Written update For 14 n 15!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Was waiting for this forum to open😆
Will post in few minutes😃
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Short update:
Feb 14th -
The story starts in pune where we see aditi,abha n manohar bring their mother kaveri to a big mansion typed house blind-folded from car.Enter avni (the lead heroine)n she comes near her mother n siblings n remove the blind-fold n shows her mother the house..she gets gets surprised seeing the house ..avni says it's their house named on her mother's name "Kaveri".They enter the house n all r excited but kaveri is worried how will she clean it..avni says she will have 10 workers kept for her n they proceed to the temple where lord ganeshji's idol is kept..while all siblings go to check out rooms kaveri asks avni to get married but she says she will marry only after her siblings are settled..her mother gets sad n asks will she ever be able to see her married before her death?
Avni wakes up with a jerk ..yes the whole above thing is her dream..shes in the bus with her friend n realises it.Avni says sorry she slept..her friend (usha i think)saysofcourse she will get sleep as she works till late n come early to office again..avni says she is commited to her work n enjoys it.They get down at their office bus stop while avni enters the office her friend goes to have vadaa paav..😆..as avni enters office peon greets her n she asks him to get a cup of tea..she goes to her cabin n writes "Dream house for aayi"on slip n pastes with her other slips where she writes dreams of her other siblings..😃as she is pasting some pics on bulliten board someone comes from behind n try to catch her from waist..but avni turns at right time n gets scared seeing her colleague - maskare..(may be its his surname🤔) n asks what does he want..he tries to cover up his bad intentions saying he needs file..she says she will send it to his table.Some other colleague comes n asks for advance money very rudely..avni says to tell reason n she will ask boss..but hes adamant..maskare comes again to help her..avni says she will handle herself..n says strictly to other colleague who asks advance to say reason for advance n talk to boss after he comes.He leaves..she is about to start her work when she gets a call from her sister that something happened to her aayi..she leaves the office in auto after saying to her friend to handle n reaches home ..but sees all normal n gets angry.They have called her as ladke waale-groom is coming to see her..she gets really angry and says she was scared of her mother n this is why she came?but after her mother's pleas she accepts n gets ready for seeing the groom.
The grooms family comes n sees avni n likes her.They ask if she has to say anything..as they really like her n want the marriage to get fixed.Avni says she has 2 things to say one she will work after marriage..groom's family accept it but when shes says her second condition that she will give that money earned from job to her mother..all get's shocked!!!!

Feb 15th:
The grooms family is shocked hearing the condition n say that how can she expect something like that..she says she has two sisters n one brother n want to help them..but they don't agree n blame her mother to which avni says not to say a word..if they don't like its ok but not to say a thing to her mother.They leave but not before the guy says that if she expects this condition to be fulfilled then she will be never married in her life..all are sad!!
Its night n all are not eating the food..avni says she will also not eat if no one eats n is about to get up when aayi(her mom) eats n all eats with her...at night all are sleeping but aayi is crying thinking of avni..avni wakes up n goes to her n consoles her n says not to worry..she has suffered enough after her father has left them abruptly..her mother says will she ever marry..avni says she will if anyone accepts her condition but will anyone accept is her doubt?..aayi is happy hearing it n says there will be one for sure for her!
we see a hero(bhaskar) on byke-full speed driving n halts infront of showroom he comes inside n we get to know he went for test drive...the shopkeeper says will he buy it?Bhaskar says he want the coclor blue byke n he will buy it when he gets married n he will need this byke as dowry..shopkeeper is irritated to know that he wasted his time n to go out ..but bhaskar says he is sales tax officer..shopkeeper is scared,,bhaskar takes advantage n asks him to go for another test drive n pay resturants bill for which he ate..😆shopkeeper shocked n thinks whoever this guy marries is going to suffer a lot.
Avni is going to office ..aayi wakes up n sees avni got ready n prepared breakfast also..she wakes up aditi n aabha n asks to prepare tea for avni..avni says she don't have time n is about to leave...when aayi says about the household money needs n also manohar..avnis brother needs money..avni denies saying he will use it only for seeing movies so she will not give..its time he should work n earn n not ask me..n her aayi should be strict to manohar like she is to her other daughters whom she wokeup early but let manohar sleep till late.Aayi is concerned to hear it.Avni leaves.
punditji comes to aayis house with another proposal for avni (bhaskar photo)..aayi says to say to the grrom family about avni's condition n if they accept she has no problem.

Precap: Bhaskar n his family sees avni's photo..but bhaskar's aayi(rohini hatangini) says about avni's condition to give her work money to her mother..bhaskar says once married then we will see where the money goes!!

That's the short update..i think i missed some scenes..
sorry for anyother mistakes..written in hurry!!
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

P.S: This show reminds me of some saying i read somewhere
"A son is a son until he gets wife,A daughter is a daughter throughout her life"
(No offence guys😃😆)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx for the update....:) appreciate ur efort
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please sign up on this thread so in future we know who is posting Written Updates when😳


Thanx,
Vidya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update Sri.. very well written.....the story seems interesting ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey thanx a lot dear for d written update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks sri...
Anyone doing the written update of 16th February 2011?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The dream sequence gave a wrong impression in my mind. But later developments changed it.

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Edited by walquest2000 - 14 years ago

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