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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: bheegi

thanks Munni and am786

Thanks 4 reading and commenting all of u 😊 . Yes this ff will have short
parts as i am also writing another ff so have to do best in the time I have
available

you mentioned u are wrting another fanfic...which is forum is it in?
and wats its name plzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
thanks everyone 😊

PART 3:

RECAP: "Aap gusse mein apne baare mein sab kuch bataa dete hain….good….tab tho aapko aur gussa dilaati hoon," Mahi stood up and grinned.


Shabd clenched his fists and walked out of their compartment. Mahi followed him with puris in her hands.


Shabd opened the door of the compartment and stood at the steps. The train was moving at lightning speed. Shabd just stared into the dark emptiness outside and contemplated what he should do next. He had no desire to live any longer; Suhani had taken every little morsel of aspiration and longing from his existence- she had shattered his heart into pieces; how could he ever live again?



"Waise train ki speed ko dekh kar tho lagta hai ki aapke bachne ke chances bahut kum hain," Mahi came and stood behind him and looked outside, "waise marne se pehle aapki koi aakhiri ichha hai?" she asked him as she bit off a piece of her puri.



Shabd's nostrils flared as he glared at her mouthful of puri and achaar. What was wrong with this girl? "yeh kyun mere haath dho kar peeche padh gayi hai?"



"Ok….nahin hai akhiri ichha tho….yeh lo…meri maa ke haath ka banaaya aam ka achaar khaakar maro…..kum se kum mooh ka taste tho achha rahega marte time….pata nahin itni raat ko," she peeped out, "itne andhere mein Yamraj bhi aayenge ya nahin…..kahin bhookhe pait na marna padhe…..mujhey khaane ka bahut shauk hai…..main bas bhagwan se yeh kehti hoon ki jab bhi maroo, khali pait na maroo….aapka kya khayal hai?" she grinned and stared at him innocently.



Shabd took a deep breath and looked up at the roof of the compartment, "hey bhagwan….yeh museebat mere gale kyun padhi hai?"



Mahi shut the door of the compartment and held Shabd's hand, "andar aaiye….aapko batati hoon ki gale padhna kise kehte hain," she pulled him by his hand back to their berths.


Shabd was exasperated by this petite but persistent girl.


"Tho kya problem hai aapki?" she asked, "why are you killing yourself? Aap padhe likhe….mmm…dekhne mein bhi theek thaak hain…..achhe ghar ke lagte hain…..then what is your problem?" she asked as she sipped on her water bottle.


"YOU! YOU ARE MY PROBLEM!" he yelled in frustration.



"Main?" she chuckled, "wo tho main hoon….mere ghar waale bhi sab yehi kahte hain ki main jahan jaati hoon problem khadi kar deti hoon…..ab dekho pichle saal meri bua ke bhai ke bhatije ki shaadi mein hum sab ko jaana tha..par main…."




"NO MORE! Theek hai main kahin nahin jaaoonga…I won't kill myself….if you promise to shut up!" he came close to her face with his teeth clenched. He was so close that their eyelashes were just a few inches apart. At that moment, they both gazed into each other's eyes and were momentarily lost in an eye locking session.



Shabd realized he was a little too close to this strange woman; he hesitated and stood up, "main oopar waali berth mein so jaata hoon."



"haan yeh theek hai…kyunki mujhey heights se darr lagta hai," Mahi took out her bedding and lay down on her berth.



"Waise Shabd…..aapne bataaya nahin aapki problem kya hai?" she asked from below.


"Leave me alone Mahi Malhotra!" he bellowed, "Good Night!" He was hoping that once she was fast asleep, he would slip out at the next train station.


But Mahi just tapped her feet and started humming a song.

"Can you stop singing?" Shabd yelled from above.


"Aapko mujh se accha gaana aata hai?" Mahi got up and looked up.


"NAHIN AATA…..AUR NA HI SUN NE KA SHAUK HAI!" he roared.


"Bahut boring hain aap…..shayad aapko marr hi jaana chaahiye tha," Mahi rolled her tongue and provoked him.


Shabd jumped off the top berth and stood in front of her, "tum mujhey marne bhi tho nahin deti…..aur na chain se sone de rahi ho!"



Mahi softened a little, "dekhiye Shabd……obviously aapki zindagi mein koi aisi pareshaani hai jo aap mujhey bataana nahin chaahte……par kya aapko haq bantaa hai ki aap apni zindagi ke saath aisa khilwaad karein…..aapke parents ka kya hoga?"


"I don't care…..and neither do they," Shabd sat down in anger.


"Tho yeh problem hai?" Mahi asked sympathetically.


"Nahin," Shabd said softly, "yeh hai meri problem," he took out his wallet and showed her a picture of Suhani.


"Oh yeh?" Mahi giggled, "is bandariya ke liye aap marna chaahte hain?"


"Bandariya?" Shabd was amused.


"Aur kya…..jo ladki aap jaise acche, susheel, khush, polite, kind insaan ko chhod sakti hai tho wo ya tho bandariya hogi ya koi pagal," Mahi chuckled.


She saw Shabd smile faintly; the first time since she had met him. So far, he had just presented his grumpy and rude side to her, but her sarcasm seemed to have touched a chord somewhere inside.



Mahi took his wallet and removed Suhani's photograph, "chaliye is bandariya ka antim sanskaar kar dete hain," she got up and opened the window.


"What? Yeh kya kar rahi ho?" He was aghast.


"Kar diya!" she let the picture fly off her hands into some dark, unknown emptiness.



Shabd had a bemused look on his face, "yeh tumne accha nahin kiya Mahi……lekin ek baat hai," he sat down beside her, "I am feeling a little lighter now."



"Wo tho hoga hi……she must have been quite heavy for you……..kaafi bhaari type ki hogi…..50-60 kilo tho hoga na wajan? Aur lagta hai usey aapke wallet se zyaada pyaar tha…..tho accha hua usey bahar phaink diya,' she brushed off her hands and closed the window.


Shabd shook his head and climbed up to the top berth again.


"Goodnight"


"Goodnight"


…to be contd…
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
awwww so cute...PLZ CONTINUE SOON!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
wow i loved it but i miss ur long updates
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks mahiya, adventure gurl. ramasha, Gopi

I can only write short updates for this one as i am writing another ff in fan fic section called Des Pardes. Thanks 4 reading and commenting 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
that was choooooooo cute 😳 😳 i'm dying to read more cont soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
great update 👏
please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
grt part plzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
hey
yaar u r great 👏
i mean i was like laughing all the time, and now have a stomachache of course!!
thankx cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks all of u...loved all ur sweet comments. Here is part 4:

PART 4:

RECAP:

"Goodnight"


"Goodnight"


After a few minutes, Mahi was fast asleep from the gentle rocking of the moving train. Shabd lay wide-eyed as he could not get any sleep. Once he heard Mahi's gentle snores, he climbed down the berth and looked out the window. The train was approaching a small no name station.


"I should get off here…..what the hell am I doing with this Bhatinda waali? I can probably catch a train back to Mumbai from here," he turned around to walk but suddenly felt a tug on his finger.


"Jeet….mat jao Jeet…..kahan jaa rahe ho?" a delirious Mahi held on to Shabd's finger and pulled him back.


"Jeet? Yeh Jeet kaun hai?" Shabd wondered and gently removed her hand from his. He made a dash for the door and was off as soon as the train stopped. Mahi woke up with a startle as the train came to a screeching halt.




"Arre….Jeet …..nahin Shabd….shayad wo kahin jaa rahe the," she got up and knew her fears were not unfounded, "Hai rabba! Kahan chale gaye Shabd?"




Mahi forgot her dupatta and ran out bare-footed in her churidaar-kurta. She looked around at the deserted platform and finally spotted Shabd taking the stairs towards the exit.




"Shabd!Shabd!" she ran after him, but the loud roar of an approaching train drowned her screams, "arre baap re…..itni jaldi jaldi bhaag rahe ho…..kahin kuch gadh badh na kar baitho phir!"




As she climbed the stairs, a few hooligans sitting on the steps started hooting and whistling, "aaye hai…..zara hum par bhi tho nazar ghoomao jaaneman……kahan bhaage jaa rahi ho…..aaja…aaja….main hoon pyaar tera…."




Mahi gave the men a dirty look, "arre fitteh mooh tera! Main Bhatinde waali hoon….aur karate mein brown belt bhi hoon…..el laat doongi…..naani kya par-naani bhi yaad aa jaayegi tum saalon ko!"



The men took it as a challenge, and started following her, "hum bhi dekhein teri karate kick! Is baahane humein choo tho legi tu jaaneman!"



Mahi climbed briskly and reached the landing. Shabd was way ahead of her now, "SHABD!" she yelled, but he did not respond, "kaisa munda hai yeh? Kaan mein rui daal rakhi hai kya?"



One of the hooligans tried to hold Mahi's wrist. Mahi turned around and glared at him. Before the paan-chewing gunda could do anything, she gave him a karate kick right on his face.


"AHHHH!" the man held onto his jaw. The other 3 men froze and looked at each other, "ek chokri se darr raha hai?" All three of them growled and approached Mahi in a threatening manner. Mahi ran as fast as she could.




In the meantime, Shabd stopped at the exit door and paused to look back.


He was startled to see Mahi running with her arms in the air and three men following her, "Arre Mahi? Yeh yahan kya kar rahi hai?"



"Shabd!" Mahi ran into his arms as soon as she reached him. Shabd was startled and gave the three men a dirty look. The men stopped and turned around.



Mahi clung onto his shirt tightly. Shabd put his arm around her and patted her back, "It's OK….they have gone now."



Mahi pulled away and looked at him, "kab se awaaz de rahi thi main! Are you deaf too?"



Shabd felt a little ashamed; what if those men had actually harmed her, "Oh…wo…I think I was too lost in my own world…sorry….ab wapas train mein jao….I need to get back to Mumbai."


"Mumbai? Itni raat ko?" Mahi asked.


"I will take a taxi," Shabd said.


Just then the engine of their train whistled.


"Meri train!" Mahi yelled and saw the train leaving the platform, "Hai rabba….meri train! Yeh sab aapki wajah se hua hai…..ab aapko mujhey apne saath le jaana hoga…..and drop me at the next station…..yeh aapki sazaa hai."


"OK..OK…chalo…taxi kar lete hain…main tumhein next station par chhod kar wapas Mumbai chala jaaoonga," Shabd agreed.


They walked out of the station in search of a cab.


"Nahin saheb….kal subah tak koi taxi nahin milegi," they were informed.


"Arre aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Hamari train miss ho gayi hai…..wo kaise pakdenge?" Shabd asked.



"Subah taxi kar lena saheb…..train tak pahuncha degi aapko…..hamare taxi waale bahut fast drive karte hain saheb," the man informed them.


"OK….aaj raat kahan jaayenge phir?" Shabd asked


"Paas mein ek hotel hai saheb," the man glanced at Mahi from head to toe. Her dupatta-less neck revealed a little more than she was comfortable with. Mahi gave a dirty look to the man as he stared at her.


"Masti karna saheb…raat abhi baaki hai," the man made a snide remark as Shabd and Mahi walked off.


"Kya matlab hai iska?" Mahi clenched her teeth, "main abhi isko karate kick dekar aati hoon!"


Shabd put his arm around Mahi, "Mahi….Mahi…..just keep walking…..in logon se panga mat lo…..yeh sadak chaap log hain…..leave them alone…..we are in a strange city…..just walk quietly."


"Aap itne darr pok kyun ho Shabd? Zindagi se tho bhaagte hi ho…..ek gunde se bhi darr kar bhaag te ho?" Mahi asked.


Shabd's pride was hurt, "main darr pok nahin hoon! I just don't want to start a fight here…OK? Aur agar mujhey kuch ho gaya tho?"


"Tho?" Mahi asked, "tho…tho kya hoga?"


Shabd looked away, "phir tumhara kya hoga?" he said softly, "is ajnabee sheher mein kaun tumhara saath dega?"


Mahi lowered her head as they continued to walk.


They saw a sign, 'HOTEL BLUE NIGHT,' and walked in.



…to be contd…

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