JAB WE MET (MS fan fic)- END pg 36

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mahiya_f

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

wow cute!! i love mahi's wa of talking - it reminds me of the old her

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shake

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

it was good but she sounds like those women who have paan in their mouth and like talk like hella.u should put more english in it too and liek make it sound liek her being more mature but good description and dialouge.

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rmj1990

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

lmao haa omg this is soo funni!!!

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bheegi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

thanks everyone. Mahi was indeed a very talkative and chirpy girl at the beginning of the original Maayka show...i miss that Mahi. That is how I am trying to portray her here. Yes, i am maayka-ising the JWM movie 😆 I will def include more english dialogues in coming chapters 😃

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Amina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

This is just too good Mahi is shoo cute😆 Shabd is being himself....angry and weird😆

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Muniza Riaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

😆 Wah wah bheegi ji tusi great ho.
Kya mast ff hai, mazza aagaya.
Wonderful, i read both 2 parts, not to long.
Chalo chalo continue karo ji.
Daikhtey hain dono ko aagey kaisey pyaar hota hai.
Mahi Malhotra from bhatinda, and Mr. Shabd Sareen 😉 😳 😃 .

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bheegi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

thanks Munni and am786

Thanks 4 reading and commenting all of u 😊 . Yes this ff will have short parts as i am also writing another ff so have to do best in the time I have available