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Peppy

@darkangel93

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

I WISH SOMETHING LIKE THIS WOULD ACTUALLY HAPPEN!!!!!!! loved ur os!!!!! 👏

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Awesome

Thank You So Much For The PM

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Nice update on...it would b more gud to c d same onscreen.

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anonee

@anonee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Nice progression👍🏼

So Mallik inadvertently gets the 2 together👏

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Simple-Girl

@Simple-Girl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

WOW!!!! Pritt superb part!!!👏 Loved it..Wrote it beautifully...You wrote about their emotions & feelings & their state of mind wonderfully..😊 Do write more OS..Its really a pleasure to read your stories..😊

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awesome

i expect the sam eto happen in the show

madhu running into RK's arms after finding out the truth

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anushka

@anushka2112

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Awww poor RK. ...biwi ki judaai sahi nai jati ...good write up dear ...

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Madhu

@kpm_madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awesome part dear👏...keep writing

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Thank you all sooo much!!! So glad you all enjoyed it! 🤗

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aashshhs

@aashshhs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Nice update...hope there are one or two more parts still coming :) :) :)

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