MS FF - Yeh Ishq Hai [Part 25 PG.14] - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was a really nice part. Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks guys for the comments! they really are appreciated; and to the silent readers! just don't give up on the story! I'll post Part 4 and 5 in a couple of hours! And thanks once again!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really great ff
can't wait to find out what happens at the farmhouse
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4:

Shabd:Nahin Veer, main nahin a sakta, mujhe bahut kaam hai.

Aditya:Koi kaam nahin, tumhe chute mil gaye. Jao, enjoy karo.

Aditya:Par dad...

Aditya:Par war kuch nahin. Tuma jare ho and that's final.

Veer:To theek hai, hum tum teeno ko subha 7 baje pick up karne a jayenge. Tayyar reh na.

Raji:Fikar mat karo, hum tayyar honge.

Veer:Just in case, ladkiyan usually bahut waqt lete hain tayyar hone main.

Durga:Veer!

Veer:Kya?

Sunita:Theek hai theek hai, tum bachon khana kha lo aur apne chute ki liye plan bhi bana le na.

Jeet:Haan...mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai. Chalo khate hain.

Soni:Haan chalo. Arre, Mahi, Shabd, tumhe khana nahin kkhana kya? Bhook nahin lagi?

Mahi:Nahin, mujhe bhook nahin lagi.

Shabd:Mujhe bhi nahin.

Jeet:Theek hai, hum khana khake ate hain.

And the four left to eat dinner while Shabd and Mahi seperate ways; they decided to mingle with the guests that attended the engagement.While the two were mingling, the other four were hatching a plan to make the two realize that Shabd and Mahi were indeed attracted to each other. They just had to get them to realize it.


Raji:Dekho. Woh dono kaise kare hain. Saaf saaf nazar ara hai ki woh ek doosre se attracted hain. Par un dono ka ego...

Veer:Tum sahi keh rahi ho Raji.Hume kuch aisa karna chahiye ki woh dono apna ego bhoola dein aur samajh a jaye ke woh dono ek doosre se kitna attracted hain.

Jeet:Haan...aur aisa karne kya mere pas ek idea hai. Suno.

And Jeet started to explain his plan to get Shabd and Mahi together.


Soni:Jeet, yeh to bahut acha plan hai. Yeh to kamyab hi hoga.

Jeet:Thank you.

Durga:Tum charon ne khana kha liya?

Veer:Ji mama, humne kha liya.

Durga:Theek hai, tum hum chalte hain. Subha ki tayyarian bhi karni hai. Goa aur Bhatinda bahut door hai. Jaldi to janna hai na?

Moni:Theek hai Durga ji. Namaste.

Everyone said goodbye and they left for the door. Veer and Jeet winked at Raji and Soni about the plan while Shabd and Mahi just glared at each other.


Brij:Mahi puttar. Tum sab ko darwaze tak chod ao.

Mahi: Ji daddyji.

By then all the other guests had already left.Everyone went to their cars; only Shabd was left at the door.


Mahi:Ab tum yahan kyon khare ho?

Shabd: Woh isl iye kyunki mujhe yeh batana that tima par tayyar ho jana. Mujhe der honi ki adat nahin hai.

Mahi:Accha, to main zaroor der karongi.

Shabd:Whatever.

And Shabd left to go to his car. He didn't wait at the door to tell Mahi to be on time. In fact he wanted to apologize for what he said at the party, but him and his ego; it got in the way.

(In Mahi,Soni and Raji's Bedroom)


Soni:Aaj kitna maza aya na? Aur Shabd, Wah! Kya gata hai!

Raji:Haan, Bahut maza hai aya. Aur Shabd aur Mahi kitne ache lagre the ek doosre ke saath gate waqt.

Soni and Raji were trying to get Mahi to get Mahi to admit that she infact did like Shabd. They could see it in her eyes when they were dancing together;but her and her arrogance.


Mahi:Yeh aap kay keh rahi hain Raji di? Main aur woh saandh! Aap ka dimaag to theek hai na?

Raji:Maine aisa kya keh dia? Shabd acha ladka hai, thoda sa arrogant hai, par tum bhi hona. Par woh acha bhi hai na? Tum dono ki jodi bahut achi lage ki. Kyon Soni?

Soni:Haan Raji di.

Mahi:Ab bas bhi kijiye, bahut ho gaya. Subah jaldi nahin uthna?

Soni:Kyon, intezaar nahin hota Shabd ki liye?

Mahi:Fitteh mooh tera Soni. Aap bat ker rahe hain. Chup chap so jao.

And Mahi turned off the lights making the others go to sleep as well.


Raji:Theek hai, so jate hain.

Mahi felt excited and nervous to go to the farmhouse with Shabd. She also wanted to apologize but her arrogance got in the way and put those feelings aside and fell asleep.

The Next Morning


Jeet:Shabd! Jaldi karo! Hume ladkiyon ko pick karna hai. Jald kar na!

Shabd:Theek hai. Abhi aya!

Jeet:Kehta hai ki ladkiyan bahut waqt laga ti hain tayyar hone main, kudh abhi tayyar nahi hoya.

Shabd didn't know why but he wanted to look his best to impress. So he wore khaki shorts with a white t-shirt showing off his muscles with his hair spiked and gelled.


Shabd:Chalo, ladkiyon ko pick karna hai, Said Shabd running down the stairs with a hint of excitedness that he tried to hide. Unfortunately, Jeet noticed and knew that he was excited to see Mahi; but wouldn't admit it.

Jeet:Bhai apka bahar wait kar rahe hain.

Jeet was wearing black shorts with a red t-shirt and hair all messy while Veer was wearing cut off jeans and black t-shirt and his hair in a neat messy type of style.


Veer:Kitne der karte tumne Shabd. Tumhe late hona pasand nahin hai na?

Shabd:Late kahan hua hoon. Ab chalo.

Veer:Theek hai, chalo.

And the three got into the car to get the Malhotra girls.


Raji:Mahi! Jaldi nahar a jao. Woh log ate hi honge.

Raji was yelling at Mahi from up the stairs even though she knew why Mahi was taking so long to get ready. She wanted to look nice, dress to impress.

Raji was wearing a blue skirt and a white sphagetti strap top with her hair down.


Mahi:Ayi baba!

Mahi came running down the stairs in her knee high khaki shorts and blue tank top. She had her hair down as well and was wearing a necklace that said Mahi on it.

Mahi:Raji di, Soni kahan hai?

Soni:Main yahan hoon.

Soni came down wearing capri with a white t-shirt that had a red heart on it.

As the girls bid good-bye to their parents, the boys arrived.


Jeet:Arre, tun teeno to tayyar time par hogi.

Veer:Aur bahut achi lag rahi ho tum teeno. Kyon Sgabd?

Shabd kept on staring at Mahi, she looked so beautiful in these modern clothes. Not even the girls in Mumbai could even attept to look this beautiful the way Mahi looked.


Shabd:Haan, bahut achi lag rahi ho, ab chalein?

Veer:Theek hai, chalo.

Veer pulled Raji into the front seat while Jeet took Soni into the middle seat. The only seat left was beside Shabd which Mahi did not want to take.

Raji:Mahi, behet jao na, der ho rahi hai.


Mahi:Theek hai.

Mahi unwillingly sat next to Shabd who wasn't so pleased either.


Shabd: Gadi start to karo Veer.

Veer:Theek hai, itni bhi jaldi nahin hai.

And they drove off to the farmhouse in Goa to put their plan to get that Shabd and Mahi were falling for each other and admit it into action.


Hope you liked it. Will post Part 5 soon. Please comment. It motivates me. Thanks


Edited by taran13 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5:

Shabd:Itna gussa mat utaro, mujhe bhi shauk nahin hai tumhari saath behte ne ka.

Mahi:Mujhe bhi shauk nahin hai. Koi seat nahin bachi the is liye, warna kaun behthna chata hai tumhari saath. Saandh ho tum.

Shabd:Main aur saandh? Tun ek pagli ho. NAhin ek pagli bhi nahin, tum ek chipkali ho!

Mahi:Chipkali, aur woh bhi main?

Shabd:Haan!

Jeet:Bhai, aur kitne door hai, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai. Jaldi karo na!

Veer:Farmhouse abhu door hai. Ek kaam karte hain, khana piche gadi mein hai, chalo woh nikalte hain aur kha lete hain.

Jeet:Theek hai, jaldi gadi rokiye. Bahut bhook lagi hai.

Veer:Yeh lo, gadi rok di.

Raji:Main aur Soni khana nikalte hain. Chal Soni.

Soni:Ji di.

Mahi:Ek minute Soni, main bhi aati hoon. Mujhe is saandh ke saath ek minute bhi nahin reh na.

Shabd:Phir usne mujhe saandh kaha!

Veer:Thand rakh Shabd. Mahi aisi hi hai. Gussa bahut karti hai par dil ki bahut achi hai.

Shabd:Dil ki bahut achi hai my foot!

Jeet:Yeh sab bhool jao, khana aye gaya!

Shabd:Tumhe khana hi yaad hai? Aur kuch nahin?

Jeet:Haan!


Everyone took their sanwiches and pop and started to eat. The couples wanted to eat together and to get Shabd and Mahi to get to bond so they went off to eat in a nerby park; so Mahi and Shabd were left alone again, eating their dinner on a big rock near the car.


Shabd:Ab main Mahi ko sikhata hoon. Mahi, ky tumne kuch dikhay deta hai kya wahan?


Shabd pointed towards the road to distract her attention from her plate so he could place a fake apider into her plate. What did he know that Mahi was REALLY scared of spiders!
AsMahi turned to look around yo see what Shabd was pointing at, Shabd put the fake spider in her plate.


Mahi: Mujhe to kuch bhi dikhay dera.

Shabd:Mujhe laga wahan kuch tha. Chalo, khana khatam karte hain.

Mahi:Andha kahin ka.


Mahi began to eat when she noticed the spider in her plate. She yelled so loud that Shabd even dropped his plate full with food to cover his ears to not hear her scream. But he also doubled up in laughter. Mahi then realized that it was all a joke played by Shabd.


Mahi:Saandh kahin ka. Shabd main tumhe nahin chodungi!


And she ran after Shabd, hittim him as hard as she could. While Shabd ran away from Mahi, Mahi tripped over a rock, lickily, sha also caught Shabd taking him down in the fall. Shabd then fell on top of Mahi having an eye lock session between them. Even though they were so close together, it felt right (in a way). They jumped up looking awkward when they heard the others coming.


Raji:Kya hua? Tum log chilare kyon the?

Mahi:Dekh ye na di, Shabd ne meri plate mein ek cockroach dala tha.

Shabd:Woh nakli tha Raji.


Raji and everyone started to smile.


Soni:Tumko pata nahin ki Mahi spiders se kitna darti hai. Bachpan mein maine aisa kuch kiya tha aur...

Veer:Ab bas bhi karo, Shabd, Mahi se maffi mango.

Sabdh:Main maffi mangu aur is chipkali se? Kabhi bhi nahin!

Veer:Please. Dekhna woh kitna dar gayi hai!

Shabd:Theek hai. Sorry!

Mahi:It's ok.

Jeet:Ab chalo, farmhouse nahin jana kya?

Soni:Haan chalo.


Everyone got into their original seats and went off. However, Shabd and Mahi sat as far as possible, not because of the spider incident, but because of the closeness they felt when they fell together.

Shabd also felt bad about the little prank he played on Mahi. He had no idea she was so scared of them. He really wanted to apologize but not in front of everyone; his ego once again got into the way.

It was wee ours in the morning but they finally made it to the farmhouse.


Veer:Hum a gaye.

Jeet:Finally, mujhe bahut neend ara hi hai. Chalo Soni, hum apna room dekhte hain.

Soni and Jeet shared a room and Raji and Veer shared a room (all the rooms had two beds each, it really wasn't that big of a farmhouse; it was normal size, nothing fancy).

Soni:Yeh hai tum dono ka kamra.

Mahi:Lekin Soni, yeh to ek hi kamra hai.

Soni:Haan, ek kamra to hai lekin do bed to hai na. Tum aur Shabd yeh kamra share kar lena.

Shabd+Mahi:Kya?!

Hope you guys liked it. Please comment.


Edited by taran13 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this part was really good.. what happened to part 5..or was the last part both part 4 and part 5.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just read part 5, it was really nice cant wait to see what happens next
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Posted: 17 years ago
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AWESOME!!!! COMPLETELY SUPERB!!! GR8 JOB... CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON....... M WAITING WAITING WAIING 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow... just read the whole ff all at once... its going AMAZING! continue soon! =D
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Part 6:

Shabd:Nahin.Main is chipkali ke saath kamra share nahin karoonga.

Jeet:Please, hum jaante hai tum dono uncomfortable feel karo gay, par please. Do bed to hai na.


Mahi just looked at Shabd who just shrugged and went into theri room. Mahi eventually followed.

As they went in, Soni and Jeet high fived and gave the thumbs up to Raji and Veer.


Soni+Jeet:Goodnight! And they headed off to their own bedrooms; they were tired themselves. Doing all this schemeing was really tiring.

Mahi:Kaunsa bed chahiye?

Shabd:Kya?

Mahi:Kaunsa bed chahiye, left yan right?

Shabd:Oh...koi bhi, mujhe koi fark nahin parta.

Mahi:Theek hai, tum left wala le lo.


Shabd felt that this was a good oppurtunity to apologize to Mahi for whatever he did; he really did feel guilty about it.

As Mahi was going to the bathroom to change, Shabd caught her wrist; but when she glared at him, he immediately let go.


Shabd:Sorry, woh main.....

Mahi:Woh main kya?Mahi asked sweetly, she noticed that he was really trying to put aside his ego and say something he usually doesn't.

Shabd:Dekho Mahi. Mujhe nahin pata tha ki tum spiders se itna dar ti ho. Please, mujhe maaf kar do.
And he truly meant it and Mahi saw that in his eyes.
She never really did notice how sweet his light brown eyes really were. It showed his caring for the people he really loved.
Mahi quickly came out of that thought.


Mahi:Koi baat nahin Shabd. It's ok.

Shabd:To theek hai.Hum phirse shuru karein? Friends?

Shabd took out his hand as a sign of true friendship. And Mahi obliged when she shook his hand.

Mahi:Friends.

As the night progressed, the friendship grew even deeper. They put aside all their ego's and arrogances and put effort into their friendship.

In the Morning


Shabd:Yeh khushboo kahan se ara hi hai?

Shabd smelt an amazing aroma while he walked down the stairs into the kitchen wearing shorts and a t-shirt with his hair messy and wet from his shower.

He noticed that Mahi wasn't in their room when he woke up, so he guessed that she's probably the ones who's in the kitchen.

To his surprise, he saw Mahi in shorts and t-shirt as well with her hair tied up in a ponytail, she was making blueberry muffins for everyone.


Shabd:Mahi?

Mahi:Arre Shabd. Tum kab aye?

Shabd:Abhi aya. Tum itna subhe subhe kya kari ho?

Mahi:Main sab ki liye naashta bana rahi hoon.

Shabd:Khushboo to achi hai. Kya bana rahi ho?

Mahi:Bluberry muffins. Kaho gay?

Shabd:Abhi nahi. Main tumhari madat karta hoon.

Mahi:Tumhe muffins banana aata hai?

Shabd:Haan!

Mahi:Chalo, tum yeh batter tray me dal dena.Main doosre muffins oven se nikalti hoon.

Shabd was carefully pouring the batter into the muffin tray when he heard Mahi yell. Shabd ran towards Mahi to see Mahi clutching her hand. It looked like she burnt it.

Mahi:Ouch!

Shabd:Mahi! Tum theek to ho na?

Shabd very carefully took Mahi's hand into his to see what happened. It was a slight burn but he could tell that it hurt her a lot. And her pain was his pain too.

Mahi:Shabd, kuch bhi nahi hua. Maamooli si chot hai.

Shabd:Maamooli si chot! Mahi tumhara haat jal gaya hai aur tum keh ra hi ho ki maamooli si chot hai!

As Shabd was tending to Mahi's slightly burnt hand, the other four quietly watched. Their plan was working so far, they would just have to get them closer and get them to realize their feelings.

Raji:Kitni achi jodi hai.

Soni:Haan, bas un dono ko pata chal jaye ke woh ek doosre se kitna chate hain. Ek doosre se kitna pyar karte hai. Dekhna, kaise Shabd Mahi ki parwah karta hai. Ek doosre ki liye pyar in dono ki ankhon mein saaf nazar ara hai.

Jeet:Kyon nahin hum humara plan aur advance kara dein?

Veer:Yeh bahut achi baat hai. Mere paas ek plan hai. Suno!

From here the four advanced their plan to get Shabd and Mahi together.


Hope you guys liked it. I will post part 7 up probably tomorrow. Please comment!
Edited by taran13 - 17 years ago

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