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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
great one dear so annie is 5 years old or 4
nice update continue soon n if possible PM me ok
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
I really liked your story. Can you PM me whenever you update, if possible😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow amazing dear..pls pls continue soon..pls pm me whnever u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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❤️ ...sparks fly... ❤️

Madhu : (thinking to herself) I am sorry annie but i can't tell you anything baby, i have to hide this as long as possible. i know one day truth will come to you and that day you will not be able to handle it. My own dad never wanted me and i know how it feels then.RK never loved you, he never wanted you and now i will do anything to hide you from him.

NEXT DAY :
Bittuji : Chief we have our fight for delhi scheduled at 8 pm . The shooting will start day after tomorrow. And it will continue for three weeks.
RK : Bittuji have you seen lotus temple ?
Bittuji : what chief ???
RK : Can't you hear it once bittuji? i asked whether you have seen lotus temple or not .
Bittuji : no chief.
RK : ok then done, tomorrow we will go to lotus temple but in disguise . i don't want anyone to know that i am coming over there. we will announce it later on twitter.
Bittuji : ok cheif.


DELHI-
Madhu came to annie who was pretending to be very busy in drawing pictures.
Madhu : annie mumma wants to say something . can i ?
Annie : no , i am busy right now . we will talk later on.
madhu : (embracing her in a tight hug) Sorry dear , promise i will never repeat that again. please ( she gestures by pulling her ears)
ok so if you don't wanna talk to me how will i be able to give you your present.
annie : present !!!
madhu : yes !! (gives a box to her)
annie : (opens it hurriedly) wow a snow white frock.
madhu : yes for your school picnic tomorrow. now go on and try it.
annie rushes towards bathroom and madhu picks her drawing book. it contained pictures of a happy family of mummy,papa and a lovely daughter.She runs her finger through the words PAPA written with pink sketch on the sheet . but she quickly snaps back to reality when she sees annie standing in front of her wearing the frock . how much she looked like rk . the striking similarity between two.

NEXT DAY -
RK comes to delhi and goes to lotus temple along with bittuji. annie too goes to lotus temple on her school picnic. RK goes there wearing a black hat and glares. there he notices a five year old girl wearing cute white frock with a wide grin on her face staring at each and everyone's face.Don't know why but she reminded rk of madhu . One hour later when rk and bittu are about to go they notice the same girl standing all alone terrified and crying. RK and bittu rush over to her.


RK : why are you crying baby ?
ANNIE : (sobbing) we came here for school picnic and i can't find preeti m'aam anywhere.
Rk : ok relax,we will help you but stop crying first.
annie : no !! mumma told me not to talk to strangers.
RK : but we are not strangers anymore . FRIENDS (he brings his hand forward for handshake).
annie : (puts her hand out ) ok friends.
rk : (gestures bittuji to find out her teacher) and may i know the name of this young lady ?
annie : ananya but as we are friends you can call me annie. what's your name?
rk : rish...no,karan.
annie : but karan uncle you look like mr. sexy.
rk : who mr. sexy ?
annie : oh you don't know who mr. sexy is ? superstar RK !!! but mumma scolded me yesterday for that.
rk : (smirks) oh thats so rude. let's eat something.
annie and rk : CHOCO WALNUT BROWNIE ????


part 4:


Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
loved it. great update. plz update in two or three hours. plz update today. it is a req.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Great update and thanks a lot for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: kendra

The night was stromy and the window panes banged very hard which petrified litle annie and she came closer to her mother.Madhu who noticed all this embraced annie in a tight hug.


ANNIE : mumma , i am not feeling sleepy at all.Please tell me story.
MADHU : No my litle princess it's already 12:40 and you have go to school tomorrow.
ANNIE: Just one please and i promise to sleep after that...
MADHU: Ok ,but just one only...so the story starts with a girl who loved to read story books...
ANNIE: (with a wide grin)Just like me mumma!!!
MADHU: Yes just like you my angel . now listen ...so the girl once went to a dark enchanted castle all alone one stromy night. and there she met a dark beast who captivated her.In the beginning they both hated each other but soon they discovered an entirely different side of each other after the beast saved the girl . The girl then found out that the beast was a handsome prince who was cursed by a witch that would not break until he found true love. Soon they got married to hoped to live happily every after but they were unaware of the fact that the witch was keeping an eye on them. And then one day...

Madhu then noticed that annie was asleep now .She gently kissed her on forehead and pulled blanket over her.
Then she went to dressing table to pick her moblie phone when she realised that there were tear drops in her eyes.She well knew why they were here but tried to pretend as if nothing ever happened.
MADHU: I wish the prince trusted the girl ...i wish that he never let her go ...i wish he never lost her...i wish the lived happily ever after.

As madhu went to sleep beside annie she wondered whether someone actually missed her or not.Maybe they have even forgetton her or her absence.

...BUT SOMEONE WAS ACTUALLY MISSING HER...
part 1 : page 1
intro : page 2
part 2 : page 3
part 3 : page 4

Just chanced upon this fanfic now.😃
Please do PM me when you update.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Great Updates👍🏼 n niCe cOncept😊
Plz Continue sOon.. n pm me whenever u update😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
thank you friends😊 will try to update as soon as possible ...can you tell me how to change my profile picture
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
just caught up with this fic
this is awesome
really good plot
pls update soon :)

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