|Deewangi or Junoon| FF part-1 page 2

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Hii MBians...here i m with a new ff please read its my not exactly first time but first time i m writing something. I m not that good in writing please avoid writing mistakes.

PROLOGUE:

Leelavati hospital..

RK: how is she? is she ok??? tell me doctor!!!...tell me dammit...please tell me if she is fine or not??
say that she is ok...please doctor say something.!!!!
(asks a nervous and scared RK..he pleaded to doctor just want to know about how is he ? is she fine..?? what will he do if anything happen to her..?? no nothing will happen to her...she will be fine soon ...he is praying in his mind)
Doctor: Mr. Rishab...there is a lot of blood loss due to which i cant say anything right now...she is in very critical condition..we will do anything to save her as we can do...you just pray for her to be fine...

RK: what!!!!(he yelled).. what are u saying doctor...u have to save her...u hear that...U HAVE TO SAVE HER!!!...do anything but i want her alive and fine too...do u get that...(he yelled at the doctor in a very dangerous tone...he has mixed emotions at that moment...sadness, anger , scared ..)

Doctor: (in a scared tone) we r doing as much as possible...but the patient is injured very badly...we will get blood but about the bullet we cant say anything...as it is very near to her heart ..we r in a very critical situation. If we do operation it can be very dangerous she can loose her life. we r just doctors .if u want her alive than just pray to god for her living. now m going for doing her operation..

(he is standing there all alone shattered somewhere deep in to himself thinking of the past events happened, cursing himself for not listening her. she told him before but he didn't listen her.she is telling the truth and he never paid attention to her..and now he has nothing to do for her rather then praying..the famous SUPERSTAR RK who can purchase everthing with his fame and money is now totally helpless. his money his fame is worthless at this moment. He is just standing there and waiting for the operation to be done..his breaths are heavy and guilt overtakes him as the time passes, he is feeling suffocated a lone tear escaped form his eyes...



ok friends tell me how is this???...please read and like it...i will continue it only when i get good response..so please for motivating me do like and comments ...😃

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bhanu_rekhag thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW first one to comment

its simply superb

started soo emotionally

cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

WOW first one to comment

its simply superb

started soo emotionally

cont soon


thanks for liking actually it will start form the flashbacks...like tragic story...i will post the first part today at night...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting
Waiting for the first part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shravya.M

Interesting
Waiting for the first part


thanks a lot...i will post it soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting beginning...
looking forward for the next part 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pm me please...
really good start...
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks to u all..i will update mostprobably tonite after 11 pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interesting...
plz add me in..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelyme12



thanks for liking actually it will start form the flashbacks...like tragic story...i will post the first part today at night...



will it have a happy ending? ?if yes I can take tragedy easily

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