasure.😃

oh!!! good then. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👍🏼👏 nice post though I again found it difficult to find right meaning but still got that you speaink about Madhu's out and out feeling of love. Today episode was very nice and I loved weach part of episode. Madhubala is surely badly fallen for him. Now I wish that RK gives him lots of pyaar for which Madhu is dancing and singing all around.
The dance was ausumn 😛 both looked hot. Madhu still remember her first dream of dancing with RK. Aww she loves everything about RK, she was so sweet today. Sab bhul gayi bichare RK ke chakkar mien. RK's dialogues were great today - how he was confuse seeing Madhu blushing in herself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A beautiful piece of writing...👏
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Originally posted by: emptyworld

👍🏼👏 nice post though I again found it difficult to find right meaning but still got that you speaink about Madhu's out and out feeling of love. Today episode was very nice and I loved weach part of episode. Madhubala is surely badly fallen for him. Now I wish that RK gives him lots of pyaar for which Madhu is dancing and singing all around.

The dance was ausumn 😛 both looked hot. Madhu still remember her first dream of dancing with RK. Aww she loves everything about RK, she was so sweet today. Sab bhul gayi bichare RK ke chakkar mien. RK's dialogues were great today - how he was confuse seeing Madhu blushing in herself.

i know. 😳

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