OS: PriDa: Insieme Foreve In Our Heart 14Jun11 - Page 2

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...Maham... thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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No no no!

No you donot get to do this to my PriDa.. I think I liked it better the last time.. It touched to me then too.. But PriDa are.. just PriDa. Anddd.. i actually like killing PriDa in my own writings... now i know how it feels.

It's almost two in the morning and I was feeling a bit sleepy and tired and now I'm all miserable.

I would have preferred it BTW if you had shown Pri turning into a shell. If i said PriDa just can't co-exist without falling in love then I'm also saying here that PriDa are the only two people who can make or completely break each other. Believe in that and I will also stand by it.

You already know that i loved this.. And now with PriDa added to it.. It's even more special... and okay i admit i have no clue how you changed this. I dont remember exactly what happened in the one you posted on the blog.. Err... kindly excuse my abysmal memory.

26th Feb.. Red... Grrr Panna.. this is the third time you have left me feeling completely miserable... I cant even listen to that 'Just one last dance' song after the go i had at it a few weeks back.. Stupid imagination.. constructed very well how hopes and dreams are trashed and you provided the thought so i blame you for that.

That's enough from my side today I think. Brilliant job.

Maham

P.S: Come to think of it.. I'm rather glad that I'm feeling very sleepy.. Dulls the reaction.😆 and I know Damini didnt want Pri to end up like that.. but i dont care. I'm too selfish where PriDa are concerned. :P
Edited by ...Maham... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Panna...

this totally hurt as much as it did when i read it first on your blog..neither time nor the second read reduced the intensity of pain that is depicted soo beautifully by you..its been an emotional read for me...

i agree in life there are soo many "If Only" moments and cherishing what we had in our memories forever is the prefect way to avenge...
Edited by Nan08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
That was really painfully as well as beautiful Panna
there r something things which always remains in our memories

With Pannalogy101 we r now every learning Italian

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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
The first word that came to my mind after reading it is ' beautiful' . . . . . . Its an epitome of 'true love' . . . . Very touchin . . . Love it to d core . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
To every single member who took da time out to click on da post
Read it Liked it or Commented and gave a feedbak
Sincere thanxxX for accepting da Scenario and going wid da flow of mah imagination.
Truly appreciate your response.


Though i am sure messa have more romance bones in mah body...
Once in a while i try to dabble into da dark grim world of reality.

Wot If situations of PriDa are alwaz playering in mah mind.
~~Wen i sit on da first front facing seat on da double decker part of a bus
n look out at da world perched up high at mah feet
~~Wen i sit in da car driving in da countryside wid da wind in mah face
and hair on automation mode to become da next Shri Shri Satya Sai Baba re-incarnate
~~Wen i stand on da balcony and stare out miles at da far off horizon as da sun shines
on da vast expanse of water i call mah backyard personal pond
~~Wen i have a cup of Koffee at mah fav Barista in da middle of da BuzzBuzz called downtown
and amongst it all i hear da sirens of an emergency ambulance fighting traffic to save a soul
~~Wen i attempt to make a roti which defies all da possible country maps
on da planet in shape
~~Wen i sit in mah laundryroom and stare at da washing machine cycle tumbling da clothes and uniting da Green wid da Reds and giving me a reason to remember 2 gems uttered by Prithvi *Zarurat Hai* after grasshopper dance as he holds on to her hand in anger and Jealousy.

And outta it all if i am able to arouse your interest towards wot i penn down
Its all becoz of one single world dats Binded us all together, in da last 2 years...
*P-R-I-D-A* !!

All mah writings here are sincerely dedicated to one name dat changed mah way of expressing
and its *Prithvi*. Wish sumday i meet HIM... jus like a Dharini wishes to meet Gaurav Khanna.
Maybe sumday... Maybe Sumhow...
Sum futuristic experiment wer Sumone will Dare To Dream
and get me closer to da man of mah dreams...
Maybe der is a Prithvi out der Jus waiting to be MET.
But untill den... i will TRY to get closer to mah Destiny...
One OS... One VM... One Siggy... at a time.

Once again, yaY yaY to a forum,
who can understand da power of Imagination.
Jus Imagine Its Possible'
skorpion.



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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
Sentiappa Panna .. tsk tsk tsk ...

Let me add a few more randomness to your beautiful lines...

When I drive up a hill through dense fog
When Rain and the windshield wipers play tag
When the scent of new blooming flower lingers
When the wind plays a tune with my fingers...

When the long awaited nine placards appear
When a smiley springs on chat and dispels fear
When the mind can wander through all the clues
The Dream and the Dare will always shine through...

-- Mru
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Panna n Mru...

Wonderful lines 👏 ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
panna !!!

u made me cry ...

i cried d first tym i read it ...i cried d second tym i read it ...nd i cried again today wen i read it ...

i know its a bit late to comment now ...but u see i have dis problem ...wenevr i read smthng totally senti na ..smthng dat touches my heart...i loose my speech ..words start to fail me ...nd i end up NOT commenting on updates, VMs siggies dat i like d most ...weird hai naa...

it is ur BEST work till date ...absolutely B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.... dats d only wrd to describe it...

d frnshp dat dey shared ...d love dat dey had fr eachother...nd d sacrifice dey did fr eachoder ...truly heartwrenchng...like u said ..can totally imagine PriDa in dis scenario ...

nd yes dey will stay in our heart FOREVER


Jhappiz to u fr dis lovely OS

--Khwahish😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaish.e.arsh


it is ur BEST work till date ...absolutely B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.... dats d only wrd to describe it...
..can totally imagine PriDa in dis scenario ... nd yes dey will stay in our heart FOREVER
Jhappiz to u fr dis lovely OS
--Khwahish😊



OS are fictional creative work dat is written wid full on energy
Read by few, Discussed by few, and soon Forgotten by all.

Den comes sumone who digs up da archives and makes da writer very bery happy.
Sincere thanxxX for ur kind words.
Like i alwaz say, Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum.
Too much of saccharine sweetness can cause tooth decay,
hence while writing everyday humor thru mah works...
every once in a while i dabble at making sumone cry.

NO i didna wish u to cry wen u read it again... but if u did...
den i take it as a valid compliment to mah imagination.


Trust Me, It Helps reading such heartfelt comments
dat encourage da writers to share der imagination wid da viewers
'
skorpion.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: skorpion



OS are fictional creative work dat is written wid full on energy
Read by few, Discussed by few, and soon Forgotten by all.

Den comes sumone who digs up da archives and makes da writer very bery happy.
Sincere thanxxX for ur kind words.


skorpion.




Panna trust me wen i say dis ...the wonderful writers of dis forum DESERVE all that effort and more ...PriDa r very special to me and d credit for dat goes to d CVs , d actors and ALSO to dis wonderful forum and its writers ...who r keeping dere memories alive in our hearts. 👏
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