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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Story Do update soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is awesome! Please Pm me next time you update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one..Pls PM me wen u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks to everyone who commented and liked my update it's the londest record ever...3 pages...OMG...let's stop or if i will continue i will never stop...and...and...one important thing...this time i am sending PM's but for the next time plz...if you want PMs...mention it in your comments and buddy me...plz it make work easiar...

"RK...RK..."madhu whisphered patting on RK's arm...she glanced at the mirror.it was 3:oo am in the morning..."RK...RK..."she again said a bit louder then before..."kya hua biwi????..."said RK...getting irritated in his beauty sleep..."utho RK" "kya hua???"he got up from the bed..."bolo"he said rubbing his eyes..."wo maine abhi kisi parchayi ko yaho se gujarte dekha...mujhe dar lad raha hai...kuch karo RK shayad wo bathroom me gayi hai..."said madhu with a scared expression on her face..."kya????ruko mai abhi dekhta hoon"he said and rushed to th bathroom...he checked it thoroughly..."here...no...here..no...nothing was there...maybe she was dreaming...or let's check outside..."said RK scrathcing his head...
"madh..."he stammed there seeing madhu sleeping peacefully...on the bed..."oh she fooled me what does she think that she is great now wait and watch..."he said and walked towards the bed...and stopped...he gazed at madhu's innocent face...her milky white skin...dark brown eyelashes...pink lips...he carrased her face with his fingers...for a moment he was lost...
"what was that sound"madhu thought and quickly woke up...it was 4;00 am in the morning...she looked around...everything was looking quite scary..."it was not like that before...or RK's room becoms haunted at 4;00 clock"madhu thought to herself...suddenly she saw some figure moving behind the curtains...she moved her hand to the left side of the bed to hold RK...she knew how much she hated him...in worst situations he would be the one she would jump on...but...but...RK wasn't there...she turned her face in shock"now where he has gone???????leaving me alone..."creak..." "what was that????"madhu thought..."i have to move out from here...god help me..."she prayed and got up from the bed...and started to move slowly towards the door...she saw the door slightly moving...somebody was coming...was it rishbh????...suddenly a glass fell down and shattedred into peices...madhu was death scared and shocked...she ran towards he door...and hugged rishabh tightly...he hugged her back...moved his mouth to his ears and whispered"tumhe andhere se daar largat hai???"madhu came back to reality...she pushed him back...and stomped towards the bed...and he...as usual.smirked...
madhu P.O.V.
i yawned in my bed...and glanced at the alarm clock...ohh i have overslept...it is 9:oo am...i rushed to the bathroom...quickly took a shower and wore my pink anarkali...and rushed down stairs..."the whole night i couldn't sleep...only glaring at rishabh...and thinking about the hug...urgh...why did i hugged him?????"i thought...the breakfast was already at the table...i saw rishabh coming from the opposite direction...if i would sit in this seat he will take the opposite vacant one and...and i will be facing him...no i shall take that seat vacant opposite sikki...yes...and i sat there he came an..."sikki...your phone..."he said to sikki...sikander bandar...got up and went to that room and rishabh...he sat there...ghosh!!!!...i couldn't meet his eyes after that hug..."what happened madhu beta????"ma asked me..."kya hai na biwi kal raat..." "*cough*"i deliberately choked water..."aaram se piyo beta"she said witha note of concern in her voice...and he smirked seeing me...and threwed him daggers..."actually wo kal raat madhu..." i metally prepared myself for the next...to come..."kal raat madhu ne kuch jyada hi ice cream kha li..." what??? ice cream when did i ate it?????he...just never leaves a chance to...leave it..."madhu beta apko iss halat me ice cream nahi kha ni chayiye thi..."told ma..."sorry ma..."i said...again throwing him daggers...he seems to be enjoying my reaction..."koyi baat nahi beta...age se dyan rakhiyega..."ok maa..."i said..."wait and watch rishabh kundra...i will not leave you...
so how was it?????plz comment and like...again plz those who want PMs buddy me...and state that in comments if your name is not there in PM list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowwwiii wht an awsome update
rk madhu ko tease kar raha hai hehehr hahahaha
and yu have pm me so dont worry abut pm me me becoz yu r in my buddy list and i am also in yur buddy list
have a gud day tc ks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww excellent update..👏PLS PM ME WHEN U UPDATE😃
Edited by vijayarvi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pyari si nok jhok... pyar bhari nafrat bhari...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Great start...Lovely scenes...Pls continue soon and PM me wen u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Its very nice.. Please pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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or bhai i am here...with the teaser...i know it's short but i am in a hurry...can't send PMs...too...wioll send them afterwards...
"bhabi whatever you say...i don't care...your's was past...now i am the present"i said her in a rage."but trust me madhu...RK is like that only...he is using you..."said deepalli with crocodile tears in her eyes..."i don't believe you...i don't see it...and even if he was using me na...i will noy leave...now only he is the source of my life...i know how he is??????...he has forcefully married me...i aggree but he also has given 40 lakhs...for my father's operation...a roof over my head...enough food for my tummy...and...everything else...needed for living the life...bhabhi ji..."i answered her..."but he was miine...and he today also is mine..."deepali shouted with rage..."no.."i also in a same tone..."i will snatch him away from you..." "if you have the courage then do it...i shall also see..."then wait and watch madhu...how RK goes away from you..." "do you think he will believe you???" "he will...wait and see..." "let's see...i am not afraid of you..."
now please don't bash me with your chappals...this is only a teaser...

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