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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting yaar please update na please
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Posted: 12 years ago
PerfecT..Gal u r my sis lol and i'm waiting since last update which was updated million years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol i don't have so much brain to use.😕...but thanks for calculating annie's age...mere khali dabbe me baat nahi aayi
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar naraj na ho jao. I always read carefully and i point out mistakes, but if i hurted u, then i will never tell u mistakes, because it helps in bringing perfection and post new update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plzzz Update sooon cant wait for tat Long
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 19-


❤️...Sparks Fly...❤️


madhu was staring blankly at nothing . she was trying hard to remember that voice. rk was looking at madhu as he had figured out that it was related to her. now the police was tapping their conversation.
caller : hello madhubala are you there?
no response.
caller : so how are you??
rk : (enraged) where is annie??
caller : calm down man. your daughter is safe till now.
madhu : balraj chaudhry.
rk instantly recognised who he was. he remembered what madhu had told about her biological but cruel devil father.
caller : kammal hai!!! even though we are meeting for first time, you recognised my voice.
i must say your daughter has her mother's voice. just like you.
madhu : please don't do anything to her.
caller : now let me talk to my son-in-law.
rk : what do you want??
balraj : aah!! the main question. (laughs) what do i want??
rk : i am ready to shell out any amount that you say. but release my daughter first.
balraj : think about it again young man!!! i want something as precious as your little daughter.
rk : there is nothing more precious then her.
balraj : ok . i want my daughter in exchange of your daughter.
madhu flinches at his words . perhaps she knew that he was going to ask for her.
rk : what??? madhu !!! never.
balraj : think about it . there will be car waiting at the dump factory near ranjit singh petrol pump. that car will take her to annie.
rk : but how can i be sure that you won't do any harm to annie??
balraj : nice question. as soon as your wife will reach us a car will drop your daughter at same place.
think about it again...and yes no policemen cause they never like me.
then the phone cuts of at other end.


rk didn't knew what to do. he didn't wanted to lose either of them.
madhu : i have to go rk.
rk : (pulls her) are you serious. you know he can ki...
madhu : kill me. what if he had done that years ago when he had actually planned all this? think about annie. i want her to be happy with you.
rk looked at madhu and didn't knew what to say. he always wanted her to say this but not in the way she was compelled to say it today.
rk : ok we will go tomorrow.
madhu : we??
rk : now don't think i will let you go all alone.
that night was the longest ever for everyone there. madhu and rk both knew why he had called her but they were just reassuring themselves. rk had called his high security officials to further help them as it was now a matter of annie as well as madhu's life.they tried to be in touch with balraj again but in vain.

next day-
madhu came to rk . she was wearing her watch. rk looked at herat smiled reassuringly though he himself didn't knew what was going to happen next. madhu came forward and hugged him. tears were brimming in their eyes.
madhu : i love you.
rk : i love you more than my own life (he then kisses her on forehead).everything gonna be alright.
madhu : (nods) you,annie and me.

madhu ,rk ,bittuji and two security personnel in casuals go to balraj's desired spot. they see two cars there . one of the person had held annie on gun point. annie starts to cry after seeing them. madhu slowly starts to move towards another car. she once turns back to look at the face of rk and annie for one last time. then she musters courage and sits inside car. as soon as she sits inside someone puts a damp cloth on her face and everything blacks out.
as soon as madhu sat inside the car. the other two speed off leaving annie behind.one of rk's security personal rush after them.
rk rushes to annie and hugs her. little annie is petrified and afraid to talk.
rk : annie are you ok??
annie : (looking towards blank road) mumma!!!
rk : madhu will be alright.
annie then gives a note to him. it was from balraj. it said that he would complete the task which was left uncompleted years back.
rk : (burning with anger) only when hell freezes over!!!
(to bittuji and other security personal) take annie home safely.

at balraj's den :
madhu wakes up to find her hands tied up . she tries to get up but fails due to a wound on her feet. and then she sees him - her so called father.
balraj : madhubala!! (lifts her face) eyes just like padmini.
madhu : (spats on his face) don't you say her name with your dirty tongue.
balraj : (slaps her ) shut up!!!! now i know why you are called reason of my destruction.
madhu : you yourself are it's reason. had you respected maa and didu, this would have never happened.
balraj :(yells) oh that b****h!! she broke my trust . because of her i always thought that you - reason of my destruction was dead. but i wasn't aware that her filth was alive and had a dirt of her own . until i read it in newspaper.
madhu : (laughs) that's why i am rather glad that i don't have a father like you.
balraj : enough!!! now lets do want i had been waiting for.
he pulls madhu by her hair who shrieks in pain.
then he points his gun towards her.
balraj : now get ready for next birth madhubala...any last wish.
madhu closes her eyes and sees a picture perfect family of her, annie and rk in front of her eyes. she wants to live het last moment with them.
1...2...3...shot!!!!
suddenly she hears a gunshot but doesn't feel any pain. she slowly opens her eyes to find balraj lying on ground with a bullet in his head. and then she looks at someone standing in front of her. - RK.


part 20: scroll down

Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar loved it, but plz update next part soon and don't put RK in jail plz. And update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part -20


❤️...Sparks Fly...❤️

madhu had a gps navigator in her so called watch. rk located her through it reached there in nick of time with police force and shot balraj.
madhu rushes to him though she was limping due to her wound.
rk : i am sorry madhu i had to kill him(he said pointing towards balraj)
madhu : (coldly) he had to die like this. where is annie??
rk : she is at home. i told you everything will be ok.
madhu smiles and rk picks her up in his arms and carries her to the car.
when they reach home they found annie waiting impatiently for them. on seeing them she rushes towards them and hugs them.
after few hours:
annie falls asleep and madhu and rk put her on the bed. rk then pulls madhu in a room. he kneels on his knees,brings his hand forward and -
rk : will you marry me?
madhu : what??
rk : madhubala will you marry me and be the mother of my daughter.
madhu looks at him with utter silence.
madhu : what nonsense rk. just get up.
rk : hurry up madhu . my knees are paining.
madhu : (laughs) yes yes yes!!!


few months later:
madhu , rk and annie now lived in mumbai. badi maa also came with them ,in mumbai annie was surprised to meet her dadi, nani. nan. mausi,etc. and now it was annie's birthday and everything was as she had planned. madhu gave her the gift she wanted and rk hosted a big party at rk mansion.
madhu comes to her room. she was wearing s beautiful pink and black sari. she was carrying a shirt for rk.
madhu : rk wear this one (gives shirt to him)
rk takes the shirt and puts it on the bed. madhu is about to go but he grabs her hand and pulls her towards him. madhu bumps into him and unknowingly clutches his arms to save herself from falling. he locks his arms around her waist.
rk : where are you going mrs. kundra?
madhu : let me go mr. kundra. it's your daughter's birthday today and guests have started to arrive.
rk : (smirks) doesn't matters to me.
he leans in to kiss her but madhu playfully pushes him aside.
madhu : control mr. kundra.
rk : that's the only thing i can't do with you around.
by the way don't you think we should extend our family.
(he again starts to close on her)
madhu : no , i am happy with one.
rk : but me not . i want at .least two more.
madhu : what??
annie : whats happening? (giggles)
madhu and rk are embarrassed by sudden intervention of annie. rk lets go of her.
rk : oh annie!!
madhu : (whispers to him) you said you wanted at least two more.(winks and smiles)

later they celebrate annie's birthday and rishbala remain together forever and ever.



hope u guys were not bored. it was my first attempt at writing anything.bye.


Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
there's nothing like that...i liked it when you told me about annies's age😛. it only shows how carefully you have read my updates. thanks. that's why i have written "few months later" instead of "one month later".
thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Ending Kendra.
Nice to see Annie happy with her dad, mom, dadi, nani and rest of the family.
Thanks for Posting such a sweet and cute FF on RK, Madhu and Annie

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