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Posted: 12 years ago
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ur ff's vry interesting. Pls pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What. A catchy title and concept...eager to read ahead...waiting for pm and update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1

Disclaimer: I am taking creative liberty with vampires and allowing them outside in sunJ

Part one

A seven year old rashab was levitating in the school play ground with a choco-blood flavour lollipop in the mouth and soaking up the sun.

He could only levitate up to 10 feet yet but dad could go up the clouds.

Suddenly, he felt air vibrate and he quickly flipped and the mud fly past him. He glared down where couple of young angels were gathered.

He wanted to stuck out his tongue to them but he could remember his father's word ''rishab, calm and dignified are the two words for a vampire''. Thinking about the way dad had told him, he cooled himself down by slowing the blood flowing through his body. An instant calm was racing through his body.

The tallest angel (who rashab know was his senior and a bully but still smaller in height from rashab) was laughing and pointing toward him. His usual group of wanna be's were with him.

Rashab levitated toward right until he was directly over the angel's head, took out rhe lollipop and dropped it over the angel's head.

He knew that all the congealed blood in it will cause it to stick tightly to angel's blond curls.

The angel shrieked and tried to remove the lollipop but to no avail. A satisfied smile on his face, rashab did a back flip in air.

The angels down were cursing him and trying to free their leader's hair from lollipop.

Rashab started laughing when the leader started crying as one of his friends had pulled out his hairs in his tries to help his friend.

''what is going on?'' rk saw the teacher coming toward the group and as usual, all the angels blamed him.

However, at that moment something unexpected happened. An angel who was in his class came rushed out from behind the bushes and told the teacher that rashab didn't do it.

She was small brunette angel with wings the colour of sunlight. They looked too big for her. Like all angels she won't be able to fly until she was 14-15 but she held them above the ground. In her hairs was band made of some unknown angel material and yellow flowers*.

So, he was saved from detention by an angel. Hmm, who cares, he thought to himself getting another lollipop from his pant pocket.

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the flowers in the band but smaller and mostly closed

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Edited by Ashleydevlin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ashley:).. good to see you back writing.. you have a unique style and elegant characters.. am not too much of a vampire buff, but your story's interesting already. do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ninand

Ashley:).. good to see you back writing.. you have a unique style and elegant characters.. am not too much of a vampire buff, but your story's interesting already. do continue soon.


Thanks😃...yeah, long time indeed but i am trying again, sometime i just can't write no matter how much i want and other times all i want to do is write, silly me😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

Welcome dear 🤗


interesting concept & Fab start !
me eagerly waiting 😃


Thank you so much dear🤗...loved the flowers😃...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheDarkKnight

Interesting Concept. Pls add me to your list :)


thanks😃...i am making a new account will add you there😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

Interesting Concept. Pls add me to your list and dont frgt to pm me yur ffs updates

gn tc ks hsd


thanks, sure i will add you😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

Oh I am waiting love the way you write :)


and i love the way you write😆...thanks🤗

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