Chup tum raho- New PRIDA SS Update on Pg 24 - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gauchalover

Sia needs youtube link please unabble to watch it


Momma its in YT only
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey sia thanks for d pm loved d promo waitin for an update keep writing - akshata 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sia...
Nice promo's...!!! Now update soon...waiting eagerly...!!
-Nitika
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Posted: 14 years ago
good promo di...
continue soon...
waiting for you update...

-mah
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice promos sia... lekin update kab karogi..is the next part the last part... i thought so from the promo..
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sia...
Very nice Promo VMs dear. I especially liked the CTR one..always liked the song. And the PriDa scenes were perfectly synchronized to the lyrics.
Good Job👍🏼
Khushi.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunny4

lovely update but short keep doing well and continue😊



Thanks for liking it!😊

Originally posted by: Kanchan.S

OMG Sia i was dead shock when Damz told Pri to remove his shirt off... 😉

than after reading next line that she ordered him to do 100 push ups
wah wat a indirect way to adore the perfect body of her hubby

humara dude sirf 83 push ups karke thak gaya tch tch... must have forgotten to exercise daily ... soch raha hoga kon karega exercise jab samne itne achi biwi hai... must be watching her indirectly

wah wah Pri ki GF's bhi thi.. now thats something interesting coming up


heheh u *C* I sometimes don't mention Certain things which i do while updating u😉han woh toh hai,but we cant let him bloat like that na...so damzi se kaha let him exercise for a while.Hugs da


Originally posted by: Preeths609

ha ha..push ups lolz...whoa i literally stared sweatinhg in dat take off ur shirt ialogue..man i wished i was der...tch tch no prob damz was der to enjoy right..poor prui bahabbi devar jodi tgetrhr s makeing everyday hell for him...


luv de precap savni in lubv lolz..n mr.dhakkan obcviously thinks sumthng else...sia i am realy planning to bang sum sense into his head..can i ??

awesum update..totally luved it :))))))))))))))


haha what could anyone anyway doo when the lady herself took the action😉u wanna bang his head? ok go ahead.
Thanx for liking it da



thanx for liking it...keep reading

Originally posted by: lnmdj_greatfan

awesum update di

nice u made the push ups 100 times, Damzie gt to watch him shirtless that long 😍 i would have fainted just hearin the words 'take off ur shirt' 😉
update soon


yeh that was the idea😉
thanx for commenting keep reading bacha

Originally posted by: Nan08

Sia..


enjoyed the update a lot..damzie luks to b in full form..lvng the babhi-devar combo..poor pri 😆 .. plsss update soon :))


glad u njoyed it da..she has to be in full form now😆


Originally posted by: amiya121

Siaaa my Dear !!

The Update was Super Fun !! Had me Grinning all the way !! 👏😃
So Damzie decides to Punish her hubby and uses the opportunity to Ogle at him ... Wow !! way to go Gal !! 😆😆 How do you come up with these Hilarious ideas... and the Dialogues , especially those of Sameer ... they are too Good !! 😃😃
Now we need to have our PRI taking " Revenge " from his wife !! 😛😃
Great going ...Carry on !! 👏👏
@ Sana's Avi : Too Good ... Perfect for the scene !! 👏
Love
Amiya


Glad u liked it Amy dear
Thankyou so mcuh for those lovely comments pal..Pri's revenge ahh thanx for the idea da...im on it,his revenge is gonna be even more interesting 😉
Thanx again



Originally posted by: sabeen675

superbe update well done


Glad u liked it..keep reading!

Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven

awesome update di...

it was hilarious...
loved it sooo much...
i am in love with this bhabi devar jodi...
poor prithvi...lol...
continue soon di...

-Mah


hey Mah
how r u doing?
Thanx for liking it..



Originally posted by: crazypridaholic

Sia...

😆😆😆...kya kar rahi ho tum...wen she said take off ur shirt I was off balanced 😃😛...!!! LOL n all she ask was 100 pushup's ...!!! BDW Pri also had GF's 😲😆... koi usse batao check ur wifey for once on Howtmeter...!!! It vill crash out of hotness 😛...!!!
Sia great one...had me in splits...continue soon...!!!

-Nitika


It was entirely Damzi's idea..she had those evil intention dnt blame me😉
Oh Pri's GF han we have plenty of them😆 hahah yeh crash hojayega if he checks his wife's numbers😉 Thanx for those lovely comments da


Originally posted by: gauchalover

Awesome update yar 100 pushup kuch zada nahi ho gya lol



Nahi i guess that was more than enough for ua bro😛err ua daamand
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Originally posted by: trisha.89

hey really vry srry 4r d late reply...was full busy...


beautiful updt...


Thanx ra for liking i...malli sorry lu annavankoo chudu😡😆


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Posted: 14 years ago
as i told u earlier both the promos r brilliant
But i prefer CTR one ... N scenes u choosed were going in sync with song
Gr8 job pal
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sonikins and Kanchygals lemmi res a post for the update
usske baad reserve karlena!
my next pots is gonna be the update😆
Edited by sia88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry for da late guys...becoming lazy wid some's asar😆
btw have updated the replies on previous page

UPDATE 8:



The Confession


"Rehendo bhabi kabh aur" Sami timidly backs off


Damini laughs "Tum prithvi say itna darte hoo"
tch tch...

"Nahi ..no no ok i'll tell u" Sami states

Sami says it all,Prithvi's list of GF's ,there description of hawtness..

All where rated not below 8.5-9.0 on Hawtometer.😆

By now Prithvi was all pani pani, his wife stripped him literally but this nautanki isn't sparing his last piece of clothing for that matter.

This bhabi devar jodi is proving very dangerous for me



Damini was both shocked and jealous at the same time hearing those great tales of her (till now) shy hubby

This took her a while to digest ,she says rather in a heedless way "I didn't know that you have so much...ah..ahem..That 'Sadu' was so popular in his college days."she said casually

"WHAT!!" Prithvi shouts a little shocked too, he then continues "What did u say just now?"
" You where popular" she replies ."No before that" a Prithvi
"I didn't know you where so popular" she utters confusingly
"Noo even before that!" he says.
"What do you think im a fwd -rev button to repeat again n again Mr SADU"a vexed-up wife
Prithvi was now fuming

"NAUTANKI!!! tu ne yeh bhee bata diyaa!!!" Prithvi while chasing Sami with an intention to at-least break his bones if not Kill

"Tujhe toh ..rok" Prithvi trying to catch Sami .
Now Sami was running for his life as Prithvi was behind him with all the maksad to kill him.

Damini tries to stop him but he never listens.

"Tum hatoo Damini, aaj mujhe koi nai roksakta. Tum bhee iss nautanki ..Tumhain toh main baad main dekhlungaa" Pri tries to catch hold of Sami when Damzi comes for his rescue.
"Dekhle teri hee biwi hai" a notorious friend

"Tu ruk ,tujhe abhee dekhata hoon" Pri tries to catch Sami who was now hiding behind Damini
"Bhabi,bhabhi bachaoo!!" Sami holding Damzi
"Damini just move, hatjaoo, usse toh aaj bhagwaan bhe nai bacha sakte"a furious Pri

"Oh God! P-R-I-T-H-V-I hill rai hai bachaooo!!!" Sameer Mocks at him

By saying this Sami pushes Damini with such force that Prithvi-Damini fall on the Couch and escapes to a safe distance from Prithvi.

There cheeks brush hard as they both are fall,his warm breath on her shoulders was making her crazy.Heat was on between them, for the first time they both felt each others body. They rather welcomed these new feelings, there wasn't any room for awkwardness this time,may be they both wanted this,but somehow couldn't realize the fact that they started to like each other.That moment which they felt for a life time, sami stands at distance from them feeling happy thinking 'itna tak toh dhakkan khula' as they stare each other without blinking quite long ,sami spots someone coming in
"oh i hate this woh bhe to sucha lovely couple" Sami cursing in his mind
"ahem ahem" sami cuts there streaming emotions,they get out of the trance and part away ."Yeh sab kya hora hai han?" Sami with a naughty smirk.

"Yeh Hall hain, ye romance shomance karana hain toh find some other corner.Sami embarrass them.
They both now stand right and fix themselves up,and wish Sami good nite and start towards there bbedroom... "Kya dono jare hain?oh yeh continue this scene in ur bed room"Samii at his naughtiest best for which pri throws a pillow towards him.


The next day sami asks his dearest Bhabhi abt proposing a gal."Bhabhi bhabi plz aur kuch hai that im missing or u forgot to tell?"
" mujh pay shak karte ho?"she replies sternly
"Nai bhabi woh u see mere dost ke sangat main rehke kahin aap bhee ussiki tarha toh nai bangayee ho"Sami says
"Oyee,mend ua ways or ua gonna get it from me one day..yor are talk abt my husband!"damzi firmly
Sami wears a sheepish expression
"Plz bhabi sirf aap hee mujhe help karsakte hoo,bolo na plz bolona bolonaaa"Sami bugs
This was the nth time that sami was bugging damini for more details about proposing a girl,Sami
"Ohho Sameer ,mujhe kaise pata hoga ek ladki ko kaise propose karte hain?"
" nobody proposed me :(poor gal replies

By these words from damini, Sami gets confirmed that all is really not well between PRIDA
He then determines that he will make Prida realize there love for each other.

The next evening Sami calls Avi up and they decide to meetup in a restaurant
Avi enters the restaurant and she is amazed to see all the decor there everything was just so perfect,she felt as if she has come to some fairyland





With all the beautiful floral's which had her favorite one's too,the perfect blend of Rose and Carnations
The decor was simple and monochromatic.

"Hey sab kya hain sameer?" a surprised Avi
"u like it?" Sami asks

"Like? I Love it, its so beautiful here"an esthetic Avi
"Hmm..i love it too"Sami
"Umm..what would u have ma'am" Sami
"Something light"she replies

"Oh so ur on a diet hun" Sami winks
"Haaha no,just like that"she says
"Tum bill ki fikar mat karo,eat king size"Sami taunts

"looks like tumhare pass bahut paisa hai,agar tumhain paise karachneka itna hee shauk hain toh umm bring me a diamond" Avi's counter

" hmm...tumhain bhaut jaldi hain ring ki"he mumbles
"Kya"Avi asks
"N..no nuthin" he replies
they had a peaceful dinner there and both of them starts towards the car...the breeze blows softly plays with avi's hair spreading her hair making her even more divine under the moonlight


Sami then started
'Aa..' he could only manage to say that,her presence,her aura near him made his sense crazy.
On the other hand she was enjoying the wind flirting with her hair.she too liked his company.But the unnamed feelings about him where left unexplained,almost stacked in her.There was one part in her which was in complete denial and the other never braved to come forth to come in terms with the reality.
Then Sami backed off thinking to stay in that moment,live that very moment of silence with her,one never know what one have to see the next moment

Damini had to endure with her husbands impossible dhakkan-giri

Somewhere at the middle of teh night,damini spots Sami standing near the window,lost in his thoughts..She slowly goes near him and puts her hand gently on him.
"Sameer" she calls him breaking his thoughts
"Bhabhi i think i love her..i love her deeply,a moment away from Avi is like unbearable for me now" Sami with a shaky voice.
"Sameer i think its time,u should tell avni what u feel about her" Damini suggests

Sami gets into the car and stops before a very elegant looking mansion.
"This is it Sameer,today u will have to confess her about your Love for her.
he then searches for a window with all the creepers. Avi loved greenery since childhood she had this passion abt these lovely creation of God. she always cared for the trees.she was an environmentalist,that's how Sami could sport out her room..he somehow climbed up the

Avi 'Will You Marry Me'
"I Love u madly and deeply..i dont know how or when did this happen,but the only thing important to me is u,just u"

Sami utter these words with intensity.
Tears dropped from Avni's eyes, as she hears him say those precious words.No one eva said those 3 words to her,she felt so special that for a moment words didnt come out of her mouth.she then cleared them hurriedly

Sami was standing there with hope in his eyes,those shining eyes told her the... of his heart.

Avni came back to the earth when she realizes the hour at which Sameer intruded into her room.
Samee..tum ..itne raat ko...yeh sab..agar koi agaya toh..kisine tumhain dekha...before she could utter any other fragmented sentence he closed her mouth with his palm...looking into her eyes softly,conveying his love to her

Avi then breaks the trance,feeling unenviable with the new admirer around,she then says "kya abhe bolna zaroori hai?"she says in a polite manner turning around

"Nahi bilkul nahi,u can reply when u really feel it for me..i will wait for that day" a sweet Sami
He leaves her there with many hopes and dreams

After hours of sorting things out Avi comes to the understanding that she does 'Love' him.She remembers all the dinners,lunches they had together and how he was protective about her when she had to go alone to a certain village for her NGO work and all those moments they spent with each other.They both knew eachother for 3years now,the first time when they met at some charity function ,it was he who gave huge sum of money to the NGO,at that time he was a little shrewd and arrogant and that was one big turn off for her.As time passed on they come to know one another and there grew a bond between them .

There was a 'BUT' here..how would she confess her Love for him? But then Sami made things simple for her,but still she was a shy girl and now it was her turn to tell him how much she loved to be with him.somewhere deep inside she knew that he was the one for her,she accepted him as he was oh yeh with those funny antics of his.but he was not like some guy who impress gals just had fun n stuff..ney he was sensible,humorous ,understanding , handsome,smart,intelligent and above all really did loved her In spite of all this she did rethink about her decisions cause its her life,she has to be with him for this life if she married him.can she tak the risk the decision of her life in such a short notice?
She gets back to sleep for the day,for such an eventful day.

Sameer and Avni met again,this time things where very different between them,after Sami's proposal.Avni felt very awkward and through out there meeting couldn't dare to look into his eyes,she hardly looked at his face.

Sameer understood why she shy-ed away from him he just knew what was to Be done next,he then asks her to meet him again at a restaurant and bids her bye


Sami comes to Damini and requests her to meet Avni and talk to her.

At the restaurant

Sameer introduces them both and leaves them making an excuse in order to make his gal comfo and open up to atleast his bhabhi.
Damini starts slowly by taking to her about random things like what she does,what she likes and shopping was the best topic that any gal could talk,talk volumes on.Both Damini and Avni had a great time chatting and they did made plans for shopping the nnext time they meet.

"Bhabi bhahi kya hua,kya kahan Avi ne?" an excited Sami
"Sameer,what i got to know abt ur gal from our chat is that she is a perfect girl"replies Damini
"Oh yeh i know she is perfect for me,that's why i chose her"cuts Sameer
"LOL itna confidence,waise i was talking in general,she has a very good tongue,very simple life and she has great ideals,she is perfect for any guy" Damini informs
"whateva bhabhi,i chose her now" Sameer proudly says

"Yeh ur lucky" she pokes fun at

"Sameer look there is one important thing i want to tell u,what ever happens u should never hurt her,she is very sensitive and pure heartted" Damzi advices
"Yes bhabhi i will never let hurt touch her" he assures

A few days later Damini ,Sameer and Avni meet up at a mall
"Sameer i think we dont need u,ur job is done u can go we will call you when we are done with the shopping"Damini says
"Arere bhabhi i can wait ,just 1-2 hrs is ok with me,u go i'll wait here" Sameer replies
"Sameeerr,we will call u when needed ,as far as the shopping is concerned its gonna take about 5-6hrs for to just decide what we want to take and we both can catch up with some lunch too so the day is booked just pick us up while coming back from the office"Damini with a little smile
"Ek min bhabhi what are u doing?"Sameer takes his bhahi to a corner
"Patience devarji Patience, im just making her more comfortable she is very sweet ,she will open up baba" Damzi explains
"Ok bahbhi all hope on u,u both tc"Sami cries

"Ohho abhee say inta possessive han" Damzi teases
Sami a little embarrassed leaves them both there and starts to his office

Both Damini and Avni chat,shop and have wonderful time,Avi opens up to damini and share many of her personal interests,likes dislikes,her passion her vision for the world..Damini was quite impressed with her.

Damini returns to Saxena house with Sami
"So?"Sami inquisitively
"Sameer i think you wont find a better wife than her"Damini complements Sami's choice
"BHhabbhi thanq so much i love u bhabhi,ur the best" Sami excitedly
Pri watches all this from a corner,confused not knowing what was now cooking btw this dangerous combo

"Yeh sab kis baat ki itne excitement hai?" Pri asks damzi " And why was Sami sayin I love u to u?" Pri again speaks without letting her answer his first question
"Offo Prithvi stop acting like a possessive husband,jo tumne nahi kaha atleast he is try i make me feel good,let us be"an angry wife,not that she was desperate for her husbands attention but she was sick n tired of his Dhakkaness.
"Arre abhe maine kya pucha and ur changing the topic?"Pri wid a frown
"Prithvi,i think Topic yahe thaa humesha se,but don't know why u didn't realize it?"sayin this she goes to the wash room to freshen up leaving a Dhakkan full of embarrassment and guilt

As days pass by Damini and Avni get to know eachother very well,almost like soul sisters.Damini proved to be a stronger bridge between SAVNI ,she was able to understand Avni's personality more clearly

One fine evening as Sameer was pondering deep on something
"Sameer its a YES!!" Damini informs excitedly
"WHHAT!!"Sami amazes

"Yeh sab,kab i mean,why didnt she say that to me??"he continues

She called me this morning damzi says


"Bhabhi how r u doing?"Starts Avni

"Hello im good,u wanna come for shopping with me today?"Damini replies
"No bhabhi i called u for an entirely different thing"Avni says
"yeh tell me,what is that u wanna say?"Damini asks

"Umm..Bhabhi hm..um"Avi hesitates
"What is it Avni?"Damini inquires

"Bhabhi ..mm..the other day You said that there is someone made of u and u just need to meet him?"Avni
"Yes"Damini

"Well bhabhi i guess i found my soul-mate" avni replies a little shyly
"Ohho so at last u realized ur love with my sweetest devar hun" Damini contently
"Hmm.."she replies
"Im so happy for both of you"Damini replies

"Sameer she is shy u both should meet very often so that she opens up to u as she did to me ok?"Damini advices him
that's it Sameer congrats m so excited abt the wedding

"Bhabhi thanq so much for everything "a grateful Sami
"Oyee maar khana hai kya eyh thanx vanx kya hai? abhe itna formal honeke kya zaoorat nai hai"Damzi slappin Sami's head


With in a few weeks SAVNI's wedding was planned
As sami has no family to celebrate his happiness with ,Prithvi's family decides taht the wedding is to be taken place at Saxena mansion
Sami's wedding takes place in Prida's home...so before the wedding there was a party.In The party they all danced, jumped n got crazy..even drink a little,they had the best fun in their lives..

After everyone retire to there resp..homes only Prida,Savni n a few close friends wid their wives stay
and they decide to play like spin the bottle
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Thank you all🤗 for those encouraging comments and immeasurable amount of patience to keep on readin this stuff😛

Sorry for the late😳





Edited by sia88 - 14 years ago

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