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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

A v nice os.beautifully written.keep it up.

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anji-mira

@anji-mira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

😃 nice aash...

so this is the first OS for Rishbala...waiting for some more

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Sudha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Fabulous OS 👏👏⭐️!!!! Absolutely loved it 😊😊!!!

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-chrys-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Wowww Aashu it is awsome👏👏

Usually im so lazy to read OS,FF and all,with same feeling i started to read but this one was really intresting one ,babe im also waiting to see the scenes like this.Keep writing ...

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reni

@leverne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

U already got ur praises..:P

Awesoem one btw,...maine subah hi padha tha...but commenting now...:)

can i get a part 2...Romance of Rishbala...hug plus kissie???

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kirti

@DevilClan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

It was nice and i luvd 2 dialogues mostly : 1. "Ye aasoun dekh rahi ho? Pata hai kal raat se meri Biwi ne aise kitne aasoun bahaye hai? 2. Iski har ek cheez pe sirf RK ka haq hai! Sirf RK ka!"

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: TheDarkKnight
Awesome OS Aash!! Loved it :P

Originally posted by: utopia88
Awesome OS! Keep it up!😊

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd
That was so damn awesome! I loved RK's dialogues ;)

Thanks 😃

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: expectappu
Wow!!..very well written...i could imagine RK in all his awesomeness in front of my eyes...i hope he really takes Deepali's case...your OS has given me new hopes..;)

Hopes dashed😆

Thanks dearie😳

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: devikamd
Wow...Aash...
that was awesome...!!
its not just your wish...its all our wish...!😆
But as you said.. i don't think its gonna happen...!

lol..now i think i should start reading your ffs...!😛

Thanks devu😳

shud i wait for ur comment on SOL😉

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: had2bu
Pata hai, kabhi nahi hoga par mazaa aaya...

You captured his style perfectly...

Good job Aashu.. Iske aage ka bhi tujhe likhna padega..

Avi...fancy seeing u here😃

thanks😃

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