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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

UPDATING guys... sorry.. its been long but on my way with a awsome twist ;)
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me behosh hoing after reading the updating status lol 😆 m I dreaming please somebody pinch me 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay

me behosh hoing after reading the updating status lol 😆 m I dreaming please somebody pinch me 😆



lol sorry i was so busy.. i dont know how this 3 months have ran way... i mean i feel like i only updated yesterday but its been 20 days...

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Posted: 12 years ago




havent updated yet😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 31~







Madhu Walked from the side of her mother in law and made her way next to abhay... She comfortably leaned against his body... While his hand came around her... She rested her hand over his chest slowly rubbing to comfort him, like any wife would do... Like RK have always imagined... Madhu being in his arm...

'this is my husband abhay... & your brother!' madhu hesitated to whisper out the last few words. ... 'your identical- twin- brother!'

RK stood in middle of madhus hall room. The eye's felt little dizzy. He didn't know about his past. He always have tried to locate the origin of this new hot blooded RK however, failure always have knocked on his door.

'what...' RK slowly managed to mumble...

'we all are equally shocked... I was in shock the day I saw you... For a moment I thought you were my husband... Even I couldn't tell the difference after our 11 years old relationship... And I know this all sounding very complicating and confusing but...'

Madhus words never reached RK's ear after he hard the 11 years old relationship... She had kids... She was in love with someone els! She had baby! She is in her 11 years old relationship! She belongs to someone! She is that- whatever her husband name was!... She Is NOT His! She belongs to a man who happens to be his identical twin! Who looks like him... But not HIM!

RK looked back at abhay, than at madhu... What? That's him... He always have imagined to be that... Not always... But for past 1 and half weeks... He was in love with this married girl! No... No she can't belong to anyone except him...

RK looked back at all the image... Hold on! A storm of confusions smacked him like a throbbing bullet, the high shocking information, he surly couldn't take it... RK stepped back slowly... Than walked out...

Abhay instantly flowed by madhu... But bittuji already brought his car... He stepped in and ordered to take him way...

Madhu looked confusingly at abhay... Unwontedly or wontedly she wanted to flow.
Madhu looked at RK from the side, 'is it good idea for us to flow or shall we wait for him to sink all this information?'

Raina stood at the back, holding her face in tears. 'my son was not dead!... Why did they lye?'

Madhu and abhay instantly went back to support there mother.


Life couldn't be any more miserable than what RK have experienced. Life is loosely hanging at the top of a high Cliff. If there was an option between jump in a hot lava or have a crazy amazing night out, he would most precisely would chose jumping in hot lava. The world seems to be very small and painful to endure lonely night after night without madhu.

RK sat opposite of the river themes. Barely any people were walking at this time of the night. Good he told him self... Than mumbled, great! 'I am a loner again!'

The idea he have discovered his real family were not the the primary concern. The concern is madhu and her love. She is BLODDY married! After 29 years of his life, when he had to fall in love, he fell in love with a married girl!

Why she had to look like a 20 years old young girl? How old was her kids? RK stopped in his path, she had kids! She is a bloody mother!... & they are not his kids...

RK frustratingly kicked the air again... & that little boy of her looked like him!

RK frustratingly kicked the air again. 'she is a mother!' the thought about she having kids wasn't as bad as when he thought about how she may have spend her nights with HER husband!

'it was attraction! Only psychical attraction! Nothing els! Just attraction!' RK tried to make him self belief... Just attraction!

He argued with him self if it was love or just mere attraction. Walking under the lonely night gave him enough Time to calm down...

Next day early morning, RK made his way to madhu's house. He didn't sleep, his eyes gave it way. About 7am, RK knocked on madhus door... He could here madhu screaming and shouting and running around- maybe with her kids!

His restless heart melted again... Just to experience madhus presence... But it was only attraction! He told him self...

Abhay opened the door along with his older daughter. Jearsy... She instantly gave out a shirking noise. Holding her dad.. 'omg dad. He really do look like you!'

Abhay smiled, moving to let him in. RK slowly walked in, still starring at abhay... His mirror image and lucky bustard who have his love. No... Attraction!... RK repeats to him self.

'Owo..' Jearsy came along and held RK's hand. He just never liked kids... RK tried to back way but she came forward and held his hand tighter. 'you even feel like my dad!' she claims.

RK didn't say a word. He just wanted to see madhu. He looked around... But abhay distracts. 'madhu giving Roy a shower. She will be down any moment! Come sit...'

RK flowed abhay into the living room... At the same time madhu walked in with her son, rapped in towel, holding his mum tight around the neck. Madhu her self was half wet. She didn't notice RK At the side as she walked up to abhay. 'your son just have become to naughty! What have you been teaching him in my absence!' she complained annoyingly...

Roy with his Tiny hand strokes his mums cheek than gave a kiss with wet lips. 'my sweet mummy... My dear mummy... Oh mummy... You should have been here na!... Roy made a cute baby face with grown up tone.

RK observed each and every step and burst out in laugh. Madhu instantly turns around with a addition laughter, little taken back as she dried her sons hair. 'RK?' she smiled with a surprising tone...

'he just came!' abhay adds.

'how are you feeling?' madhu questioned.

Meantime abhay came close, helping madhu to dress there son.

RK really thought he could ignore everything but every time abhay touched madhu, it ignite a fire inside him. RK looked way to avoid any eye contact.



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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 32~







'I will drop the kids to school!' madhu looked at abhay. 'you need to talk to him!'

madhu left but RK wanted to flow. He couldn't stand abhay let alone talk. He didn't care about his family, not after all this time. He wanted his own family with madhu, and now this abhay had to be here to take everything way from him.

Abhay smiled as the mother and the kids left. Raina also walked in with little worry face.

RK was ready to confront but he wanted madhu to be there.

'how are you feeling?' abhay questioned RK. He came by and sat opposite of RK. 'madhu have told me what she knew about you! Well what she knows... It must be odd to talk to me... Specially when we look like!'

RK instantly stood up. Facing way from abhay. He have always been proud of his look. No one can look better than him.

'you are not me! Nor you look like me. No one can be RK!' RK snaps at abhay. What he have done. He have stolen everything... 'you are copy of me!'

Abhay smiled. They may be twin brother however, from his few words abhay understood the different level of maturity amongst them. RK truly was acting like his 6 years old son.

'ahh, now I understand why madhu was hasetating to bring you here. She knew you can not controlle your temper!'

'I am very controlled thank you very much!'

'really?'

'yes!'

'than why ate you so angry?'

'you surly don't expect me to be calm and quit when after 29 years I find that my real family having a grand life in England where I am back in India all alone!'

'you are accusing RK! That's wrong!'

'what els shall I expect?' RK looked back at his mirror image. 'you expect me to happily accept after knowing...'RK nearly screamed but than controlled. He was about to blurb out that how much he loves madhu.

'yes?' abhay questioned. He looked at there mother, who silently stood there. 'mother, why don't you explain how Mr kundra left you! And along with that he also lied that my twin brother died! I am sure mr kundra have said nothing to you!'

RK looked shockingly back at abhay, than realized that there were more than little simple story here.

'anyway, how is mr kundra? Happy I guess?'

RK silently looked at his brother... Wondering, what to whisper out. 'he is dead! He died when I was 8!' RK simply replied. 'its been well over 20 years!'

Raina held her mouth with tears. Stepping back with the shocking news...

RK looked back and than at abhay again... 'funny!' he looked down with a pain... 'funny that you didn't know!'

'that's because...' abhay was about to open his mouth... But RK distracts.

'and dad never married! Nor he had any affaire with Radha! Yes- that's true"

RK stood up and walked out without hearing a single word. Everything for him was unbearable, nothing seemed to be in place let alone give him self time to think everything through. His life seemed shattered. No madhu... No family... Even after all this wealth nothing seemed special... Not special as Madhu.

After few days...

The sentence- "time always can heal an open wound", felt like a pathetic quote for RK. He walked in a restraint where he was due to met abhay...

RK was on time, maybe early when abhay walked In with his son Roy. He looked cute, that's because it's madu's son! RK told him self. Jearsy was hiding behind his dad. She had his nose. God damit! RK whispered to him self. Madhu wasn't there, she was busy at something. RK had no interest to see her either specially with abhay, there flirt made so awkward...

He looked at three of them as they came by and sat in front of him.

Abhay smiled uncomfortable at RK. He knew RK wasn't happy bunny with this amazing news however, it's time to move on! He slowly have to make little space.

'how are you feeling?' abhay questioned. Roy and Jearsy just observed without any question.

'are you really a supper star?'

Jearsy with excitement questioned. Cutting his dad!
RK nodes gently.
'Owo, if we come to India will you show us around?'

RK didn't seemed happy. He looked annoyingly at both of the kids. Great... That's the last thing he wanted to here... The perfect tour boy for his lover husband and her kids.

'sure!' he replied with one words...

...

Meantime Madhu walked in to her house. The house seemed little to empty and top of it, it was Sunday, where did everyone disappeared?

'Roy?... Jearsy?... Abhay...'

Madhu looked from one side of the house to another. Suddenly her eyes fell on the fridge a note hanging... 'RK- indian cuisine! We will be back soon...'

Madhu laughed and ignored while putting everything way one by one...

After about half an hour her phone rang. She answered thinking it was abhay, but danger comes with no warning... Madhu's breathing stopped with a frightening eyes... Her heart cried to hide in abhays arm... She wanted to run... Simply run...

'tik.. Tok... Tik... Tok... Tik... Tok... Tik... Tok... Waiting at Indian cuisine for food always is irritating... Don't you think baby?'

Madhu instantly dropped her phone, snatching the key from the side and her phone, rising towards the car without her jacket in the cold.

She drove breaking every rule of the road, with panic she called abhay, but he failed to answer.


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Posted: 12 years ago
i have waited it for so long and you gave such a short update. sorry, but i found it very small. though i loved it. plz update soon and plz make and rk as one soul.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting.. i will start reading from tomorrow... 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepak148

i have waited it for so long and you gave such a short update. sorry, but i found it very small. though i loved it. plz update soon and plz make and rk as one soul.



na will update few more tonight ... have to go now and study..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update rk is jealous of his brother life he is so obsess with madhu and madhu is hopelessly in love with her husband loved the family bond awesome update beautifully done and the trouble is here hope she can saved her family
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King

Interesting.. i will start reading from tomorrow... 😛



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