JAB WE MET (MS fan fic)- END pg 36 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
thanks everyone... 😊

well will Mahi go after Shabd or not??? let's see šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
i'm so dying to read more😃 cont soooon😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
awesome update
finally she knows the truth..
cant wait to see what happends next
please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
This is AWESOME šŸ˜Ž....lovin it!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
thanks all of u....i will start writing next part right now....thanks 4 ur patience 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 10:


RECAP: A boulder had just hit Mahi- her world came crashing down; her heart was shattered into a million pieces at that moment………her dreams were no longer dreams…….how could she ever snatch her sister's happiness……why didn't she notice that Jeet and Soni loved each other? Mahi froze at the spot, numb of any emotion……just a dark cloud hung in front of her……


Was this dark cloud with a silver lining though???



Mahi retired to her room and stayed up all night. She soaked her pillow case with buckets and buckets of tears. As the morning sun peeped through the curtains in her window, she sat up and felt her pillow, "fitteh mooh tera! Mahi….tu itni kamzor kab se ho gayi? Soni ke liye khush hone ki jagah, yeh takiya geela karti rahi raat bhar? Main sach much pagal hoon……agar Jeet se meri shaadi ho gayi hoti tho wo saari umar apni saali ke liye tadapta rehta," she remembered Shabd's words, "mujhey tho poori ghar waali chaahiye….aadhi nahin!"


"Haan mujhey bhi poora gharwaala chaahiye…aadha nahin!" she got up and picked her clothes from her closet. She had a busy day ahead of her.


After showering and scrubbing the weariness from her face, she walked down for breakfast in a bright yellow salwaar kameez.




"Good morning mummyji…daddyji…Raji didi? Aap raat ko yahin rahi?" she hugged her oldest sister and held her close for some time. She wiped a little tear trying to escape her eyes and then smiled at everyone.



"Maine aaj ek faisla kiya hai!" she announced.


"Faisla?" Soni walked in; her heart fluttered at the thought- Mahi was probably going to announce when she wanted to get married to Jeet as soon as possible, "kaisa faisla Mahi?"


Mahi ran to Soni, "yahan baith jaa…..phir bataati hoon," she helped Soni settle down at the dining table.




"Maine faisla kiya hai ki main abhi shaadi," she paused and looked at everyone's faces. Raji and Soni glanced at each other; they knew what was coming, "main abhi shaadi NAHIN karoongi!"




"KYA?" they were all shocked. Their little Mahi who ate, slept, dreamt, inhaled the word 'shaadi' since she was 5 years old had decided to not get married at this point?




"Aisa kya hua puttar?" Brij asked, 'main tho aaj hi Khurana saheb se teri aur Jeet ki shaadi ki tareek pakki karne jaa raha tha."




"Nahin daddyji……abhi shaadi nahin karni mujhey….aur Jeet se tho bilkul nahin!" she said firmly and then noticed the color come back on Soni's face. Soni tried her best to not blush in front of everyone and just lowered her head.




"Kya keh rahi hai puttar?" Mouni got worried, "Jeet ka dil toot jaayega."



"Mujhey koi farak nahin padhta!" Mahi said ruthlessly, "aakhir meri zindagi ka sawaal hai……mujhey Hotel management ka course karna hai….phir kuch ban na hai…..paise kamaane hai…..phir sochungi shaadi ke baare mein."


"Mouni! Main pehle hi kehta tha….isey Mumbai mat bhej! Dekha tuney….kaise oot pataang khayaal aane lage hain iske dimaag mein? Aur wo Mumbai ka ladka….kya naam hai uska….Shabd? Wo bhi brain waash kar gaya hai isey….matt maari gayi hai iski!" Brij was enraged at the thought of his daughter wanting to get a job and earn before getting married, "main soch raha tha Mahi ki shaadi jald se jald ho jaaye….phir bas Soni reh jaayegi…..aakhir main bhi kuch din mein retire hone waala hoon…..2 kunwaari ladkiyon ko kaise rakhoonga?"




"Daddyji….rehne deejiye na…..Mahi aage padhai karna chaahti hai tho karne deejiye…..aaj kal ladkiyan apne pairon par khadi ho tho accha rehta hai," Raji reassured her angry dad. Raji's calming voice had always soothed Brij whenever he was upset.




"Mahi….yeh achanak hotel management ka bhoot kahan se sawaar ho gaya tujh par?" Mouni asked.




"Mummyji….Manali mein ek hotel mein training course shuru ho raha hai…..maine newspaper mein dekha tha….tab se hi mera mann kar raha hai…please mummyji," Mahi lied- it was a friend in Mumbai who had mentioned that she would be doing that course, so Mahi just blurted the first thing that came to her mind.




"Suno ji…..karne do na isey course…..Jeet agar Mahi ko chaahta hai tho intezaar kar lega," Mouni placed her hand on Brij's shoulder.




Mahi noticed that Soni had turned pale again.



"Nahin mummyji….Jeet mere type ka nahin hai…..main us se shaadi nahin karoongi," Mahi whined.


"Kya keh rahi hai puttar?" Mouni was aghast.


"Lagta hai wo sheher waala…..kya naam hai uska….Shabd? Wo pasand aa gaya hai is pagli ko," Brij flared his nostrils, "jaanti hai wo kaun hai? Sareen Enterprises ka ek lauta waaris hai……uske sapne dekhna chhod de! Wo kahan….aur hum kahan?"




"Daddyji….Shabd se mera aisa koi rishta nahin hai…..main tho bas yeh keh rahi hoon ki mujhey Jeet pasand nahin hai…..aap samajhte kyun nahin hain?" Mahi stomped her foot.



"Daddyji…..waise ek baat kahoon?" Raji asked hesitantly.



"Haan bol puttar?" Brij calmed down at Raji's question.



"Soni aur Jeet ki baat kyun na kar lein? Papa (Khurana is her father in law) se keh deejiye ki pehle Soni ki shaadi karna chaahte hain….Soni badhi bhi hai…..tho bura bhi nahin lagega," Raji suggested.




"Idea bura nahin hai….lekin Jeet…usko kya kahenge? Wo tho Mahi se pyaar karta haina?" Brij asked.



Soni blushed profusely and got up from the table. She joined her mother at the stove and pretended to cook something in the pan. Mahi noticed every move and expression of Soni and smiled tearfully for her.



"Daddyji!" Mahi walked to her dad and put her arms around him, "Jeet tho budhhu hai…..usey hum dono hi pasand hain…..wo hamesha kehta tha ki tu mujh se shaadi nahin karegi tho main Soni se kar loonga…..aap poonch kar tho dekhiye….shart lagaa leejiye ….wo na nahin karega!" she chuckled and kissed her dad's cheek.




"Theek hai theek hai…..Soni se tho poonch lein?" Brij asked, "puttar Soni…tera kya khayal hai Jeet ke baare mein? Pasand hai tujhey?"




Soni turned around with her eyes on the ground, "jaisa aap sab chaahe…..mujhey aap logon ki marzi manzoor hai," she said softly.



Mahi rolled her tongue and thought, "Soni ki bachhi…..kitni bholi ban rahi hai…..oopar jaakar seedha Jeet ko phone milaaegi shaitaan kahin ki!"




"Theek hai phir puttar….main aaj hi baat karta hoon," Brij caressed Soni's head and then looked at Mahi sternly, "aur Manali jaana zaroori hai tera?"




"Haan daddyji…..Manali tho main jaaoongi!" Mahi grinned.



Brij softened a little, "theek hai puttar….jaise teri marzi."



Soni ran upstairs as Brij left to talk to the Khuranas. Mahi followed her sister and stood outside Soni's room. She overheard Soni dialing a phone, "Hello…Jeet?" she whispered.




Mahi wiped her tears and walked into her room. She picked her cell phone and called her Mumbai friend, "Hello….. Geeta? Main Mahi….haan wo tu Manali mein hotel management ka course karne jaa rahi haina? Uski deadline kya hai?"


"15 tarikh," Geeta replied.


Mahi looked at the calendar, "4 din aur hain iska matlab…..thanks Geeta….bye!" she hung up.


Mahi walked out of her room and ran into a blushing Soni, "Soni jaan…..yeh mann hi mann mein laddoo kaise phoot rahe hain?"


"Kuch nahin Mahi….yeh bataa….tuney Jeet se shaadi kyun nahin karni? Kya wo Mumbai waala Shabd pasand aa gaya hai?" Soni teased her back.




Mahi was at loss for words; she did not want Soni to suspect that she had purposely sacrificed her love for her sister's happiness, "haan…haan…kuch aisa hi samajh le," she said shyly. The sisters hugged each other joyfully. Mahi hugged Soni tightly and caressed her back, "khush reh meri behen…..aur jald hi shaadi kar le," Mahi could not hold her tears.


"Tu ro rahi hai?" Soni pulled away as she felt her warm tears through her kurta, "kya hua?"


"Pagli!" Mahi laughed tearfully, "khushi ke aansoo hain."


"Theek hai….main bhi tujh se vachan leti hoon ki jab tak teri aur Shabd ki shaadi nahin ho jaati….main bhi Jeet se shaadi nahin karoongi!" Soni declared firmly.


Mahi's face froze- she was stunned and shocked beyond words, "ab main kya karoongi?" she was in a bind….what was she supposed to do now?


…to be contd…
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
very ncie part con soon😊 i so don't want to see mahi crying 😭 shabd come to rescue your life and love 😭 šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

very ncie part con soon😊 i so don't want to see mahi crying 😭 shabd come to rescue your life and love 😭 šŸ‘ šŸ‘




Thanks akfan...he will...he will 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
lol i even pictured this fan fic in my head šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† .... i love ur fan fics they r better than books i read n e wayzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
ooooo... very nice chapter... waiting 4 wats to happen next... jw how often do u plan 2 update this ff?

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