My first ss. A walk to remember part 3 page 19 upd

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey this is my first os here. if u people like it, i will expand it. i am doing it from mobile, so i will give some charcter sketch .
RK - Rishab kundra, a bollywood tycoon whose heart is stone. he has no feelings for anyone. but a girl changed his life.

MB - madhubala a middleclass girl, who become a legendary actress lol. Other family members u all know. i will edit it tomorrow.

REST OF ALL THE FAMILY MEMBERS YOU KNOW

Index- PART 1 BELOW

part 2 ON PAGE 12
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3300721&TPN=12&#

Deepak Gupta - The famous bollywood director and womanizer. girls loves him very much. A gud frnd of Rk and the main reason for the introduction of Madhu in movies. But he also will unite rishbala.


Shweta - The clever sister of deepak and his co-partner. she will become frnd of madhu in future.


PrittB the famous producer and her frnds include deepak and madhu. She has crush on rk and will plzy vamp here. Pritt plz don't kill me after reading this lol. She and madhu will have great rivaliry.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 1 - this is in future. Madhubala and rk have a great bonding. they celeberated karvachauth and diwali together. and one day Madhu confessed his feelings to RK. And he also confessed the same.
He throw a part next day and invited all d close people to madhu and some actors. And in party he freed Madhu from contract. He told simply in her mouth. I ( RK p.o.v. ) don't love you. I was not able to torture you mentally, because you are so stong. But emotionally it is best way to torture you. he told her to get out of his house. all the members were in shock. they can't believe what happened here. Dipali and bhatias Have a wicked smile on their faces. And padmini were in tears. MaLik went to rk in anger, but madhu stopped him.



she told rk in his face, that if he wants her to leave him, she will. She promised Rk that she will be in his place and he will be in hers just wait and watch. hope you guys liked it. it is my first attempt. i am not a great writer, bit i tried. I will try to make next part intersting. and plz bookmark it, because i am not able to sent pms
Edited by deepak148 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I updated part 1 . enjoy and chappals are also welcome. my english is not gud.
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Interesting start. U have a great idea with u. Update the Next part. Congrats on ur 1st SS.! Thanks.. :)
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Thanx to all who liked and commented.
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If i get 30 likes atleast, i will update next part.
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nice start... continue soon and pm me! :)
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😭 hey people, plz make this ss popular. so that i can update next part soon.
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Very nice first SS Deepak! 👍🏼
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Thnx pritt. please pm it to some of ur frnds, because i am not able to pm it.

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