SS: Redefining Forever || Part 5 Updated! - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG they gonna meet in next update m excited
great update
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Awesome shweta dear! !! Loved it plss continue soon
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very nice..yeah excited 4 d premier..finally rk ki entry hone wali h..
btw u r a very gud writer.👍🏼
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Liz is nice the "T" friend and savior of sorts for Madhu
Looking forth to the premiere of RK
Really liked the bonding between Madhu and Liz
Nice update
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@-ForeverYours-: Awesum n superb SS, very well written!!!😊
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superb update dear ...thxs for the pm ...looking forward to the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww Shweta they are finally so close to being with each other !!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For my lovelies...
{Redefining Forever}

Part 5
"Eeyore meets Armani"

"Don't you think it's a little too much? I mean who dresses up for a movie?" She constantly stressed the casualty of the event.

"Quit being such an Eeyore will you! You look ah-may-zing!"

"Quit being such a Tigger then! And you don't look too bad yourself." She noted her simple yet elegant blue gown. Madhu finally turned to face the mirror and...

"OH. MY. GOD."

"I don't know how I do it," Liz blew her nails and then started to giggle.

Madhu was left spell bound at the sight of what the mirror insisted was her. The way the blood red silk of the gown along with its delicate lacing suited brought out her ebony black hair. She couldn't help but ogle at herself.

"Liz you're a genius! Thank you so so so so much!" She jumped to hug her.

"You know I'm getting used to your cowgirl hugs!" She hugged her back.

"Why thank you," She sarcastically curtsied and suggested, "I think it's time we take our leave or we might miss your beloved walking down the red carpet." She knew she hit the right spot because,

"OMG Yes! We only have 45 minutes!" Liz grabbed her clutch and rushed them out the door.

"Yeah, only 45 minutes to get to a place that 15 minutes away," Madhu mumbled.

"I heard that!"

"You were supposed to!"

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It was becoming almost a punishment to stand against that velvet rope being pushed by thousands of fangirls. But Liz insisted they stand their ground and keep that spot occupied for themselves.

It was when Liz started getting pale that Madhu almost ordered her to go to the bathroom assuring her she won't miss her big hero's arrival.

"I don't need to go! I can hold it in." Liz screamed justifying herself to Madhu, her voice barely audible through the crazy fangirl screams.

"Yeah, I can see how well you're holding it in. Please, if not for me than at least for your beloved RK. I'm sure he wouldn't take into liking a woman who urinated all over her dress."

"But I didn't!"

"It won't be long till you do! Now go! I promise to stay here and keep this spot. Now vamoose!" She sent her off waiting there in utter boredom until the first paparazzi flash went off.

"He's here!" She heard almost the entire crowd behind her scream to which she just rolled her eyes and silently prayed Liz wouldn't kill her for sending her to the bathroom.

But till then, she decided to finally have a good look at this guy. Like what the hell was all this fuss about?

Leaning over the velvet rope she took saw the Armani dress shoes make their way onto the red carpet. Her heart began racing at an abnormal pace, almost like the way it raced when she saw those dreams.

Finally the owner of the shoes got out of the car and helped a scrawny young woman out of the limo. Last she checked she wasn't an actress. A girlfriend? Eye candy?

He finally turned around buttoning his suit as the woman linked their arms. She couldn't help but admire the suit but finally made her way up to see perhaps one of the most beautiful sights she had ever laid eyes on.

He was indeed, beautiful but there was something about him, something she couldn't exactly put her finger on, that attracted her to the point of no return.

She didn't realize how deep she had lost herself in admiring him until she was knocked down.

"Jasmine are you all right?" She heard a bunch of people asking the woman that fell on her. Madhu pushed her off and got up to fix her dress. Yeah so much for the person who got attacked by a scrawny little woman.

"Yeah, I'm sorry my heel broke." The woman who Madhu drew an immediate disliking for answered the paparazzi.

Madhu faced her back to the carpet and tried to regain her balance only to feel a strong arm keeping her sturdy. "Are you alright?" She heard the voice from behind.

"Why do you care? Go on, ask you Ms. Clutz if she's alright." Madhu scorned the gesture only to be pestered again,

"Can you walk? Do you need any help?" The voice continued in his deep baritone voice.

"Don't you get English? I'm fine!" She turned around to face him, only to see that he was Superstar RK himself and for some odd reason he looked like he had just seen a ghost and even more so, he looked... delighted?

He immediately left her company and walked over to what seemed to be a bodyguard. Madhu just continued fixing the wrinkles on her dress looking at him like he was crazy.

The bodyguard seemed to be confused but RK looked determined when he pointed at her.

What the-?

And before she knew it, the 6 foot 5 inch, 200 lbs bodyguard had picked her and headed out of the premiere sight.

"What the hell is this! I swear she fell on me! I had nothing to do with it!" He heard her scream until her voice became inaudible to him.

Yeah. RK was quite the catch! She mused.

Note the sarcasm.

***

I hope you liked it!

-Shweta








Edited by -ForeverYours- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shweta dear gud update, not that much interesting. Hope u don't mind and RK has recogonised her. Waiting for d next part and their meeting. Some secrets will be revealed. And plz update long part next tym.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG! Yet again! Awesome, no Amazing, no uhm, I don't need to find the right word. Love the update. So much development! 1.Liz and Madhu are friends, that good too! 2. RK met Madhu! OMG! That is awesome. And Gosh the last part. I am seriously just guessing around what could happen next. That is what I love so much about it! I never never know what is going to happen... Gosh! Love the way you write. It has a charm you know. It is in every update. When I read the first line I get lost in your stoy again. That is what it takes. Love the update! Thnx for the scrap!
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