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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Aur kitni der tak.kitne aur updates mein in dono ki ladai aur rk ki befkufi dekhni padegi
Nice updqte dear cont soon and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
lol...loving this strong madhu to the core ...awesome update 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u take long time to give dis update... but nice... its gud dat mb backfire on rk
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
@Thanx to those who liked & commented on d previous part...

Here is d next part...

part 7

An hour had passed & it seemed to her that d doctor would never arrive to tend his wounds & his back...she paced d large room...fiddling with her hands...as she stole small glances at d clock in his room...suddenly a light knock was heard outside his door...& she hastily answered it...d doctor was there...he entered d room...& greeted madhu...

The doctor asked about how did d accident took place? & madhu dreaded that he would accuse her...but for a change he didn't instead he blamed it on his unfortunate self & lost balancing...& she wondered why?

Then d doctor asked madhu to disrobe him from his clothes...madhu stared at Rishab a blush covered her cheeks but he glared at her...

He asked "all of it?"...

The doctor replied "only ur shirt sir...as i have to look at ur back"...

she could tell that he felt immense pain in moving his hands...from inside she anticipated how he would look without his shirt & she felt a bit of shame too as such a thought...

"Don't just stand there...help me out" he complained...

madhu broke out of her daze & promptly moved towards him...to reach for d end of d open shirt...her cheeks flushed as her gaze locked with d centre of his chest...inside her heart was accelerating to see his smooth tan torso lift gently with every breath he took...inching closer she pulled out d shirt avoiding any interaction with his skin...

Rishab was a well built man...with grt features...her eyes drifted elsewhere when he caught her observing...& shied away from d bed...but d doctor asked her to help him...

"I am afraid to touch him...i mean i think we should call for help...i don't want to make things worse..." she said nervously...

But d doctor asked her to do it as she was his wife...

she simply nodded & neared d bed again with a forced smile...& set d pillows so that he could lie comfortably...rishab had a straight face all this time..

as her hands touched his back he replied " ur hands are as cold as ice"...

The doctor checked him & replied that he had simply bruised his spinal chord...& a bit of physical therapy & exercise with a bit of rest he will be back hail & hearty on his feet...

He was desperate to get well asap...& d doctor replied that he would as he had a beautiful & caring wife...by his side...& with that he took his leave...& promised to come & check his recovery every week...

so dis is it...do like & comment if u like d upd.

P.S. :-bookmark it & keep checking for updates...

love.
priti.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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priti yeh tu hai,,i dint know u were writing ff here!!
will read now n comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
last three posts were awesoem...loved it lots priti..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
again chota update but maste hai... continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
awesome update hope they fall in love
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well she is improving and yupp I liked the compliment of the doc...now really want her to do her duties and take care of rishabh but still ignore him and really let her meet someone...say like dipali ka bro comes to meet Jim and become friends withmadhu...since he knows rk and dips r going around he tries to flirt with madhu in front of rk and madhu being so good natured finds good friend in him...what a track...I want someone yo use it...just my pov...liked last 3 updates but they were too short yaar...like u can use some scenes like..they have become good friends...they rushing dinner and the friend says...no dips madhu dissent like this...or that wow green...that's madhu ka fab color and rk getting all angry...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 13 years ago

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