PriDa OS: Of Dreams and other things

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totalweirdo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

hey maham aapi !

u noe wat ???

u r a fabulous writer !!!🤗 😃 😍

u should write ffs too !!

everyone would love to read them !!

just loved it !!

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Awesome Maham! Loved every bit of it!! As always it was a beautiful piece of work!

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Mrunal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Maham Babe... 🤗

Good to see you back in action ...

if this is pointless .. then I want MORE ... 😃

i have always wondered what Damziee's reaction would be when she learned that it was Pri who held her hand and threw her beloved gun away in that incident .. hehehe

loved the way you incorporated it ...

write more since your exams are now done

-- Mru

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Darakhshan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

maham u knw u r a absolutely awsum written .. nd make us love prida more nd more again nd again ,,

love u fo tht gurl =D

btw this was a lovely os ,, great 1 infact !

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

amazingly funny and sizzling hot and of course romantic! loved it!

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rucha1992

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Wow maham...that was awsome !!! 👏...great portrayal of prida feelings...poor damz feelin guilty n pri makin her understand...damz pure loyalty towards pri is jus woonndeeerfulllll...!!!

Plz write more sweety.....

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jakhushi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Hey Maham,

I always feel that dreams are truly are a window to human sub-consciousness and thus Damini worrying about the implications of her dream made perfect sense to me.

In this OS, you have captured the essence of PriDa perfectly....their feelings of loyalty towards each other, their comittment, their understated love. Whether it was Damini's worry of being disloyal to Prithvi or Pri understanding Damini's discomfort without any words being spoken.

That definitely made PriDa special...amongst some other things that start with Ch😉😛...😆😆.

The OS was beautifully written ....no surprises there.

Hope to see loads more from you....miss PriDa expressed through your words. But preferably only after the 10th.

And 'I hope, sincerely hope'😉 all these lovely comments about your writing is able to convince you that this was very far away, infact the exact opposite of "pointless".

Really sorry for the late comment.

- Khushi.

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maham

@...Maham...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: gauchalover
excellent sweety

Thanks Soni.. 😊

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maham

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: aparajhita
Maham,🤗 Apsy..! 🤗
Dear you are a brilliant writer you know that? *grins* really? 😆 thanks..!

Fabulous, brilliant, outstanding, fantastic and lovely part.👏 thanks alot pal...

Loved the way Damini was feeling guilty about that dream. I mean she could not even think of thinking about a man other than Prithvi, and that's what's called "True Love". yeah.. true.. 😊

And then, i was seriously trying to imagine Prithvi's reaction when he came to know that Damini was thinking about him and Damini's reaction when she came that the man was none other than Prithvi.

Lovely work Maham.

And a request, if you write anything in future then please PM me, I would love to read your stuff. sure will do.. i do have two more OS's and one FF to my credit.. no idea whether u have already read them though..

Thanks.

Love,
Apsy.

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maham

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: gk_fan
oh it was simply sweet damni confused abt her feelings and pri as usual bigest support loved it

plz.... keep on writing

it was realy awsome

Thanks alot.. glad you liked it. 😊

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