My first ss. A walk to remember part 3 page 19 upd - Page 6

Originally posted by: deepak148

Atleast 30 likes for next update

Originally posted by: harshdb

demanding... isn't it?😉

Originally posted by: deepak148

yeah. Promote it to your frnds.

Originally posted by: deepak148

Res for part 1 part 1 - this is in future. Madhubala and rk have a great bonding. they celeberated karvachauth and diwali together. and one day Madhu confessed his feelings to RK. And he also confessed the same. He throw a part next day and invited all d close people to madhu and some actors. And in party he freed Madhu from contract. He told simply in her mouth. I ( RK p.o.v. ) don't love you. I was not able to torture you mentally, because you are so stong. But emotionally it is best way to torture you. he told her to get out of his house. all the members were in shock. they can't believe what happened here. Dipali and bhatias Have a wicked smile on their faces. And padmini were in tears. MaLik went to rk in anger, but madhu stopped him. she told rk in his face, that if he wants her to leave him, she will. She promised Rk that she will be in his place and he will be in hers just wait and watch. hope you guys liked it. it is my first attempt. i am not a great writer, bit i tried. I will try to make next part intersting. and plz bookmark it, because i am not able to sent pms

Originally posted by: harshdb

dear.. i dont have any friends... once i had but lost contacts... so no luck

Originally posted by: deepak148

@Shweta di thanks for your words. i will try to update next part beautifully, but grammar mistakes i can't do anything. my english is not that gud. Your post was very helpful. And nysync sucks lol. Though JT is gud.

Originally posted by: -ForeverYours-

English doesn't have anything to do with it, and if you have difficulty with it write in hindi! And I couldn't help myself:

"...mistakes i can't do anything. my english is not that gud"

"I" is always capitalized, beginnings of sentences are always capitazlize, languages are always capitalized, and what did I say about shortening words and texting lingo?

Don't worry though, there were a lot of improvements here alone, you'll get better with time.

And, NSync was amazing. Britney's plastic voice was just intolertable.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6thmPrTxBtI[/YOUTUBE]

vs.

3 by BS, I mean come on dude!

Originally posted by: deepak148

you have no frnds in your buddy list. :| And thanks jyoti