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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -Sid-

ssss. the girl is sonia. damini toh manali me milegi. you wrote that already.

loved the ff. continue soon



sid bro didnt you read damini went manali for summers only :P , it could be her also
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow awesome part loved it cont soon



thnx dear glad you liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 3


,its sonia , she smiled to him and came further , she thought that prithvi is lost in her beauty that's y hes stunned there (what a donkey ), prithvi started to look here and there , what man she is same as she used to be , her presence didn't even giv a lil effect on his heart or mind , she came closer and said hi prithvi smiling mischievously, and gave her hand for hand shake , hi sonia prithvi did hand shake , she gripped his hand so tightly, he asked her if they could go in side , on that point prithvi got his hand back , uhhh thank god ! prithvi sighed , … few hours later she left , they discussed their likes and dislikes , she talked too much , that much that prithvi's ears started to ring , when he said to her he would like to give a chance to their parents decision she hugged him , it was very tough for him to get his custody back , he was laying on his window , he looked towards the moon , he imagined moon most beautiful thing that god created , he had unknown questions in side him but didn't understand something …
He gulped thrice , he was thirsty , ela and roshni slept beside him neither of them wanted to leave him for an instance , ela heard him , she made him drink water , she got up and saw her two kids who are deeply hurt and reason behind this was her , where the things started and none guessed about it , she knew that it was a mistake this all ended badly but she knew it would be improved , she took her mobile and dialed number , she tired many times but none replied , she wondered whats wrong with her ?
'Varun tum mera kam ker rahey ho ya nah?" asked varun's elder sister in anger , " do , ma ko pata chala toh ?" "dehko varun tum mera kam kar rahey ho I cant live like this , mujhey job karni hai ok ! , now take my CVs and submit them to the respective companies about whom I told you !" , varun had no choice , he knew if his ma came to know this there be blast in home , and if he didn't do this his sister is gona kill him for sure or make will take revenge more badly, he skipped put of the room and found avni di damini's friend standing on the door listening them , she signaled varun to relax she will take it under control , " hey damini ", damini turned towards door and brought up big smile , and screamed "AVNI ? tum yahan " , "han me yahan , me tumhe lene ahyi hoon " , , " lene ?" ," meri shadi hai dufer" ."WHAT?" , avni replied shyly "han" , damini ran and huggd her tightly , "oh avni tum be shadi ker ke chali jao gii " , damini's mother popped out and said "tumhe bhi toh jana hai ek din " , "ma me kahi nahi janey wali apne ma aur papa ko chor ke " , "aisa nahi khete beta sab ko jana hota hai , tum log bheto me kuch bana ke leke ahti hoon " , avni and damini chatted long , and then they went off for wedding shopping , " damini tum bhi shadi ke liye kyun nahi sochti ? " , damini rolled her eyes and thought yeh bhi shuru ho gai , "avni yar shadi aur me , bhuaat muskil baat hai yar " , "damini aisa mat kaho , I know ek din tum yeh baat zarur samjho gi ke shadi life me bhuaat acha change lati hai aur tumhare liye bhi laye g , don't worry , ab toh mujhey tumhare prince charming ka intezar hai " , " ah, avni please prince charming plastic dolls hotey hain , I want someone tough enough more tough than me jo koi hai nahi " and they both laughed …
Her eyes began to flow , she sat silently in her room in a corner , she thought prithvi didn't deserve this , his life became heaven to hell , this shouldn't happen in reception , she saw someone calling , she didn't bother to even look it , damini wondered what should I do now ? , idea pooped in her head to ask him to meet , she thought if she could call him and meet , may be he could say yes , she picked up her phone and saw there were several miss calls from ela gujral , she thought she will talk to her afterwards but first prithvi , she dialed prithvi's number , its ringing come on man pick up , someone answered , a lady answered , "hello , damini where the hell are you , I have been calling you ! " ela replied on prithvi's phone , " I am sorry I couldn't reply " damini answered hesitating , " listen I want to meet you" , " I wana meet prithvi first " , " he can't but come home , I want things to be cleared and forget " ,ela ended the phone and looked towards prithvi , he was still unconscious and looking helpless , she knew things were gone extrme worst but I hope when he gets up his listens to us .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
good but sad update... Hope Pri meets Damini in the next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: loveness

good but sad update... Hope Pri meets Damini in the next part...



thnx loveness , keep ur hope tight
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
good part,but little suspensic,update as fast becoz then i will be killed becoz of curiousity
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
hey i m neelam.and what a gr8 part.like it.1 day and 2 update i love it.update soon. 😛 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
hey ...fab FF
already luv it
the suspense is gr8
eagerly waitin 4 the nxt update

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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

good part,but little suspensic,update as fast becoz then i will be killed becoz of curiousity



suspense me maza hai , please please dont die , i wont be able to update till a day , i have no surety i can upload it because i am leaving for another country and i dont know wheter i would get wi fi there or not!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: njjoshi

hey i m neelam.and what a gr8 part.like it.1 day and 2 update i love it.update soon. 😛 😛



hey neelam , nice to meet you
tnx neelam , i had written it before so uploaded in two , i am trying to balance the suspense na , i cant say when i am going to update nest sorry dear

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